Carrack MK. II

[Isis Varida]

Image Credit: http://euderion.devi...Widow-540098278
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Affiliation: Open Market
Manufacturer: Damorian Manufacturing
Model: Carrack Class MK II
Modularity: Comes in different colors and optional leather seats
Production: Mass-Produced
Material:

• Quadranian Steel Frame
• Bronzium Reinforcement
• Alusteel Interior Hull
• Gadolinium/Neutronium-Agrinium Mesh
• Matrix Exterior Plating
• Crystalsteel Viewports
• Turadium Blastdoors
• Thermal Gel
• Sealant Foam

Classification: Corvette

Length: 350m
Width: 80m
Height: 50m

Armament:

• 10 H9 turbolaser
• 10 Plasma Railgun
• 10 Ion Railgun
• 10 Point Defense Flak gun
• 4 Ion Encumbrance Package
• 4 Proton torpedo launcher
• 1 Proton beam cannon

Hangar: N/A
Special Features:
Ship Systems:

• Compartmentalized Life support systems
• Modular Compartment
• Communications Array
• Primary Hyperdrive
• Solar Ionization Reactor
• Hypermatter Secondary Reactor
• Advanced Navigational Computer
• Military Grade Shielding
• Docking Port
• Communications Array
• Encryption Network
• Holonet Transceiver
• Escape Pods
• Hyperwave Signal Interceptor
• Repulsorlift Stabilizers
• Atmospheric Flight Stabilizers
• Hydrostatic Fields
• Cap Drains
• Tractor Beam/Pressor Beam Projectors (4)
• Blackout light
• Containment shield
• Clan Heart Reactor
• 
  Living Module
  
• 
  Variable Plating
  

Advanced Systems:

• EMP/Ion Shielding
• Advanced Radiation Shielding
• Double-Redundant shield generators
• Ion shield generator
• Antimissile octet
• Atmospheric thrusters
• Attitude thruster
• Dual-drive system
• LCC-33 Blaster Overcharge system
• KC5 capacitor component
• Auto-tracking fire controller
• Txs-431 flight control console
• Voice-activated computer

Modular Compartment:

• Medical Bay
• Machine Shop
• Alchemy Lab
• Meditation Chamber
• Armory

Maneuverability Rating: 12
Speed Rating: 10
Hyperdrive Class: 1

Strengths:

• Beastly: It might not be the prettiest but the Carrack has taken its old canon roots and improved upon them in everyway possible adding to its appeal as a weapon of any fleet.
• Multi Functional: The ship is a hybrid able to work towards different goals and take on different roles within a fleet as it works be it anti fighter support, quick attack or a surprise assault.

Weaknesses:

• Significant Power draw: While it has a large number of systems the ship has compartmentalized its reactors to power them as needed. The computer doesn't run everything aside from life support which is always running.

Description: Built by Damorian as an advanced and upgraded version of the classic Carrack, the Liran designed and operated ship is constructed to fit within several roles for a fleet. Its own versatility though is paired with the modular third compartment that can be outfitted as needed.
Development Thread:

• Dominion of Drunkenwell - Testing Prototype
• Above Board - Upgrades
• Inquisition of Sekalus
• Inquisition of Sekalushttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/67487-inquisition-of-sekalus-part-2-of-3/
• Inquisition of Sekalushttp://starwarsrp.net/topic/69094-inquisition-of-sekalus-part-3-cotbr/page-1
• In the Bloodworks

Intent: To create an upgraded Carrack the main ship from Damorian and bring it out with some new upgrades
Who Can Use This: Whoever pays for it
Primary Source:
Carrack Class Light Cruiser

 

[Domino]

Alright, I promised you a critique, this wont be nice rainbows and sunshine, just my honest thoughts and opinions.

1. Your image looks nothing like the Carrack so its hard to see this as a spiritual successor.
2. Ditch the pulse-wave cannons. The wording on them is vague and they were only better than the lasers of their time indicating that lasers later out-performed them anyways.
3. Your weakness is poorly worded making it confusing to read and unclear what it means. Does the reactor only power a few things at a time, are their multiple reactors for the compartments, are systems compartmentalized?
4. Your description of course needs to be finished. This can be used to describe in more detail your materials and where some are being used.
5. An anti-missile octet is a weapon, not a ship system.
6. Your ship systems need looking at again, standard things that don't need listing are and some stuff is listed in advanced that shouldn't be and some in the normal that should be in the advanced.

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