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Factory Submission Modifications

This seems to be a bit of a bugbear at the moment. It’s a slow process for members and hits a single point of failure. Even if Tef is looking to add some resilience there.

Why don’t we just…not do it?

Why don’t we extend the Salvage rules and make people resubmit technology when there is a significant change. E.g. if someone wants a tier upgrade they resubmit their company as a Tier 4. The original submission then gets tagged with something akin to “Salvaged” tag.

Advantages:
Factory Judges could potentially deal with modifications on their own.
Each update to the submissions would be judged for balance
All part of one streamlined process.

Disadvantages:
Might get some issues with people resubmitting items that are from old days when there may have been different standards.
Can judges change the tags on old submissions?

Mitigations:
Need guidelines for judges that say that old submissions are grandfathered in, but that adding capability to a submission needs it gets judged fresh. However, original submissions should be looked at carefully. (i.e. I can say “You need to do dev to add that to your sub” but I can’t say “you need to dev this ship because its too powerful even though you’re only changing the manufacturer”)
Give factory judges permissions to change old tags (if we don’t already have)

[member="Spencer Jacobs"]
 
The factory is already clogged up as it is without adding minor modifications onto this.

We are a volunteer service, and not everyone is able to pick up things right away much the less do so for subs that are just some modifications.

Then it really gets into grandfathered items. No one has been forced to change anything if it's been grandfathered, and this forces them to have to submit to new guidelines. Guidelines that will have to consider are vastly different from the rest.

We've gotten up to 26 or more mod requests just for affiliation changes. Picture chances, addition of some small thing, production.

That would just completely wreck the factory. Why work harder when we don't have to.

All that has to be done is have mods done at a set and reasonable schedule.
 
[member="Cira"]

For context on wrecking the factory

We've approved 120 technology subs that came in after the first of January,

We've had 7 submission modification requests.

People would still be limited to 3 subs at a time. How many times have we had more than 3 things change affiliation in the last year?



So...why can't we just let all judges do mods?

[member="Cira"] [member="Spencer Jacobs"]
 
[member="Raziel"]



Kelly Perris said:
Submission Name: Shrike-Class Interceptor, U-Wing
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/1779-shrike-class-interceptor-u-wing/
Reason for Modification: Update due to previous faction contract/affiliation having ended.
Modification: Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.


Submission Name: A-36 Sleuth
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4554-a-36-sleuth
Reason for Modification: Affiliation update
Modification:
Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.

Submission Name: XA-5 X-Wing
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/3569-xa-5-x-wing
Reason for Modification: Update due to previous faction contract/affiliation having ended.
Modification:
Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.

Submission Name: T-90 Arrow Starfighter
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/24808-t-90-arrow-starfighter/
Reason for Modification: Update due to previous faction contract/affiliation having ended.
Modification: Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.

Submission Name: Incisive-Class Dropship
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/24887-incisive-class-dropship/
Reason for Modification: Update due to faction contract/affilation having ended.
Modification: Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.

Submission Name: Serpent-Class Interceptor
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/27321-serpent-class-interceptor
Reason for Modification: Update due to faction contract/affiliation having ended.
Modification: Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.

Submission Name: Venom-Class Elite Starfighter
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/27524-venom-class-elite-starfighter
Reason for Modification: Update due to faction contract/affiliation having ended.
Modification: Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.

Submission Name: XJ-37 X-Wing TE
Link to Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/55167-xj-37-x-wing-te/
Reason for Modification: Update due to faction contract/affiliation having ended.
Modification: Please change affiliation to 'Open Market'.

Submission Name: Espada-Class Stealth Transport
Link to Submission:http://starwarsrp.net/topic/24972-espada-class-stealth-transport
Reason for Modification: Update due to faction contract/affiliation having ended.
Modification: Please change affiliation to 'Closed Market (Galactic Alliance and Allies; Select ARIN customers)'




Samael Rekali said:
Reason for Modification: The upcoming merger between the Lords of the Fringe and the Primeval makes for changes in the Factory affiliation.
Modification: Affiliation change from The Lords of the Fringe to Primeval | Iron Crown Enterprises | Closed Market
Dev Thread: [x]

