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Approved Planet Duatiel

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To create a new planet for the House Of Bakari
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Permissions: N/A
Canon: No
Links: N/A


GENERAL INFORMATION
Planet Name: Duatiel
Demonym: Duatians
Region: Unknown Regions
System Name: Abbaji
System Features: Abbaji, Duatiel, a single yellow sun, a large asteroid belt
Location: Ablajeck Sector, Abbaji System. Near Endor Hex
Major Imports: Grains and growable foods, Riches in tribute, Construction materials such as Durasteel, Water
Major Exports: Cattle foods, Rich metals and ores
Unexploited Resources: None

GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
Gravity: Standard
Climate: Very hot and dry with a short yet heavy wet rain season
Primary Terrain: Large deserts dotted by interconnected lakes and rivers, some mountains among the dunes
Atmosphere: Type I

LOCATION INFORMATION
Capital City: Meddenu City
Planetary Features: Sandstone and Metal cities, Metal cities over lakes, ruins and tombs upon the dunes, oasis’, mostly Rural
Major Locations:

Meddenu City

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The largest city and capital on the surface of Duatiel. It has great high walls surrounding it, with multiple rivers and a lake just outside. Four towers, the towers of the four highest Gods to Rathulian religion; Saburas, god of mind, Sacrea, god of stars, Hathor, god of joy and Hathlora, god of love. It has a large science district, due to the Rathulians high interest in the stars and technology. This city was once the center of Rathulian influence and their home capital. It is mostly made of sandstone and heavy metals.
Assuan City
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At the end of the largest river on the planet was the home capital of the Sobeki race. The river splits the city apart, with a single bridge spanning across the waterfall. In each half is a pillar, right in the middle. These represent two gods of the Pantheon; Yonhet, god of water and Sekrafah, god of life. It has the largest market on planet, with the Sobeki praising trade and safe travel to others. Most of its architecture is metal and wooden.
Ruins of Metnujer City
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This was once the grand city to Anubian hierarchy and their race, their pride on Duatiel. The city of Metnujer once housed their nobles and the two pillars to the gods of death, Anubilar, and of war, Boskenu. These pillars are decayed and the city buried beneath years of sandstorms. Much is left to be learned in these sandstone and rusted metal ruins. There are recovery operations to rebuild and reclaim the city after Bakari’s arrival. This city is found close to the Mountains of Judgement.
Sekhe Desert
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This desert spans over a third of the entire planet. A wasteland with barely a river or shrub in sight. All that exists here are creatures built for the harsh weather, terrifying sandstorms and a single pillar, dedicated to the god of the sands, Setu.
Taseer River
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The Taseer River is the longest river on the planet of Duatiel. At the end of it are the waterfalls of Assuan City. At the other end, was a large lake connected to several other rivers. Along the river were many farms and agricultural villages, crop growth was at its highest there.
Phygr Mountains
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Also know as the ‘Mountains of Judgement’, these mountains were named after the God of Judgement and the Forsaken. They are highly dangerous, filled with lightning storms, high wind sandstorms and dangerous creatures that lurk in the shadows of these towering mounds of rock. At the highest peak is a single tower. The tower to the god Phyrgrim. A few ruins linger throughout the mountains as well as a single city dedicated to the priests of Phyrgrim. There is talk of another that is praised in this area by the name of Ghul.

Force Nexus (Optional): Yes
Intent: The Force Nexus is a now closed netherworld entrance that can be reopened, as is the intent for it to give a reason behind the force spirits and to give additional roleplay opportunities.
Nexus Name: Tomb Of Ammitera
Nexus Alignment: Dark
Strength: Moderate: It was created with the powers of necromancy and other dark side force powers, ending several lives to create the gateway. It’s influence goes across the fallen Anubian city, and force spirits from the gate are felt across the planet, except for those considered ‘gods’ to the races on the planet.
Accessibility: Medium. Is hidden among the Phygr Mountains just outside the Anubian fallen city of Metnujer, through canyons of jagged rock and sky-piercing mountains. It is seen to be guarded by undead Anubians, left to suffer in eternal due to the powers of the dark side. It is considered sacred ground, yet open to anyone who dares to approach.
Effects: It gives off a dark aura when entering the desert nearby. Much like a normal Netherworld gate, the dead can pass through. However, since it is closed there are only flickers of spirits and a cold feeling around.

