Approved Tech Exploration Suit

[Kole Eckttor]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a set of exploration gear sold by G.E. Adventure Inc.
• Image Source: (x) and (x)
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: G.E. Adventure Inc.
• Affiliation: Closed Market
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Mass Produced
• Material: Armorplast and various electronics

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Exploration
• Weight: Average
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Average
  • Kinetic: Average
  • Lightsabers: Average
  • Elemental: Very High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Built in helmet flashlight
• Emergency oxygen supply lasting up to three hours
• Wrist datapad used for controlling any hooked-up technology
  • Technology can range from a few droids to a small fighter ship. Datapad has a 20 meter radius of control. Anything that goes even a centimeter outside of it will lose control instantly. You are only allowed to control items that you own, no one else's

STRENGTHS

• This suit is very durable for its cheap production cost
• Helmet has a H.U.D display which can show thermal readings
  • These readings include thermal visuals of people or other creatures. Very weak, can only see through light material such as mesh and cloth. Can tell heart rate, body temperature, and can be used at night. Same with the datapad, it has a maximum of 20 meters
• Average weight makes it easy to adjust to and use the suit

WEAKNESSES

• Helmet visor is very fragile. It will only take a few hits before shattering
• This suit is not meant for space exploration, only planetary
• The suit is bulky, and thus is not meant for any combat

DESCRIPTION
This exploration suit is perfect for the adventures of the galaxy. Built for exploring unknow and unexplored planets, this suit is perfect for traversing the terrain. The flashlight built into the helmet allows the user to operate durning the night. And with a datapad built into the suit's forearm, you can hook it up to control any nearby technology. While this suit is great for exploring planets, you do not want this suit for space exploration. If you are exposed to space for too long the visor will crack, leaving you breathless. Remember that and you will have the best time exploring and adventuring.

 

[Kole Eckttor]

Gir Quee John Locke could this please be moved out of Pre-Factory and into Technology Creation? Thanks

 

[Shuklaar Kyrdol]

Hello Kole Eckttor , I'm Shuk and I'll be reviewing your submission today. First off, loving the armor's image for use as an exploration suit!

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Slight issue here, you need to actually provide a list of materials used here.

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Wrist datapad used for controlling any hooked-up technology

This is problematic, you need to be more specific about how it might link or what it might control.

STRENGTHS

• Helmet has a H.U.D display which can show thermal and technological readings​

This is also problematic, you need to specify what other readings the HUD is capable of reading.

WEAKNESSES
You need to add another weakness to balance out your strengths and weaknesses.

Once you've made those changes, go ahead and tag me. Thanks.

 

[Kole Eckttor]

Shuklaar Kyrdol should all be fixed now

 

[Shuklaar Kyrdol]

Kole Eckttor Several steps in the right direction. You mention it can see through light armor, are you intending for it to be decidedly anti-stealth tech? If so, I'll remind you that anti-stealth tech must be submitted at semi-unique. If not, please add a stipulation that it is incapable of bypassing stealth technologies.

 

[Kole Eckttor]

Shuklaar Kyrdol nope, my mistake. I meant to word it as light material, so it can only see through mesh and cloth type materials. It is not the best thermal scanner

 

[Shuklaar Kyrdol]

Kole Eckttor Alright then! I'll approve it. I'm sure your customers will enjoy their new armor. Approved!