Feedback: Dubiety Edition

[Kahlil Noble]

Been writing Dubiety for a while since my return now. I think. Sorta. Maybe it's been a while. Certainly feels like it! Anyway. As per the new namechange yep, he's a Zambrano doing his Sithy thing to try and show off to his Father and build up his powerbase (Which has been wonderfully fun so far). He's got a long way to go but I think being a sorcerer like this has been a blast! And I'm curious as to what other folks think, so lemmi know below~

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

[member="Kahlil Zambrano"]

I wish Dubiety would like, reply to my PMs so we can thread!

 

[Allya Vi'Dreya]

I admit, I enjoy your writing. I've been reading your threads since I joined. You have your flaws, but you've always made up with it from the passion of your writing. I admit, I'm a bit of a copycat, your own adventures, and the struggles of your character trying to please his father, and rarely getting there, was one of the inspirations for my own Allya.

Daughter of a powerful Sith Lord/Leader of a nation, seeking out his approval, rarely ever getting it.

You are a good writer, putting a lot of fun into your posts, and emotion into your characters. You are an inspiration, and I love your writing. So keep at it! I look forward to all the stories you write up!

[member="Kahlil Zambrano"]