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Approved Tech Czerka Arms Assault Model-5

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Intent: To provide Adenn Gra'tua with a reliable, durable and concealable weapon.
Development Thread: N/A (Unless needed)
Manufacturer: Czerka Arms
Model: 5
Affiliation: Personal.
Modularity: Yes, advanced sights and magazines. (10 rounds small - 20 rounds base - 30 rounds extended.)
Production: Unique (Only 5 exist)
Material: Durasteel.
Description: The Assault Model-5, as the name suggests, is a assault weapon, made by Czerka Arms as a personal order from Adenn Gra'tua. The weapon has a built in silencer so it is less identifiable. It also, like every weapon, has a few ups and downs.

Low rate of fire: 240 RPM is fairly slow, especially for a slugthrower, this might be good in some situations, but when speed is needed, it isn't.

Silenced: While not completely silent, at long range you will hea nothing, the closer you get though, let's you hear the slight ring after each shot is fired, and if you are extrmely close you will hear the ping of it being fired, then the ring from the vibrations.

Fire modes: While not exactly good or bad, it lets the user select from three different fire modes. Full auto, two round burst and semi automatic.

Small ammunition capacity: While this can be fixed with large magazines, it still can't compete with blasters or more advanced slugthrowers, which is why only 5 exist... And it was a personal order.

Small bullet size: The weapon only fires a 9x39mm round, while a very fast velocity, it lacks the power of a larger round, which also means more shots to take someone down.

Classification: Slugthrower
Size: Handheld.
Status: Limited.
Length: 875 mm.
Weight: 2.5 kg.
Ammunition Type: Physical.
Ammunition Capacity: 10, 20 or 30 rounds.
Effective Range: 300 meters.
 

Popo

I'm Sexy and I Know It
[member="Adenn Gra'tua"]
Due to the Tech Factory backup, I have been given 5th Freedom with the Tech Forum temporarily by [member="Kyra Sol"] and will be judging this submission.

Just a few things.

You state this weapon is minor production with 5 existing weapons. 5 existing models is the definition, more or less, of a Unique Production. You also state later on in the description that there are 10 in existence. This is both an inconsistency and still equivalent of a unique production level.

Your effective range. Is this the Optimum range? I ask because for a reference, most IRL guns have an effective range of 200-300 yards (about 200-300 meters approximately). This is due to user training and ability. Snipers generally can fire effectively at much farther ranges, but only after extensive training with specialized gear.
 
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Oops, fixed the production and error with the existing models, also the range is the maximum effective range for how far you can shoot, but I turned it down 200 meters when i realized that it doesn't need to be that large of a range.
 

Popo

I'm Sexy and I Know It
[member="Adenn Gra'tua"]
Okay, thanks for making those edits. Last thing, I promise. What's the caliber of this weapon? It's an assault rifle so I'm assuming somewhere around a 5.56mm or 7.62mm?
 

Popo

I'm Sexy and I Know It
[member="Adenn Gra'tua"]
Awesome. Approved pending secondary. Please be patient as I have to trap/find someone to change the tag of this submission and lock it for me.
 
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