Constitutional Convention on Kesh. Looking for Voices and Diplomats.

[Aithne Charr]

Ya so ive made Kesh a Constitutional Monarchy as part of a long list of revamps ive been doing IC. And in doing this ive realized that i have no idea how to write a short little constitution for the planet and would be more than grateful for anyone to help. Ya, i know, its a bit of unnecessary fluff but ive had an awesome time working on this lately that if someone could help me with this idea that would be awesome. The main reason i need help is figuring out how to begin it as well as to bounce ideas off the person when they are free.

Post here if interested or contact me on Skype at David_Tharkosa.

Thank you for all the help to whoever does.

So, thanks to the words [member="Dorne Calato"], This thread is a bit different now.

So what im planning to do is turn Kesh's Complete Monarchy into a Constitutional one that is fully fleshed out. As such im looking to the diplomats and politicians of the galaxy as well as any native Keshiri to come to this convention and help draft a fair constitution for the people of the planet and to give people a hand in expanding the lore of the planet as well as getting their names marked down in the panels of Chaos History.

 

[Eli-Mae Forrest]

I could attempt to help you

[member="Solan Charr"]

 

[Dorne Calato]

Seems like something Calato would help with ICly, and I suppose me OOCly.

Let's see... how about "He who passes judgement, must swing the lightsaber?"

[member="Solan Charr"]

 

[Julian Valentine]

Maybe start off with better wages.. according to the average income your peeps are earning a slave labor sum of $12.90 an hour, ouch

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Julian Valentine"]

Funny thing is, i used the UK's average income

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Quinncolson"]

[member="Dorne Calato"]

Also, if both of you really want to help, awesome. Happy to write down any ideas generated here or like i said if you want to talk off site, i have skype.

(Ps to Calato, Trying not to kill people anymore )

 

[Julian Valentine]

[member="Solan Charr"]
That'd explain it, I was thinking more along the lines of AU or US.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Julian Valentine"]

Oh i don't no, These people don't do enough to earn 8 an hour.

 

[Dorne Calato]

[member="Solan Charr"]

Will the writing style be mostly in-character or out? would Calato for instance be talking to your character, or do we just ooc it?

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Dorne Calato"]

Was gonna try a hand at doing it IC... but likely will change to OOC if it becomes confusing.

 

[Dorne Calato]

[member="Solan Charr"] I think an in-character discussion on treaties and articles might be more engaging than just ooc-ing it, so what we write has in-universe context rather than just say, coming out of thin air.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Dorne Calato"]

Interesting... i hadn't thought about that and it would give the chance to make the government more legitimate too in the eyes of the galactic community...

 

[Dorne Calato]

[member="Solan Charr"] I'm glade you like the idea. It'll also give us a chance to approach it piece by piece, from the ground up. Calato is a Jedi Paddie under master Ike so he'll likely be readily approachable and eager to serve.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Dorne Calato"]

Huh... Well time to see how many others want to join in on this now that the focus has changed. *Goes to edit the initial post*

 

[Dorne Calato]

[member="Solan Charr"] As a nobleman and soldier, I would say Calato's focus is on the military, criminality and justice related provisions, and maybe a little bureaucracy. It's all a matter of asking an expert to contribute to what they know. Finance experts on finance, etc etc...

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Dorne Calato"]

Pretty good ideas... gonna be interesting to see who else has interest in helping out.

 

[Julian Valentine]

[member="Solan Charr"]
As a medieval-but-not-anymore-kinda world, butchery is a big business. I'll tell you, us butchers do a lotta hard work! I hope you pay the butchers more than 8 bucks ;(

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Julian Valentine"]

Pretty sure that Medieval is long gone, you butchers will take your 12 dollars an hour and like it.

 

[Julian Valentine]

[member="Solan Charr"]

But to ACTUALLY contribute to the Constitution, human rights is about as basic as it gets.

 

[Cecily Demici]

Cecily would be happy to help. Her policy positions etc are in her character Bio.

Just let me know if you want her there.