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Feedback and Critiques: MSA

Since I'm new, I figured I'd post a thread here to get some feedback and critiques on my current writing form and gain areas of improvement. Please feel free to point out my flaws and areas that I need to focus on improving. Currently I have only one character and am partaking in my first thread in the private forum under the title "An Unlikely Pair" located here:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/145750-an-unlikely-pair/

Any help would be greatly appreciated.
 

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