Approved Tech Chitin of Darth Xiphos

[Laertia Io]

• • Intent: To Sub a Unique Heavy Armor
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  • Image Source: https://www.deviantart.com/breloom-da-bassgod/art/Dark-Samus-corrupts-Death-Battle-596814726
  • Canon Link: N/A
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  • Primary Source: Heavy Armor
• PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Darth Themis , Arianna Belasko
  • Affiliation: Laertia Io
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Vonduun Skerr Kyrric
• TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multi-purpose Battle Armor
  • Weight: Very Heavy
  • Resistances
    • Energy: Very High
    • Kinetic: High
    • Lightsabers: High
    • Vibro: Low
    • Ion: High
    • Force: High
    • Explosive: High
    • Biological: High
    • Flames: High
    • Sonic: Extreme
    • Magnetics: High
  • • Acid: Very Low
    • Cryo: Extreme
    • Paddle Beams: None
    • Vong Weapons: Very Low
    • Anti-Vong Weapons: Very Low
    • Electricity: Low
• SPECIAL FEATURES

Heavily Modified and enchanted Vong Bio-Armor enabling her to have immense resistance to many common Battlefield threats in dealing with Bryn'adul Weaponry of a high energy, Explosive, or kinetic nature

Armor designed with natural, pain killing qualities, enabling Xiphos to use Armor without any risk of migraines and Phantom Pains, reducing all other pain to Extremely low levels.

Highly regenerative, healing Xiphos very quickly from all but the most fatal of wounds, and able to repair itself very quickly also in the span of 21 minutes

Capable of growing a built in Cryonic VibroMace on either arm that can cause heavy damage to Draelvasir Tissues and their most common metals, as well as heavily Damage Alchemized Materials

Enchanted to massively enhance Darth Xiphos's teleportation ability, enabling her to teleport very large or heavy inanimate objects, without the aid of ritual, as well as using her teleportation in a more direct, offensive matter against living beings.

Greatly enhances Xiphos's Command of Telekinesis, enabling her to learn and use offensive telekinetic powers while wearing this armor

Enhances Xiphos's extreme strength to an even greater degree, allowing her to go toe to toe with even the most imposing, physically resilient Humanoid and having a strong chance of overpowering them in combat, either by dueling, or through sheer, savage kinetic force from the blows from their hand, also enhances her speed and reflexes by 007 times

Fully Mobile

Upon contact with Drael Tissue or metals such as Verikast or Malabast, emits a deadly enzyme capable of eating through such metals, and capable of causing severe shock, agony and possibly death to even the hardiest Drael Humanoid after enough times of direct contact

Special organ in the Armor can generate a gravity swell, capable of slowing even the most physically powerful humanoid by a massive amount.

• STRENGTHS

A weapon to surpass Metal Gear: This incredibly formidable Armor can protect from Explosive, Kinetic, and Energy weapons used by the Bryn'adul based on captured infantry and spec ops weapons and in fact is specifically tailored to resist them. Should Drael flesh or Metal come into contact with it enough times, it will slowly formulate an enzyme best tailored to whatever Drael flesh or Metal that comes into contact with it after at least five direct instances of exposure, though it may take longer depending on the hardiness of the individual, protective substances in their body, and the thickness of the metal

Painkiller: Kills nearly all sensation of pain, allowing Xiphos to use the Force without fear of Migraines or Phantom Pains

Focuser: Enhances Her Telekinetic abilities by a high degree, enabling her to learn and use offensive telekinetic powers while wearing this armor. Also massively enhances her teleport ability, enabling her to teleport large objects, even people, though with people, especially Force Adepts, she must strain massively. It can also provide a high resistance against Force Powers in General

Cold Storage: Capable of growing a powerful, incredibly damaging cryo energy infused mace from its flesh due to a combination of alchemy and genetic alterations, capable of heavily damaging nearly all forms of metal, but especially Alchemized Materials, even those specifically made to absorb energy, and is capable of being severely damaging to Draelvasir Physiology no matter the resilience and hardiness of the victim. The genetic splicing and alterations to achieve this were taken from Amphistaff DNA

Gravity: It's secondary weapon is an organ whose genetics come from Dovin Basals that generates a gravity swell in a 007 meter radius around it that has a high chance of severely slowing even the hardiest, most physically powerful humanoid.

Enhancer: Enhances Xiphos's already extreme strength to an even greater degree, allowing her to fully grapple and potentially overpower even the absolute strongest humanoids, and enhances her speed and reflexes by 007 times their usual limit

Mobility: Allows for full mobility

Regenerative: Capable of rapidly repairing itself and all but the most lethal wounds in Xiphos in the span of 21 minutes, and also has high resistance to standard Biological attacks

• WEAKNESSES

Force Voids. Loses its Enchanted features and all defenses drop by one rating in Force Voids

Vibro: For all it's protective features, it's still vulnerable to Vibro weapons

Vong: Vulnerable to Vong Weapons, Particularly Amphistaffs and their venom. Amphistaffs will cut through the Armor without effort, and Amphistaff Venom burns through it easily

Anti-Vong: Also vulnerable to weapons that kill vong tissues, which cause it to bruise and become necrotic unless treated immediately with the Light Side of The Force

Acid: Eats through the Armor quickly unless counter agents are used.

