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Approved NPC Cloud Breaker's Crew

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
CREW INFORMATION
  • Crew Name: Cloud Breaker's Crew
  • Crew Type: Ship's Crew
  • Base of Operations: Cloud Breaker
  • Crew Size: 4
  • Loyalties: Jai'galaar Gred Jai'galaar Gred
  • Description: A crew of ragtag misfits plucked from various parts of the galaxy.
CREW MEMBER 1
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  • Name: Ki'tala
  • Age: 30
  • Species: Jawa
  • Role: Head Engineer, First Mate. Lead Stabber
  • Languages: Jawaese, Jawa Trade Language
  • Description: A reclusive sort to those she isn't accustom to, Ki'tala more than happy to just stay aboard the Cloud Breaker and keep the it from being to run down. She doesn't seem to afraid to vocalize any complaints she has with Jai and EW, plus knowing where Jai comes from, but around others is usually quiet and listening. She does have a compulsion to steal things, and she's willing to buy and sell with others, or "buy and sell" with people she doesn't like. Ki'tala notably seems really worried the Cloud Breaker will be destroyed someday, but Jai hasn't asked why. She's also been known to slowly pull her vibroknife out so others know she wants to take an aggressive approach. She also has a thing for drinking, and keeps a flask on her.
CREW MEMBER 2
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  • Name: Valan Fron
  • Age: 25
  • Species: Human
  • Role: Pilot, Trickster
  • Languages: Basic, Jawa Trade Language, Huttese
  • Description: A Taris born swoop racer, Valan was picked up after getting in some trouble with a few of the swoop gangs of the planet. He was pretty good at sneaking his way past almost anyone without revealing who he was, but the young man would run into a Jay Galore, and pick up on the at the time bad ruse. His piloting skills combined with this are the reasons he got his place on the crew, and now often get various "acts" ready for the crew as part of smuggling and bounty hunting.
CREW MEMBER 3
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  • Name: Ila Vas
  • Age: 28
  • Species: Echani
  • Role: Medic, Gunslinger
  • Languages: Basic, Huttese
  • Description: Both a trusted medic and gunslinger, Ila Vas is an Echani cyborg who found herself on the Cloud Breaker by complete accident while running from an angry, and surprisingly quick, Hutt. Despite not exactly wanting to be there are first, she'd quickly start helping patch up wounds, and occasionally lend a gun or two when needed. She's has an almost mother-daughter relationship with Ki'tala, who keeps the Echani's cybernetics in tip-top shape. Eventually, after some prodding, Jai would trust her enough to explain who he really was, and why he and a FAC were jumping around the Outer Rim.
CREW MEMBER 4
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  • Name: EW-031 EW-031
  • Age: 20
  • Species: C-1 "Spark" Tactical Droid
  • Role: Tactician
  • Languages: Mando'a, Basic, Huttese, Jawa Trade Language, Zygerrian, and other notable Outer and Mid Rim languages.
  • Description: Built with the Cloud Breaker, EW is the corvette's tactical droid, and is linked to the ships systems. While she doesn't exactly seem all there half the time, she's proven herself. She's also part of why the larger FAC doesn't need a massive crew to operate.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Picked Mostly picked up over the early years of Jai's time as a bounty hunter after his time in the Agents of Chaos; Ki'Tala, Valan, Ila, and EW are considered the most trusted of the crew, and sort of the heads of the crew you could say. While the hierarchy of the ship is looser, when the going gets tough, these four are the ones who Jai trusts to get going.
 
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Jai'galaar Gred Jai'galaar Gred

Very interesting submission! I don't see crew subs often so its fun to see something a bit different! Overall a very good submission, but there are two changes that I need to see, one very minor and one that will take some time, from you before I can approve this.

The easy one is under Crew Information in Base of Operations, this is blank but given that they are the crew of the Cloud Breaker I would have it listed there. Also, while this isn't really a holdup for the sub but rather something to keep in mind, the Crew Size section is only for the crew members you're listing in this submission, total crew numbers are for the Factory.

Now for the more difficult and time consuming task, the languages of the crew members should be linked. While Basic and even Huttese can be left as is, the more unique and uncommon languages will need to be linked for ease of access. Thankfully there does seem to be a fair bit of overlap so this shouldn't take you too long.

Just tag me and let me know when the edits are done!
 
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