Submissions:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10822-finality-class-supertransport/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9895-aeron-class-medium-bomber/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9896-tempest-class-light-bomber/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10216-aeseth-class-space-superiority-fighter/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10752-tetrica-class-assault-fighter/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11842-adara-class-corvette/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10580-detryte-class-heavy-bomber/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11991-spewer-class-assault-ship/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4923-talon-class-starinterceptor/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/5050-raven-class-light-frigate/
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16217-rancor-space-station/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20575-the-atsushi/[/SIZE]
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11152-predator-class-battle-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10261-the-hammer-landing-craft/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11290-dominance-class-star-dreadnought/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11153-guardian-class-defensive-battle-station/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9837-renown-class-star-frigate/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9524-lwhekk-aleph-class-manufacturing-ship/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9615-final-cut-dragon-class-heavy-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9661-animus-class-assault-courier/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9861-rdi-deathhead-class-heavy-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10401-permanence-class-battleship/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10374-wasp-b-heavy-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10217-diathim-class-interceptor/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9871-judicial-class-prison-frigate/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10861-dreadhawk-gunship/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9893-sharyd-class-race-fighter/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11831-lee-class-star-destroyer/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/10828-resolute-class-supercarrier/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11833-jun-class-carrier/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/14801-examen-class-starfighter/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16803-imperial-ii-class-star-destroyer-chimaera/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17213-sanguinem-comitissa/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17396-sara-toga-class/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18150-anathema-class-star-destroyer/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18244-hades-class-gunship/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18243-artemis-class-starfighter/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18241-solar-spear-class-assault-barge/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19490-gehenna-class-frigate/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20878-sekairo-class-stealth-transport/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/20929-bobison-class-world-defender/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/21856-imperial-ii-class-star-destroyer-eclipse-prime/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/22727-partisan-class-technological-warfare-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/23258-hammer-b-class-light-assault-craft/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/23406-aurora-class-frigate/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/23342-pyrrhus-class-dropship/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/22895-penumbra-class-interdictor/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/24663-rx-102-sovereign-class-heavy-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/25680-defensor-class-anti-missile-vessel/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/25753-hood-class-fire-support-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/28138-agano-class-battlecruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/29124-h155-3-maelstrom-mark-iii-hiss-hiss-submunition-drone/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/25765-azazoth-class-flak-cruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/30551-attrition-class-light-star-destroyer/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/42670-attrition-class-light-star-destroyer-mark-ii-attrition-ii-class/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/4693-the-chimaera/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11740-chrysalide-class-battlecruiser/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/6100-dzuari/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/35358-ovmar-class-space-station/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19117-seroth-class-frigates-ferocity-and-defiance/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17753-the-coldharbor/
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11833-jun-class-carrier/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12834-isard-i-imperial-star-destroyer/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/18792-isard-ii-refit-class-star-destroyer/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12832-tarkin-i-imperial-star-destroyer/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/6636-nimix-heavy-cruiser/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9498-nuruodo-class-star-destroyer/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12365-gyon-class-heavy-cruiser/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11005-panther-class-carrier/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9805-phoenix-class-destroyer/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11831-lee-class-star-destroyer/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19083-pellaeon-class-mark-ii-star-destroyer-update/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9759-chimera-class-carrier/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17396-sara-toga-class/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12829-the-isc-hetzer/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/19536-unity-class-cruiser/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/8372-oscuras-corvette/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9555-cheunh-class-corvette[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9996-trident-interceptor/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/16647-mouse-lander/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/6649-graul-class-dropship/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/8229-kirtok-class-attack-ship/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12843-gorgon-class-bomber/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/9851-ghost-bomber/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11883-chwei-class-bomber/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11674-oracle-class-interceptor/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11888-tie-katar/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12835-is-bsf-m-g1-legionnaire/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/2604-borvo-starfighter/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11829-tie-qiang/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/2614-arok-starfighter/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/11830-naginata-class-starfighter/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/6683-vaughan-fighter/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12833-is-ssf-m-a2-bombard/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.6667px]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/12824-the-praetorian/[/SIZE]




Aeron Kreelan said:



Ali Hadrix said:
Submission Name: C1 Defender Adaptive Shield Array and Targeting Uplink
Submission Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/61880-id-c1-defender-adaptive-shield-array-and-targeting-uplink/
Reason For Modification: Increased Production Need
Modification: Change production from "Unique" to "Limited" / Addition of "Galactic Republic" and "CSAF" to Affiliation

Submission Name: C1M2A MAT-TE
Submission Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/55817-c1m2a-mat-te-armored-attack-walker/
Reason For Modification: Increased Production Need
Modification: Change production from "Unique" to "Limited" / Addition of "Galactic Republic" and "CSAF" to Affiliation

Submission Name: Verpine Assault Rifle
Submission Link: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53414-verpine-assault-rifle/
Reason For Modification: Increased Production Need
Modification: Change production from "Unique" to "Limited" / Addition of "CSAF" to Affiliation




Gir Quee said:
Submission Name: LLT-2 Seure-class Cannon
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Modification: Company looks to widen its cashflow by expanding its customer base
Modification: add affiliation "Open Market (with Marketplace Purchase)"