POPULATION
Native Species: Anubians (most of the population banished), Rathulians, Sobeki
Immigrated Species: Cathar, Human
Population: Moderate
Demographics: The population is primarily Rathulian and Sobeki. Anubians and Cathar are at the lowest end of numbers, and there are many humans but they are mostly seen as servants or lower class.
Primary Languages: Anubian
Culture: The culture is spread out among the races. The Rathulians study the sciences and the stars, the Sobeki focus upon trade and agriculture, and the Anubians are primarily warriors and worshippers of death. These races praise several ‘Gods’ that are force spirits. Since the banishment of many of the Anubian race, they are a rather peaceful and cultured civilization. Humans and Cathar are seen as lower races, servants or low rank troops.

GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
Government: Ruled by the Ruling Council of Duatiel, each member of each race on the planet. At the head is the Rathulians, and hold the highest population aside from humans who are belittled, until the return of Bakari which made the council share ruling rather than have the Rathulians at the head. It once was the head of an old growing Empire, till the banishment of most of the Anubian population.
Affiliation: Ruled by the Rathulians
Wealth: Wealthy Duatiel had a high rush of high quality materials and riches beneath the sands. Bakari brought back much of it’s wealth from Ankhypt.
Stability: Low The government and and economy of Duatiel is rather stable. There is the uncommon occurrence of servants pushing back, or Anubian rebels left behind.
Freedom & Oppression: The government is rather tight on laws and restrictions. Going against the ruling is punishable by servitude, death or banishment to the deserts. Such things as assaulting a higher class member of society or stealing are seen as high acts of treason against the government.

MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
Military: Compared to most of the galaxy, their military is rather low quality. Not many ships to form up a fleet, and most of the military use melee based weaponry or desert skimmers.
Technology: Duatiel’s technology level is quite low compared to the rest of the galaxy. They are new to hovercraft and spacefaring, with ships no larger than a frigate. They have little knowledge to hyperspace, having only used it to send out emissaries which some do not return, or banishing much of the Anubian race.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

During a routine survey done by a government some centuries ago, the planet of Duatiel had been discovered. Back then, the species on the planet were of sentience yet primitive. Only just making buildings of clay and sandstone, they had yet to develop sustainable technology. So, the planet was left to its own devices, but under watch from the government. Until that system of government fell, leaving them forgotten. Some things were left, such as small research posts which allowed the races on the planet to adapt their lifestyles. Slowly over the years they began to develop themselves, advancing to less primitive methods of research.

Technology learned helped them with agriculture as well, growing more plant life on the planet and expanding quickly across the planet. Eventually the three races joined together, creating a small council government. Humans once came to the planet, and the three races saw themselves higher. One race took them under as slaves, to further construction. This led to the making of the Nexus, with sacrifices and necromancy which was followed by the banishing of Anubians.

From then on it was a rather quiet ruling by the remaining Sobeki and Rathulians, as well as some high class human races as after the banishing of the Anubians, some were able to rise up to higher standards. The humans stuck around to help with the planet's development in a higher position. Sobeki kept to agricultural and trading, while the Rathulians looked to the stars. They developed technology to begin scouting out nearby regions, finding new races and making themselves known.

Eventually, however, the Anubians returned in the form of the House Of Bakari. They were made to do a peaceful meeting with the remaining races under the overlooking Azure Imperium. This led to an alliance and the House Of Bakari expanded.Assuan City
 
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Hey, so sorry for the delay on the initial review of this. RL been keeping me busy.

This looks mostly good to me however, I do recommend you add links to the species in this just so everything is connected.

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[member="Yuroic Xeraic"]

It's fine! RL over RP, as the saying goes.

I've updated the links, and attached them to the names in the Native Species section
 
Neferisa Neferisa

That looks a lot neater, but there are still a few points that you need to clear up before we can look at approving this submission again.

1) Template

The planet submission needs to be brought in line with the templates for Codex 4.0, which you can find here. In particular, you need to make sure that you add the permissions field.​

2) Image Credits

You have included several images throughout the submission, however, no image credits have been given. Could you please make sure to include image credits as per this guide in the Codex Rules.​

3) Location

Could you specify which hex you wish the planet to be located in as per the template?​
 
Neferisa Neferisa

Thank you for making those adjustments, there are still two things I need to bring to your attention.

1) Image Credit

The link you have provided as the image credit for Assuan City is broken, please replace it with a working link.​

2) Template

You have still not added the permissions field to the submission, all fields on a codex template MUST be included, even if they're marked as N/a. Please add the relevant field.​
 
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