Darth Abyss
Eldritch
Yo.
I think it has been a while since I last threw up one of those, so I guess it's time for another round of feedback.
Not that much has changed for Abyss, he reclaimed Malachor, has a new apprentice and is currently setting up a resistance cell for the upcoming event. Besides that he is pretty much just chilling in his temple below the sea being creepy and stuff.
Yeah, so tell me how am I doing with Abyss as a character, and did I improve as a writer (I feel like I did a bit, but it's kinda hard to tell lol)? Be honest, harsh but constructive criticism is the best sort of feedback after all.
I think it has been a while since I last threw up one of those, so I guess it's time for another round of feedback.
Not that much has changed for Abyss, he reclaimed Malachor, has a new apprentice and is currently setting up a resistance cell for the upcoming event. Besides that he is pretty much just chilling in his temple below the sea being creepy and stuff.
Yeah, so tell me how am I doing with Abyss as a character, and did I improve as a writer (I feel like I did a bit, but it's kinda hard to tell lol)? Be honest, harsh but constructive criticism is the best sort of feedback after all.