Submission Name: LLT-8 Triumph-class Light Quad Turbolaser
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Modification: Company looks to widen its cashflow by expanding its customer base
Modification: add affiliation "Open Market (with Marketplace Purchase)"

Submission Name: LLT-15 Sentinel-class Point Defense Emplacement
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Modification: Company looks to widen its cashflow by expanding its customer base
Modification: add affiliation "Open Market (with Marketplace Purchase)"


Kitsune said:
I would like to remove the affiliation (and subsequent mention in the intent) of the Shadow Dynasty from several designs:

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/47646-ii-eea-phobium-based-powercell/ (Remove Shadow Dynasty from Affiliation, should only be Inari Shogunate)
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/48983-akurojinnohi-class-heavy-repeating-blaster/ (Remove Shadow Dynasty from Affiliation, should only be Inari Shogunate)
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/47643-kiyohime-class-blaster-rifle/(Remove Shadow Dynasty from Affiliation, should only be Inari Shogunate ; correction of manufacturer's name could be corrected from Izanmi Ironworks to Izanami Ironworks)

Thank you.

I requested this a year ago, but it seems to be forgotten. Break from Shadow Dynasty happened a while back (ICly), and my current affiliation from Shadow Dynasty is completely severed due to the fact that the leader of the time seems to have retired.


Matsu Ike said:
Submission Name:Sasori Joshū
Link to Submission: Sasori Joshū
Reason for Modification: More Research and Upgrades as well as production with additional funding
Modification: Sasori Joshū MK II
Image Source:
Intent: To create a ship and factory based piece of equipment for disposal and recycling as well as minor fabrication
Development Thread:

Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Advanced Molecular Converter
Affiliation: Private Market
Modularity: New designs and variable sizes
Production: Mass
Material:

  • Durlanium Alloy
  • Internal Components
  • Computer Components
  • Holographic Interface
  • Internal Power Reactor
Description:
Built and reversed engineered from Karra, Sasori sought to create a way to add more to the idea of recycling and self sustaining. The converters have been recreated on a scale for factor and starships using duel proton B reactors as its power sources to ease the strain as it works. The converter itself breaks down the materials put into it and with raw matter is able to reconstruct similar materials. The more material to work with is offset by the level of complexity of the object. A computer is designed to store information and keep track of what can be made is set up with the converter to allow voice commands when there is enough power to construct for the user.

With testing and working on things as they built on the technology making it slightly larger and using an adapter to regulate the power and a computer to better design and work on it. A databank of materials able to be constructed with the raw matter and materials they had for use. The technology needing enough raw resources. The final stage while working with Camellia was to ensure they could use. Voice commands and sections for putting in the materials you wish to break down while a second one is used to process and retrieve the constructed items. With the rarity of the technology and obscurity of Karra, Sasori sought to restrict its use on their ships and bases to research, exploration and salvage.

Slowly as she worked with the converters and equipment, Matsu with a deeper understanding of it and the other technology of its type began to upgrade it. Using information found with padawan Keth and grandmaster Corvus Raaf she got an idea of how to create longer lasting power and synthesizing the base materials. The work on what they had done for all they could do before she installed a new converter to feed on ambient energy and more materials. Increased funding from their company allowed her to research other converters within the galaxy to work on finally improving it to produce food, water, air and sections of metal after breaking it down.
Primary Source:


Submission Name: Sigil of Hope
Link to Submission: [x]
Reason for Modification: More Research and Upgrades as well as production with additional funding and technology
Modification: change prefix to approved, change production to minor, changed to fit new template
Amulet.jpg


Image Credits: [x]

Intent: Investigation prize
To cash in our Brawl of the Dead investigations reward and have a Ghost Prison within the Apoligia Nebula secured over Teyan

Grand Total: 319 posts
Development Thread:

Manufacturer: Jedi Master Matsu Ike
Model: Sigil of Hope
Affiliation: Jedi
Modularity: Chain can be changed.
Production: Minor
Material:

  • Aurodium
  • Bronzium
  • Pontite crystal
  • Synthetic tsil crystal
  • Solari crystal
  • Lambent Crystal
Classification: Jewelry
Weight: 0.3 kilograms
Quality: Class It's A Necklace
Other Feature(s):

  • High Mental Shields
  • Generates force energy
  • Tied to the lightside
  • Allows Jedi to Sense Vong
Description:
When the battle of Elrood concluded something happened, the Harvestors plans were enacted and so the message proclaiming "Je'daii" was left unattended until the final battle above Dagobah. Then slowly as the Army of Light tried to regain its footing to fight the sith only a few researchers paid it heed tracking to an unknown world in the deep core. There they found the ruins of an ancient Je'daii ship, inside it was a star map that showed several locations around the galaxy and none of them were Tython the homeworld of the ancient Je'daii.

