Do I need more detail

[Nate Drake]

For Nates background or appearance or personality if so I'm open to ideas on what it needs that would be a great help to me

 

[Roxy Lalonde]

[member="Nate Drake"]

Not many people really read the Character Bio. I suggest just giving enough detail mixed into the roleplay you're in so you don't have to go through the trouble of getting them to read a giant bio they might not want to.

 

[Nate Drake]

[member="Roxy Lalonde"]
I do think I have enough but I'd like to make it better for the ones that do to know what type of character Nate is

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Nate Drake"]
Your bio is fine, most people that have fancy looking bios do it because they enjoy going above and beyond.

 

[Nate Drake]

[member="Lily Kirsche Kuhn"]
I'm
Also one who enjoys the beyound I think I makes role-playing more fun

 

[Akatan Adasca]

[member="Nate Drake"]

If you are looking for something constructive, I would say just aesthetically develop your bio - i.e. break it up with colors or something for the header to make it easier to read. Beyond that...thumbsup.jpeg

 

[Eddie]

Personality is a thing I don't see often, so thumbs up on that. But here's a question, why not break up the titles at least to make them look separate from the other parts. I'd work on that myself when I know I'll be RPing this guy more.

 

[Nate Drake]

I would do it if I could use my laptop instead of mobile so I'll do it when I can sit on my laptop for some time

 

[Nate Drake]

I think I need more work done on Nate