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Drahr'alor

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Drahr'alor
Name: Drahr'alor of Clan Vereen
Intent: Create a sect of Warriors for Clan Vereen
Affiliation: Draco Vereen
Availability: Unique
Quality: A- Elite
Type: Command
Strength: 16 (Total)
Force Sensitivity: Experienced Padawan
Force Abilities: Force Meld, Force Enhance, Basic Telekinesis
Description:
Clan Vereen, being relatively small in number and only partially established is built around the shadow of ArmaTech Combat Systems. While Draco maintains the position of CEO of the Company and Aliit'Buir of the Clan, there is a level of separation between the two. One identifies as a company with ties to several governments for profit, with a Preference for Mandalore while the other is Mandalorian in its entirety. Clan Vereen maintains only a small military, populating old Death Watch haunts on Concordia around the Scar and the Clan Hall. While much smaller and much less prevalent than ArmaTech Security the Verd of Aliit Vereen are a common sight on the battlefield. Where in the past Draco had relied on mercenaries and hired security, now, having fully adopted his position within the Mandalorian Clans, he has built the small sect of warriors into a fearsome military.

The Aliit'Drahr form the basis of the fighting men and women of Clan Vereen with their small groups each lead by an Akaan'Drahr. These ranks slightly differ from the conventional Mandalorian Ranks, but often whole task forces are lead by the rank of Drahr'alor, meaning Leader of Dragons. These few warriors are all Mandalorians, normally chosen from Force Sensitives and taught some basic abilities by their leader. Although there are a number of them, they are deployed in pairs or as leaders of groups on the battlefield rather than as one cohesive unit. It goes with the saying don't put all of your eggs in one basket. When they are deployed as leaders they can lead as few as one unit of Aliit'Drahr or as many as a whole battlegroup in a theater of war.

Capable warriors in their own right, they are trained in the ways of the Force specializing in Force Enhance, enhancing their physical abilities such as speed, strength, and stamina above their normal capabilities. The other ability they are trained to use is Force Meld, allowing them to cooridinate with each other and Draco across the battlefield. This allows them to direct their forces, even if it is just pointing them in different directions. They are roughly apprentices in terms of their abilities with the Force, however they are also born and raised Mandalorians with a plethora of experience in combat, hand to hand, and fire fights. They have rough training with Lightsabers, but because they are born and raised Mandalorian, their fighting with the weapon is much more barbaric, keeping away from the Classic Styles and simply using one of the most deadly weapons in the galaxy, effectively, even if crudely by the standards of a Jedi or Sith.

Equipment:

Wrist Weapons (Each Warrior Gets 4 [Missile Launcher= 2])

Attached Weapons (Each Warrior Gets 1)

Droids
Besuliik MKII (Each Warrior may Ride 1)
(Each Warrior gets 4 Probe Droids [MK2=2])
Probe Droids Mk1
Probe Droids Mk2

Development Threads:
 
[member="Draco Vereen"]

So, after going through each of your dev threads to see what was done, we run into a problem here about your men having Force Sensitivity. Below is a list of what I found in your posts in each dev thread:

Dominion of Panatha – One post in a cantina
Dominion of Chrisophsis – Draco is the only Mando mentioned in any of your posts until the end when you call your ride
Invasion of Contruum – No mention of your men having Force Sensitivity
Dominion of Muunlinist – four mentions of your Mandos having the Force
Dominion of Naboo – No mention of your men having the Force
Dominion of Aeten II – No mention of your men having the Force
[SIZE=11pt]Dominion of Ord Radama – One mention of a meld[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]As things currently stand, I cannot allow them to have the Force as I do not think the dev is there to support it. So, either the Force Sensitivity needs to go or I need a solid 20+ post dev thread of these men [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]receiving their Force training in Enhance and Meld. I also would like to kindly point out that dev threads can only be used once here, and if there are any repeats in other submissions, they cannot be accepted as appropriate development.[/SIZE]
 
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