That raised more questions then it answered as the order set off working their way towards investigation quietly the different worlds. They met some challenges, dealt with the Templars on Ryloth, faced down the dangerous Velok on Ossus, Negotiated with the powerful Siobhan Kerrigan and suave Ayden Cater on Corellia, fought the Gorax on Iridonia, faced the perils of the Witches of Dathomir, braved the shadowlands of Kashyyyk with the Supreme Chancellor Aleidis Ijet and continued to learn the mysteries of the ancient ruins with Je'daii.

The investigations led them deep into the long forgotten histories and regions of the worlds. The perils were great and in the end little information was gleamed beyond pieces of data from ancient datacrons. The notable precursors to holocrons, with it the jedi copied the information leaving for the ones who desired it the prize and gathered. They made way from the deep core into a vertical hyperspace jump pushing them above the galactic plane enough that they found it. A station, still functioning and lost from the days of the ancient Republic. Going inside they found more evidence of the Black Guard and Harvestors.

The station was a sister of the Prism and had been used by someone with lots of hair, that wasn't what was important. The few notes that were around detailing his alchemical work for the dangerous men. Small bits of data on the amulets he had forged on Mustafar in the forge with some supplies left over. Jedi Master Matsu Ike stayed aboard the station as it was pulled towards the deep core and home. While she was there the droids began to work on restoring the prison to full functionality, she worked to replicate his notes work without the dark taint. The neuranium cores that seemed to be alchemically enhanced were unable to be recreated but the rest she found could be. Using pontite crystals the primary purpose of the amulet was recreated albeit in a lesser extent.

The amulet was fashioned different then the ones of Amulet of Tal'ra'kaar or the Amulets of Tal'ra, it became a Sigil of Hope as she saw it. Something the jedi could wear to protect against the dark influence but there was a cost. Since it wasn't created with the powerful alchemical processes of bending and beating nature, science into what you wanted. The mental immunity became a resilience to attacks and influence. (on the scale of the person, a padawan wearing it is stronger against another padawan but weaker to a knight, a knight is immune to a padawan but stronger against a knight while open to a master and a master is immune to a padawan, susceptible to a specialized knight and master) The crystal made feeling ones connection to the force stronger and instilled a sense of calmness within the wearer making their stamina in the force last a little more.

Not infinite amounts of energy but just enough so they didn't fully tire. Removing the necklace seemed to almost drain the wearer for a time making them feel weaker until they put it back on or rested. The amulets also seemed to react much as their counterparts with the amulet of Tal'ra'kaar making it glow as the jedi Master Synlidwirh showed. Its presence causing the core of that amulet to glow and slowly drain on a barely noticed level. Its mental resilience becoming a part of the other amulet and in the presence of several stacking upon it. This works adversely for mental boost like battle meditation or projected emotions but can allow some wearers to communicate with each other when the bond is strong enough between them.


Slowly over time Matsu worked on improving the crystals, getting more in her travels and journeys as well as harvesting or learnign how to work with force techniques and equipment. A holocron from Rave and her own workings with the Jal Shey brought to her attention the multitudes of skills she could do enhancing and enchanting the necklaces with stronger mental defenses and calming from the crystals.

From Rhen Var with Iella she was able to find and gather Solari crystals to make the sigils work more with the jedi and the lightside. She didn't want those who might abuse the powers of them to be able to use them if they found or got them. Slowly as Matsu worked she found the lambent crystals and with them the ability to sense the vong and communicate between the sigils making a direct mental link like a hive between all of them.

Strengths:

  • High Mental Resistance
  • Increase in stamina and force connection when worn
Weakness:
  • Taking the necklace off is sapping
  • Interacts with the amulet of Amulet of Tal'ra'kaar the same way as the Amulets of Tal'ra
Primary Sources:

Submission Name: Murr Earrings
Link to Submission: Murr Earrings
Reason for Modification: More Research and Upgrades as well as production with additional funding and technology
Modification: change prefix to approved, change production to mass, changed to fit new template
Decorative-Earrings.jpg

Intent: To create a decorate item for force users
Development Thread:
Manufacturer: Jedi Researcher Matsu Ike
Model: Jedi enhancing items
Affiliation: Private Market
Modularity: N/A
Production: Mass
Material:
Description: Created in limited pairs by jedi researcher Matsu Ike to honor one of the most dedicated jedi healers for his birthday. The earrings are created from a frame of Duralumin with crystal shards for decoration. Then slowly the researcher poured the force into it to match the goodness of him, the wearer may feel more stamina, more constitution as their bodies radiate with the lightside and calmer increasing focus. However they are not all powerful and do very little when under stress, theearrings are mainly there to keep you calm and focused adding to it. As time has gone on the jedi master with new knowledge and materials, funding and technology has been able to work the earrings into something else. Using crystals recovered from world as well at the power of the for empowered wellspring she worked to build up the power of them. Adding better crystals to it to and with the converters and their technology to increase how many could be produced.