One or the other: It can use the Cryo Mace or the Gravity Swell Organ, not both at the same time

Paddle Beams: The armor locks up for a few seconds if struck, allowing a blow in.

Electricity:While electricity won't kill it, it will heavily stun it instead

Swell Weaknesses: The Gravity Swell Organ can only remain active for one minute before it needs 007 minutes to recharge

Mace Weakness: If using the Mace function, it acts as a lightning rod

Teleport weakness: Laertia can teleport large objects only once every 007 minutes

• DESCRIPTION

As Xiphos has grown in power and her war with Multiple Factions heats up, so to have her protective requirements raised. Her two staunchest benefactors, Darth Themis and Arianna Belasko, set to work crafting this custom Vong Bio Power Armor, perfectly tailored to resist not Just Bryn'adul, but Jedi and even Sith as well. While not without it's vulnerability, The Chitin of Darth Xiphos is unquestionably Next Generation Sith Armor

 

[Felix Aquila]

Hello, I'll be judging this one Laertia Io

 

[Felix Aquila]

Apologies, but there is some work to do on this one.

Your technical specifications are balanced.

Heavily Modified and enchanted Vong Bio-Armor enabling her to have immense resistance to many common Battlefield threats in dealing with The Bryn'adul's types of weaponry

This is far too broad, you can't use total catch-alls to simply say an armour is good against ALL kinds of an entire races weapons. It would be akin to saying 'All chiss weapons' or 'all human weapons.' Please be specific about certain kinds of weapons used by the Bryn. Which is not an invitation to simply go and list them 'all' please keep it within reason. This pertains to its reference in strengths also

Highly regenerative, healing Xiphos very quickly from all but the most fatal of wounds, and able to repair itself very quickly also.

At what pace? Does it recover in seconds? Minutes? Hours? Days? Regrowing an arm in a month medically could still be considered 'very quick.' So this needs more info. This pertains to its mention in strengths also.

Capable of growing a built in continuous cryo beam cannon on either arm that can cause heavy damage to Draelvasir Tissues and their most common metals, as well as heavily Damage Alchemized Materials.

Cold Storage: Capable of growing a powerful, incredibly damaging continuous cryo laser from its enchanted flesh, capable of heavily damaging nearly all forms of metal, but especially Alchemized Materials, even those specifically made to absorb energy, and is capable of being severely damaging to Draelvasir Physiology no matter the resilience and hardiness of the victim.

These are... odd, ok so i think you're saying that this living crab armour is able to grow cry cannons because it is enchanted to do so. That needs to be explained more clearly please. Also, With how unique these weapons are they're 100% going to require links to cannon sources to support Living bioweapon / force cryo beams or have their own app.

Special organ in the Armor can generate a gravity swell, capable of slowing even the most physically powerful humanoid by a massive amount.

The language here, and throughout some of this app is incredibly absolute. Remember there are exceptions to every rule.

As for weaknesses, you're missing a couple, many of your weaknesses merely represent the weaknesses that are built into your technical specifications. Those weaknesses are required to be printed here, but do not compile to merit against the myriad advantages you've added in addition to the armours defenses. You're going to need at least one big combat weakness that applies to this armour. Some suggestions include: Maybe an interraction with electricity, seeing as force lightning traditionally killed crab armour, maybe it stuns the armour. Or smoke could make it choke. or other weaknesses based on it being a living creature.

 

[Laertia Io]

Have heavily altered Strength and Weakness, and done my best to incorporate suggestions thus far offered by you Felix Aquila

 

[Felix Aquila]

Laertia Io Ok, this is a really powerful app, I think my only issue now is how those enzymes are worded. The fact that on contact with something you can just instantly create an enzyme which is capable of killing / annihilating something it comes into contact with. I don't think i would mind if it was something that the armour adapted / produced after contact with a substance if it took a few moments to develop / swap them. But as it stands its just a one swing one kill beatstick that eats through any armour and kills any Bryn. Which also isn't how enzymes work.

This could be fixed with something as little as "on contact the weapon begins to develop an enzyme, a speed in which depends on how frequently the weapon has come into contact with the bryn metal or substance or the complexity of the new substance. After its creation attacks with the staff use the enzyme to ______" etc etc.

 

[Laertia Io]

Made edits along your line of suggestions, Felix Aquila

 

[Felix Aquila]

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