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Approved Starship Eliad Royal Starship

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a personal starship for Saryn, for his duties as a monarch.
  • Image Source: Recolour of Source
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: J-type 327 Nubian Royal Starship
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Personal Transport
  • Length: 100 meters
  • Width: 45 meters
  • Height: 30 meters
  • Armament: High
  • Defenses: High
  • Hangar Space: Base - 0
  • Hangar Allocations: Base - 0
  • Single Craft Hangar: No
  • Maneuverability Rating: High
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Hyperdrive: Class 1.8 - T-14 Hyperdrive Generator
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Gold Tinted Chromium Hull
  • Deflector Shield Generator
  • Luxury VIP Apartment
  • Crew and Entourage Quarters
  • Throne Room/Audience Chamber
  • Long Range Communications Array
  • Personal Escape Pod
  • Droid Charging & Maintenance Room
  • Climate Controlled Wardrobe
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Cloaking Device - The Eliad Royal Starship possesses a cloaking device enabling it to travel in total stealth, unseen by the naked eye or enemy sensors, allowing the Queen of Eliad to travel with minimal chance of being noticed if required.
  • Armed - The Eliad Royal Starship, unlike the Nubian J-Type it was modelled after, is fully armed for combat for emergency situations, possessing a strong hull and shields, as well as laser cannons and concussion missile launchers.
WEAKNESSES
  • Custom Built - The ship, being a unique, custom built design, possesses highly expensive components, and as such could never be built on a large scale, making it difficult and highly costly to replace if lost.
DESCRIPTION
Built shortly after Saryn's coronation as Eliad's Queen, the Eliad Royal Starship was designed with the intent to provide luxurious and well protected transportation to Eliad's new monarch. No expense was spared in it's design and manufacture, making this unique vessel highly capable in preforming it's intended duties. Sporting a cloaking device and top of the line armaments and shields, high speeds and maneuverbility, it is more than capable of defending itself in an emergency situation.

The ship interior has a luxurious personal apartment for Saryn, with a lavish bedroom, ensuite bathroom and climate controlled walk in wardrobe with outfits for every occasion. The quarters for the crew and Saryn's entourage, while shared as a group, are also quite comfortable. A small throne room and audience chamber is also installed, with a built in holo-communication projector, so Saryn might relax comfortably on longer journeys while attending to matters of state from anywhere in the galaxy. There is also a droid charging and maintenance area aboard the ship, where Saryn's droid bodyguards and the ship astromechs can be maintained, repaired and recharged.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Darth Xyrah Darth Xyrah

Nice modifications.
  • The image source link is not good. Please use this one.
  • The other, you cannot delete any fields from the submission. So please write these back:
    • Hangar Space: (Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )
    50m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 0 | High: 0 | Very High: 0 | Extreme: 0 ]
    100m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 0 | High: 0 | Very High: 1 | Extreme: 2 ]
    200m [Base: 0 | Very Low: 0 | Low: 0 | Average: 1 | High: 2 | Very High: 3 | Extreme: 4 ]
    • Hangar Allocations: (This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above)
      • Starfighters: x squadrons
      • Support Craft: x squadrons
  • And please link your bio/character to the Affiliation.
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Darth Xyrah Darth Xyrah

Understandable. However tha single hangar craft allows you to keep a shuttle in the ship, or extra escape pods, or you can use it as cargo, if you want.
However, the hangar space is a rating, so you have to mention it, even if the ship has no hangar. So please modify the rating to any ratings which say 0. All of them's value is 0, so it will be ok and your ratings are still remain balanced.
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Darth Xyrah Darth Xyrah

I would be happy for one of the ratings, you can chose between these: Base Very Low, Low, Average or High. Maybe the Base is the most accurate in your case. Change the 0 to the Base, and I can accept the sub.
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Darth Xyrah Darth Xyrah

Yes, thank you! And my mistake and bad, I'm sorry, I just realise now, I deleted the last line from my quote. Please add this one to the template, and we'll be ok. And again, I'm sorry about it!
Single Craft Hangar: (Does this ship have a hanger for a single fighter craft to be docked? Please choose either Yes or No. This field does not need to be taken into account when balancing but should be included in the strengths and weaknesses.)
 
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