Primary Sources:

Submission Name:Sasori Light Armor
Link to Submission: Sasori Light Armor:
Reason for Modification: More funding from tier increase, new gear from products
Modification: Sasori Light Armor
nightwing_stance_by_vampbeauty-d5hgmhy.jpg
Image Source: [x]
Intent: To create an open market customizable version of the explorers armor
Development Thread: If Needed
Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Sasori Bodysuit MK IV
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: Colors can be customized
Production: Mass Produced
Material:

  • Armorweave Bodyglove
  • Light Duraplast Plating
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 5.5kg
Quality: 10
Special Features:

  • Customizable Colors
Description: Designed as a lightly armored version of their explorers bodysuit and made from deals with the Order of the Grey and secretive Tenevi orders. Matsu and the Sasori researchers have taken more chances mostly in materials, providing duraplast over sections of the armorweave to provide additional protection from low end blaster weapons and knives but lightsabers, most standard weapons and force powers will still harm. The armor is made for speed and providing protection when exploring around the galaxy able to stop rocks and branches from getting through to harm the wearer. The bodyglove regulates the temperature for hot and cold environments and with a proper helmet and breathing equipment attached is sealed for vacuum, however no such equipment is on the base version of the suit. The other major feature as Sasori has started to take itself more seriously is the customizable colors and hand crafted insignias. The force sects such as the Tenevi, Grey and Silver jedi are vastly different and their colors, symbols reflect that in the armor. It provides no more then different looks with the armor to differentiate them.
Primary Source:

Submission Name:Sasori Medium Armor
Link to Submission: Sasori Medium Armor
Reason for Modification: More funding from tier increase, new gear from products
Modification: Sasori Medium Armor
fiora_worbla_by_yayacosplay-d5xcogg.jpg
Image Source: [x]
Intent: To create an open market customizable medium armored version of the explorers armor
Development Thread: If Needed
Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Medium BodyArmor MK V
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: Colors can be customized
Production: Mass Produced
Material:

  • Sasori Rangers
  • Mid-grade Duraplast
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 10.5kg
Quality: 10
Special Features:

  • Customizable Colors
  • Internal Air Supply (60 Minutes)
  • Helmet
    Rebreather
  • Polarized Visor

Description: With their dealing with the order of the Tenevi the secretive force order offered resources and materials of a junk and scrap nature from buildings and construction upkeep to the researchers. The designers at Sasori were able to think of several designs to honor their request for medium grade armor by fashioning duraplast plates that could be put over some parts of the body but not fully impeding movement. Providing the balance of speed and protection needed for the mysterious master of the order himself. As they tried to think of additional ways to protect a sealed helmet with rebreather and visor was merited in case of dangerous situations. The suit preforms the same functions as its lighter counterpart but provides additional protection at the cost of some speed. The trade off is not as sever but the benefit of a helmet with built in rebreather for airborne poisons is helpful.
Primary Source:
Submission Name:Sasori Heavy Armor
Link to Submission: Sasori Heavy Armor:
Reason for Modification: More funding from tier increase, new gear from products
Modification: Sasori Heavy Armor
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Image Source: [x]
Intent: To create an open market customizable heavy version of the explorers armor
Development Thread: If Needed
Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Sasori Bodyarmor MK VI
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: Colors can be customized
Production: Mass Produced
Material:

  • Sasori Gear
  • high Grade Duraplast Plating
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 16kg
Quality: 10
Special Features:

  • Customizable Colors
  • Sealed for Vacuum
  • Shoulder Mounted Scanner
  • Helmet
    2 Hours Oxygen
  • Polarized Visor
  • Rebreather
  • Systems display HUD

[*]Power Cell in knee
Description: Designed at the request of the Tenevi and given a more interesting twist, instead of bulky armor made to stand out the researchers at Sasori crafted and designed a sleeker heavier body armor for use. Customizable colors to change it out and allow for robes to be worn over a high grade duraplast suit of armor offering the best protection at the cost of speed and flexibility. The suits power systems use old model stormtrooper placement having a compartment in the right knee that can swap out power cells and a plate on the left allowing for a kneeling position. The bodysuit down below regulates temperature and a small section of the back is used to store spare oxygen for vacuum conditions. Overall this rare to see suit will suit the Tenevi or whoever else orders it without costing as much. The main downside is the same as all the other suits from Sasori the resistance to lightsabers is minimal to non existent, the armorweave can offer a second or two resistance but will be sliced through same as the duraplast.
Primary Source:

Submission Name: Shinju's Lightsaber
Link to Submission: Shinju's lightsaber
Reason for Modification: Updating submission, broken image
Modification:Upgrades with dev threads, reformated to current template
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Image Source: [x]
Intent: To have a submission for Shinju's lightsabers
Development Thread:

Manufacturer: Shinju
Model: Lightsaber
Affiliation: Personal
Modularity: Crystals can be swapped
Production: Unique (Only One Character)

Material:
  • Crystals
  • Internal Components
  • Phrik
Classification: Lightsaber
Size: One/Two Handed
Length: 1.33m
Weight: 2.5kg
Special Features:

Description: Found by Shinju long ago as a broken saber that over the years she has worked on to improve and construct into a weapon of power for herself. Finding and making crystals throughout the galaxy that allow her to commune and feed off of the pain and emotions of the crystals. She worked to find the different parts to improve it working with the Black Rose after the fall of the Lords of the Fringe to improve the casing and construct a second saber able to interlock with the first and based it off some of the jedi sabers she had encountered. The jolt trapped grip to keep others from using it and the enhanced cutting power from the darkside crystals that went into the saber. the final major components were the soul snare crystals able to be used to trap souls the saber as a shaped casing she could use to feed off of and empower herself.
Primary Source:



Submission Name:Sasori Bodyglove
Link to Submission: Sasori Bodysuit
Reason for Modification: More Research and Upgrades from additional funding
Modification: Upgrades, improvements
[x]
Image Source: Black Widow: Avenger's Age of Ultron
Intent: To create a standard combat bodyglove for the Ranger's
Development Thread:

Lamanarium Acquired
Lamanarium Acquired
Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Sasori Ranger's Attire
Affiliation: Ranger's/Open Market
Modularity: Yes colors can be changed
Production: Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))

Material:
  • Armorweave
  • Hybrid Plexisteel Weave
  • Kinetic Weave
  • Components
  • Micronized Turadium
  • Lamanarium Weave
  • Duraplast Weave
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 4kg
Quality: 8
Special Features:

  • Magno-Grip Palms
  • Power Armor Liner
  • Auto Fitting gel foam
  • Biometric Seals
  • Energy Sinks
  • Blaster Resistant
  • Lightsaber Resistant
  • Self Repairing
  • Combat Deionizer
  • Self Drying Fan with automated voice
  • IFF Circuitry
  • Temperature Regulated
  • Radiation Deflection Badge
Optional/Secondary Equipment:
Description:
Designed for the ranger's as a standard bodyglove using inspiration from the FIrebird society. A group of female commando's who wore specialized bodygloves able to preform in combat situations. The standard armorweave is complimented with a kinetic plexisteel weave to make the bodyglove a little heavier with work for flexibility and the modularity to either wear the bodyglove by itself or wear it with armor plating.

Following classic stormtrooper design where the bodyglove was made to disperse blaster energy by itself as well as the armor they had. The kinetic weave meant to help against slugthrowers knockback while the plexisteel weave to protect a little more against blasters. Internal computer and circuits designed with the bodyglove to function with the boots and other armor components.

The mini biotetric computer able to function with a one size fits all biogel to adjust to the rangers and keep the suit sealed from vacuum. Minor strength enhancement in the gloves like a stormtrooper suit with micronized turadium to make their grips stronger. Magno grips designed to hold the weapons and adhere to surfaces to climb.

The bodyglove while more advanced then some and combining the ideas of different groups are not a substitute for advanced combat armor. However they can be a strong lightweight armor on par for protection with advanced highgrade armorweave iron skins created by blastech with slightly more protection weaved it.

The modularity of the armor is designed to attach armor systems and ranger components. The specialized boots, toolkit bracers that go over the gloves and the thigh sheaths. The additional sections with the in booster pack and gravitational harness. The coloring of the bodyglove using the same system as the boots and able to change camo colors to reduce production costs of more suits in varying colors for operations.
Primary Source:
Chaos Canon
Canon


Submission Name:Sasori Boots
Link to Submission: Ranger's Utility Boots
Reason for Modification: More Research and Upgrades from additional funding
Modification: Upgrades, improvements
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Image Source: Black Widow: Avenger's Age of Ultron
Intent: To create a standard combat boot for the Ranger's
Development Thread:

Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Sasori Ranger's Attire
Affiliation: Ranger's/OPen Market
Modularity: Yes colors change in environments
Production: Production: Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))

