Darkhorse Station: Faction Thread

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[member="Jack Ross"]

Looks alright. I'd caution against too much construction of plot though. I find the best stories just flow... naturally.

 

[Jack Ross]

I believe that as well, that's why the objectives are vague.

[member="Althea Raxis"]

 

[Jaster Awaud]

[member="Althea Raxis"] [member="Jack Ross"]

I would like an update for this if possible?

Otherwise I will place this on the back burner until later.