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Directorate Greyshirts

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Image Above :Directorate Greyshirts being inspected
Image Below :Uniform of a Directorate Greyshirt


  • Intent: To create a Paramilitary Branch for the Directorate

  • Image Credit: Wikimedia Commons

  • Role: The Greyshirts serves as the Paramilitary Branch of the Directorate that is loyal to the Grayson Imperium and that operates within the territories claimed by Duke Maracel Yorkell.

  • Links: Maracel Yorkell , Directorate , Grayson Imperium , Corellian Confederation
GENERAL INFORMATION

  • Unit Name: Directorate Greyshirts

  • Affiliation: The Directorate Greyshirts are loyal to the Directorate and to a greater extent the Grayson Imperium

  • Classification: The Directorate Greyshirts serve as mostly as Milita

  • Equipment: The Directorate Greyshirts make use of basic weaponry such as standard pistols , Vibroblades along with Grenades and Rocket Launchers.

  • Description: The Directorate Greyshirts serve as the Largest Military Force of the Directorate mostly service as Militia as it’s main objectives are to eliminate any Political Rivals to the Directorate as well as to disrupt the operations of the enemies of the Directorate and to create chaos in Anti-Directorate Neighborhoods.
COMBAT INFORMATION:

  • Unit Size: Large

  • Unit Availability: Common

  • Unit Experience: Recruit

  • Combat Function: The Directorate Greyshirts participate in operations conducted against Opponents of the Directorate such as Political Opponents and rival Paramilitary Forces. However the Greyshirts are not suited for combat and in situations of conflicts they are expected to serve as reserves.
Strengths:

  • Size : The Directorate Greyshirts have alot of Members spread across multiple planets and are easy to mobilize

  • Ideological Fanaticism : The Directorate Greyshirts share the same beliefs of that of the Directorate and that the Directorate is fighting a just cause and are willing to fight to the death for their ideology
Weaknesses:

  • Militiamen : The Directorate Greyshirts mostly serve as a paramilitary milita for the Directorate and does not participate in major combat operations nor minor combat operations. Due to this the Greyshirts have no major Experience on the fields making them vulnerable during major battles.

  • Poorly Equipped : In addition to the fact that the Greyshirts have no main combat training , the Greyshirts are mostly poorly equipped with most of the equipment used by members of the Greyshirts consist of simple knives , pistols , vibroblades and countless other short-range and melee weapons.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
As the Directorate grew in numbers following the collapse of the Core Imperial Confederation , the Directorate began using former supporters of the CIC along with supporters of the Directorate as part of their plans to set up a Paramilitary Organization known as the Greyshirts. Eventually seeing Minor Action during the Belter Rebellion , the Greyshirts rose into prominence during the rise of the Grayson Imperium as they assisted in the underworld pacification campaign.

During the Greyshirts operations on Coruscant , the Greyshirts also gained support from many people throughout the planet who grew opposed to the Essionian Led Government established by the Lord Imperator and gained more members though under the direct orders of Maracel Yorkell they did not attempt any sort of revolt mostly with Maracel Yorkell planning to use this as a means to sabotage the efforts of his rivals.

Now the Directorate has alot Members and supporters and operates in over 15 Worlds throughout the Core Worlds and the Deep Core. With the Greyshirts supplied with their own small Paramilitary Fleet , the Directorate Patrol Force , the Greyshirts have proven to be one of the most effective Military Organizations within the Grayson Imperium.
 
Maracel Yorkell II said:
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This needs image credit in accordance with the Codex Template.

Image Credit: [ Link to where you found the images, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help. ]

Moreover, Codex staff has ruled that you must change the pic, as it shows Oswald Mosley, the leader of the British Union of Fascists who was interned due to his closeness to the Nazis, and other real life fascists. Being inspired by real life figures and ideologies is fine, but using a photo of one is too on the nose, especially since the unit sub is already called Blackshirts.

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Maracel Yorkell II said:
Image Credit: Wikimedia Commons
The images are not still not properly sourced, but that is not even the most important point.



Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori said:
Moreover, Codex staff has ruled that you must change the pic, as it shows Oswald Mosley, the leader of the British Union of Fascists who was interned due to his closeness to the Nazis, and other real life fascists. Being inspired by real life figures and ideologies is fine, but using a photo of one is too on the nose, especially since the unit sub is already called Blackshirts.
This is what I said in my initial review post, when you used a Mosley pic. You have now replaced it with one of Vidkun Quisling, Oliver Møystad and the Hirden. Thus it is the image of a Nazi puppet leader who was a collaborator in Nazi atrocities, as well as the head of the collaborationist Norwegian security police and the Norwegian equivalent of the Nazi Party's paramilitary forces.

Being inspired by real life groups such as the Nazis to craft stories and characters is fine. George Lucas was, among many others. This goes too far. As the quoted section shows, you were informed that images of this nature would not be accepted in Codex, yet you picked an even worse one than the original. As a consequence of this, I am denying this sub. You may request a second chance provided you are willing to follow my instructions.
 
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Archiving Submission due to Denial for the reasons listed above. Please note that I do not want to see imagery of this nature in the future. If you're using historical visuals it would behoove you to do a little research before posting them up, or, consult us before using it in a submission. If this issue reoccurs it will result in a ban from the Codex across all of your accounts.

Lastly, as previously stated, you may request a Second Chance if you intend to correct this as the Judge has specified.
 
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