Character Dantum Kryszar

[Dantum Kryszar]

Here is my character:
Name: Dantum "Dan" Kryszar
Faction: N/A (Hopefully Bounty Hunter's Guild)
Rank: N/A
Species: Human
Age: 24
Sex: Male
Height: 5'11'
Weight: 149lbs
Eyes: Green-brown
Hair: Black
Skin: Fair, but slightly one the tanner side.
Force Sensitive: No
Strengths and Weaknesses:
+A good tactical mind
+Good reflexes
+Good shooting skills
-Tends to overestimate
-Rushes through things
-Sometimes thinks before he acts
Appearance: Wears tight black pants beneath a short blastproof skirt and a thin black cloak. Wears light leather armor and a white shirt under the cloak. Wears a belt under the cloak as well, with several pockets and a sheath in which he stores grenades and his laser-edged knife. Has a long strap running diagonally across his chest and over his right shoulder with pockets he can use to store more gear such as electrobinoculars. He wears white and black gloves on both hands. He also has leather boots with magnetic metal soles that he can use to walk up walls, etc. His head is protected by a stolen patrol trooper helmet, taken off his first kill. A final detail is a necklace, consisting of a silver chain with a small circular charm on the end.
Bio: After growing up a rebellious and difficult child in the Coronet City, Corellia, he was dumped by his parents at age 14 on the Empire's doorstep. He was pressed into training by the Empire, who recognized his skills and made him part of an elite squad. He completed many missions without qualms, but his last mission changed him. He was forced to raid a building full of citizens and shoot them all. He refused, and deserted. He was out of a job, until he saw a wanted poster and decided to collect the bounty and become a bounty hunter.
Gear: Grenades, IQA-11 blaster rifle, laser-edged dagger, magnetic boots, built-in analytical visor (In his helmet), electrobinoculars.

 

[Dantum Kryszar]

Edited and Revised Version:

Name: Dantum "Dan" Kryszar

Alias: The Corellian Sharpshooter

Factions: The Bounty Hunter's Guild, The Spacer Guild, Crimson Dawn, The Outland Order

Rank: Enforcer (Crimson Dawn), Adept Hunter (The Bounty Hunter's Guild), Member (The Outland Order), Member (The Spacer Guild).

Characteristics:

Species: Human
Age: 24
Sex: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Status: Single (That's your cue, ladies.)
Height: 5'11'
Weight: 149lbs
Eyes: Green-brown
Hair: Black
Skin: Fair, but slightly on the tanner side.
Force Sensitive: No

Strengths and Weaknesses:

Strengths:

+ He has a good tactical mind.
+He has good reflexes.
+He has good shooting skills.
+He is a good pilot and technician.

Weaknesses:

-Tends to overestimate
-Rushes through things
-Sometimes thinks before he acts
-Gets angry when he is bested

Appearance: Dan wears tight black pants beneath a short blastproof skirt and a thin black cloak that goes over his right shoulder. He wears old, modified stormtrooper armor and a tight, black long-sleeved shirt underneath the armor, and on top of a white undershirt. He wears a belt on top of the armor as well, with several pockets and a sheath in which he stores grenades and his laser-edged knife. He has a long strap running diagonally across his chest and over his right shoulder with pockets he can use to store more gear such as electrobinoculars. He wears white and black gloves on both hands, with grip pads on the palms. He also has leather boots with magnetic metal soles that he can use to walk up walls, etc. His head is protected by a stolen patrol trooper helmet, taken off a kill to remind him of his Imperial days. The helmet is customized with an advanced filter and cooling system, as well as a heat vision component and a tactical visor. A final detail is a necklace, consisting of a silver chain with a small, circular charm made of lead on the end.

Bio: After growing up a rebellious and difficult child in Coronet City, Corellia, Dantum Kryszar was dumped by his parents at age 14 on the Empire's doorstep. He was pressed into training by the Empire, who recognized his skills later on and made him part of an elite squad. Dan completed many missions without qualms, all over the galaxy, but his last mission changed him. He was forced to raid a building full of citizens and shoot them all for supposed treason. He refused, and deserted. During his escape, a patrol trooper who had bullied him at the Imperial Academy for years tried to kill him for deserting. Unfortunately for him, Dan was quicker, and took the trooper's helmet to remind him of his Imperial days. Dan spent a year working as a technician on Corellia, and became bored. He must be able to use his skills for something. One day, he saw a wanted poster and knew what he wanted to do. He decided to collect the bounty and become a bounty hunter. Shortly after completing his first mission, he was hired by Dr. Thorbain for a cryostasis experiment. Dan was put in cryostasis several times, and was released periodically in 34 ABY, 134 ABY, 334 ABY, and then 824 ABY. He was released for only a year before being put back, and this is how he went from being an Imperial stormtrooper to a bounty hunter in the 800s ABY.
At the moment, Dan is a successful bounty hunter, part-time Crimson Dawn Enforcer, and a member of both the Outland Order and the Spacer Guild, for when he wants to earn some extra credits.

Gear: Grenades, IQA-11 blaster rifle, laser-edged dagger, magnetic boots, built-in analytical visor (In his helmet), electrobinoculars.

Occupations: Enforcer (Crimson Dawn), Adept Hunter (The Bounty Hunter's Guild), Member (The Outland Order), Member (The Spacer Guild)

Languages Known: Galactic Basic (Native), Binary (Fluent), Mando'a (Partially Fluent), Shyriiwook (Partially Fluent), Huttese (Partially Fluent), Jawaese (Partially Fluent), Tusken (Partially Fluent), Rodian (Partially Fluent).

Roleplays (Completed):
Tunnels Of Orax
Dan's Tattoo
The Empire's Cargo
Podrace- Pamarthe Watercraft Classic
Liberty's Gate- GA Invasion of BOTM-Held Adathorpe
There are other RP's, of course, but I'm only listing the completed ones.