Daxton Bane
Character
Greetings fellow writers. I am starting this thread in an attempt to aid our fellow writers in improving their craft and hopefully take them to a more rewarding writing experience. To this end, I would like to ask in advance that we avoid any negative remarks and try to inject positive suggestions.
I will post a scenario and the participating writer/s are encourage to be creative an post a minimum of one paragraph reply. Then I would reply with my feedback and suggestions for improvement.
Bear in mind, there is usually a 10-12 hour time difference, me being in asia and most of you beautiful people are on the other side of the world so please bear with me if there is a little lag.
I might tag people who have expressed interest in this little experiment but if you want to join as well, then please feel free to post your entry as well. Just please tag me in your post so I know to reply to your posts. Thanks.
Scenario #1: You are on the rooftop of an urban world overlooking the cityscape, the sun is beginning to set and a light drizzle of rain has started to fall, your character is looking for a target somewhere in the city below you.
I will post a scenario and the participating writer/s are encourage to be creative an post a minimum of one paragraph reply. Then I would reply with my feedback and suggestions for improvement.
Bear in mind, there is usually a 10-12 hour time difference, me being in asia and most of you beautiful people are on the other side of the world so please bear with me if there is a little lag.
I might tag people who have expressed interest in this little experiment but if you want to join as well, then please feel free to post your entry as well. Just please tag me in your post so I know to reply to your posts. Thanks.
Scenario #1: You are on the rooftop of an urban world overlooking the cityscape, the sun is beginning to set and a light drizzle of rain has started to fall, your character is looking for a target somewhere in the city below you.