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Approved Tech DM&S Explosive cartridge

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION


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  • Intent: To create a new type of ammunition for future weapon submissions
  • Image Source: here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: 5.56x45mm NATO cartridge

PRODUCTION INFORMATION



TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS


  • Classification: Explosive cartridge
  • Size: Average (5.56x45mm)
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Explosive Type: Small baradium charges exploding on impact
  • Delivery Method: Fired
  • Effective Range: Average
  • Area Of Effect: Large
  • Damage Output: High

SPECIAL FEATURES


  • explosive bullet
  • Ejectable bullet case
  • black powder inside the bullet case to propel the bullet

STRENGTHS


  • High damage output and large area of effect due to its exploding capacity

WEAKNESSES

  • The bullet case can be stuck in the gun's chamber if misejected
  • Can't be used in closed environnements like buildings due to its area of effect (it can kill both the ennemies and the person handling the gun loaded with this ammunition

DESCRIPTION

This type of ammunition is made to counter large ennemy troops when outnumbered in largeplaces like streets or large battlefields. It commes in boxes of 25 rounds.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Gustaf Karjala Gustaf Karjala

Nice cartridge, I found the same problem here just like in the rifle submission, and an other too:
  • You wrote the production scale as limited, what means: "Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction" You wrote a minor faction and a major who can use it. So please specify the only group within the NIO who can use it and not the entire faction. If you want the entire faction, I suggest to change the production rate to minor.
  • You forgot to write a Explosive Type to the cartridge, please fix it.
That's all, please let me know if you edited these.
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Gustaf Karjala Gustaf Karjala

Thank you! The "Explosive Type" still not good. The template write this: List the type: Ball Bearings, Baradium Charges, Sonic Pulse, EMP Burst, Chemical. So please try to determines the type of the explosion, and not what causes the explosion.
 
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