Material:
  • Armorweave
  • Hybrid Plexisteel Plating
  • Lamanarium-Duraplast Plating
  • Components
  • Durasteel heel and toe
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 3.5kg
Quality: 10
Special Features:

  • Magno-Grip
  • Combat Blade Sheath
  • Auto Fitting gel foam
  • Self Repairing
  • Lightsaber Resistant
  • Blast Resistant
  • Mitrinomon Jetpack Thrusters
  • Biometric Seals
Description: Designed for the Ranger's to use by Willa the boots are set to function as a special one size fit all for the different ranger's. Using small internal components and mini biometric computer to auto fit the ones wearing it with expanding form inserts. The seals of the boots allow it to seat over a standard bodysuit and prevent compromising the rest of the armor. Jetpack thrusters built into the heel allow for sustained flight in low gravity and quick jumps around in standard. A built in sheaths on the boot give room for a combat knife and extra weapon. The toe and heel of the boot is thick durasteel with hybrid plexisteel plating and protection. THe lightweight blaster resistant metal great for adding protection to the armorweave underneath and in the clasps. The final part is a camo system designed to change the colors with the environment you can switch with the small computer. While not exactly a cloak it does cut down on manufacturing several suits of armor for ranger's to operate on different worlds or in different situations.
Primary Source:


Submission Name:Sahura Yuki Blades
Link to Submission: Shura Yuki Blades:
Reason for Modification: More Research and Upgrades from additional funding
Modification: Upgrades, improvements
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Image Credit: [s]
Intent: To create a multipurpose saber combining several fields Matsu has studied in.
Development Thread:
Manufacturer: Matsu Ike
Model: Multifunctional sabers
Affiliation: Matsu Ike
Modularity: Yes crystals can be installed
Production: Unique
Material:
  • Phrik
  • Crystals
  • Internal Components
Classification: Lightsaber
Size: Interlocking Lightsabers
Length: 1-3 meters
Blade:
  • Usually 1 meter each
  • 3 meters when extended
Weight: 3kg
Other Features:

Description: Built and crafted by the jedi Master Matsu Ike for her personal use. The phrik hilts are designed in a v shaped curve making the hilts longer but also easier to place the crystals a common problem with curved hilts that took more skill to place. The casing is designed for a special purpose utilizing a bifurcating cyclical-ignition pulse to function underwater. A force activated pressure setting to keep others from being able to use it or grab hold while it flies is also present. The power cells connect into a z-shape that is able to be thrown as a zeison shal disc blade while the duel phased saber blades can extend to three meters but only when thrown.
Primary Sources:


Submission Name:Sasori Bodysuit
Link to Submission: Sasori Bodysuit
Reason for Modification: More Research and Upgrades from additional funding
Modification: Upgrades, improvements, clarification of previous materials

[x]
Image Source: Black Widow: Avenger's Age of Ultron
Intent: To create a standard combat bodyglove for the Ranger's
Development Thread:

Manufacturer: Sasori
Model: Sasori Ranger's Attire
Affiliation: Ranger's/Open Market
Modularity: Yes colors change in environments
Production: Mass-Produced. (Anyone.)

Material:
  • Armorweave
  • Hybrid Plexisteel Weave
  • Kinetic Weave
  • Pyronium Weave
  • Fireworm Scales
  • Pressed Duraplast
  • Components
  • Micronized Turadium
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 4.5kg
Quality: 10
Special Features:

  • Magno-Grip Palms
  • Power Armor Liner
  • Auto Fitting gel foam
  • Biometric Seals
  • Armored Bodyglove
  • Energy Sinks
  • Lightsaber Resistant
  • Blaster Resistant
  • Kinetic Dispersion
  • Combat Deionizer
  • Energy Absorption
  • Self Drying Fan with automated voice
  • IFF Circuitry
  • Strength and Speed Enhancement
  • Ion Shielding
  • Temperature Regulated
  • Radiation Deflection Badge
  • Color Changing
Optional/Secondary Equipment:
Description:
Designed for the ranger's as a standard bodyglove using inspiration from the FIrebird society. A group of female commando's who wore specialized bodygloves able to preform in combat situations. The standard armorweave is complimented with a kinetic plexisteel weave to make the bodyglove a little heavier with work for flexibility and the modularity to either wear the bodyglove by itself or wear it with armor plating.

Following classic stormtrooper design where the bodyglove was made to disperse blaster energy by itself as well as the armor they had. The kinetic weave meant to help against slugthrowers knockback while the plexisteel weave to protect a little more against blasters. Internal computer and circuits designed with the bodyglove to function with the boots and other armor components.

The mini biotetric computer able to function with a one size fits all biogel to adjust to the rangers and keep the suit sealed from vacuum. Minor strength enhancement in the gloves like a stormtrooper suit with micronized turadium to make their grips stronger. Magno grips designed to hold the weapons and adhere to surfaces to climb.

The bodyglove while more advanced then some and combining the ideas of different groups are not a substitute for advanced combat armor. However they can be a strong lightweight armor on par for protection with advanced highgrade armorweave iron skins created by blastech with slightly more protection weaved it.

The modularity of the armor is designed to attach armor systems and ranger components. The specialized boots, toolkit bracers that go over the gloves and the thigh sheaths. The additional sections with the in booster pack and gravitational harness. The coloring of the bodyglove using the same system as the boots and able to change camo colors to reduce production costs of more suits in varying colors for operations.

With time and work, newer materials and sales with some contracts gave Matsu things to work on. the materials they constructed to build up their reserves as Sasori gained businesses like Weyland and Phenex. She had brand new technology they were able to incorporate while making more details about the previous materials for sales.
Primary Source:
Chaos Canon
Canon
 
[member="Raziel"]

This is only for those who have been proactive in changing major faction items to another faction. Or things happening on the fly.

That's just tiny affiliation changes.

My main concern is grandfathered items and having judges go through that and adding more and more regulations to cover this. We already have so much as it is, why add more to it with modifications?

People are already confused with the previous different versions of the factory rules, there is no reason to complicate that even more.
 
[member="Cira"]

I agree that grandfathering is an issue, hence listed in the OP.

I don't agree this significantly adds to judges workload. It merely shifts effort from a single point of failure across the team.
 
Ultimately. If you want change, put forth the complete solution.

We can say " why don't we let fj's do it" but if you do not provide a solution for all the issues and make it more efficient and less chaotic with something tangible to see, then it is all conjecture.

Find a solution to how this would work with consideration of all previous factory changes that doesn't go against forcing any member to have to configure to current standards if they are grandfathered.
 
[member="Raziel"] I'm taking care of them, I do drop the ball sometimes but yeah. I'm getting to them. I just try and do them every other week on my days off just sometimes - yeah. Also The reason why Judges don't do mods because of secondary approvals and such.


*hand waves*

I'll get better on them but yeah those long lists usually kill my motivation :l
 
I think we should just require new subs to be submitted in the case that the submission's modification request is by a person that did not submit the original item.

Submission modifications can be supported if the request is by the account that created the submission.

I say we ban people from requesting changes of other people's stuff.

I currently think that's the easiest way without cluttering the Factory.
 
[member="Tefka"] [member="Spencer Varanin"] [member="Cira"]

So the method I currently follow is:

If the request is not by the author I quote the request, tag the author and await confirmation. When the author posts confirmation I make the change or deny it.

I agree this is very cluttered, but I'm not sure if a blanket ban is the best solution. I could alternatively send a PM.
I'll try and follow through in my head what happens in each case.

If Submitter X resubmits a piece of very nice tech (that would typically require development) that they claim worked from Author A, the Factory Judge will need to check that the development thread shows this (plans were stolen etc).

If we followed that through would we still need to ask Author A? What if Author A believe the thread to steal plans etc was done when they didn't have time to respond?


If anyone asks to make a submission on the back of the work and development of the original author I would want to see permission from the Author in every case. Regardless of whether this is through a new submission or a modification request.




I have a greater issue with people reposting whole submissions to the modification.

I would rather that the submission modification thread is only there for the following:
Changes to:
  • Name/Model;
  • Image;
  • Affiliation;
  • Manufacturer.

Anything more major than this should be put in a new submission with the old one being archived or salvaged when done.

This allows the Factory judges to put the two side by side and might avoid some people sneaking bits through.

Any modifications requests should perhaps be hidden when done and any other chaff in the thread.



That said in a current example someone is stealing one of a limited production ship I made (this has significant development). In this case I'm going to ask him to create his own submission for a Unique version of the ship (if he gets it).
 
[member="Tefka"]

My main point is that dealing with some of the significant changes to submissions is more taxing that requesting author permissions for minor modifications.

I recommend that the submission modification thread is only used for the following:
Changes to:
Name/Model;
Image;
Affiliation;
Manufacturer.

Anything more significant to be done by resubmission and archive the original. Every processed request to be hidden to tidy the thread.

Im still thinking on the pros and cons of either requiring all mods to be done by the author account, or switching to pm to declutter the modification thread and will get back when I have a coherent thought on the manner.
 
I like this. I Know some members have stated they use the submissions request to "get the stuff they would have to dev" onto their submission "with out the work" I'd like to make sure that also doesn't happen.
 

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