Approved Tech Captain Isidor Justeene's Blaster Rifle

[Isidor Justeene]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To Sub a sidearm for Isidor Justeene
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: Blaster Rifles

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Isidor Justeene
• Affiliation: Isidor Justeene
• Market Status: Closed Market
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material:
  • Durasteel
  • Blaster Components
  • Leather Holster
  • Recoil dampening material

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Blaster
• Size: Average
• Weight: Heavy
• Ammunition Type:
  • Power cell
  • Gas canister
• Ammunition Capacity: Very Large
• Effective Range: Long Range
• Rate of Fire: Very High
• Damage Output: High
• Recoil: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• High-Velocity Bolts
• Scope
• Large Ammunition capacity
• Cooling mechanism
• Recoil dampening material

STRENGTHS

• High Damage Yield
• It can be effective against medium armour

WEAKNESSES

• High Recoil

DESCRIPTION

A custom Blaster Rifle constructed and used by Captain Isidor Justeene to be used for long-range battles and skirmishes. The ammunition packs and gas canisters are modified for 200 rounds and can be ejected and replaced when emptied quickly. The barrel has a cooling mechanism to prevent overheating and plasma jams. The scope was added to increase the accuracy of fire from long-range engagements or used to aid in the sniping of opponents.

Dampening padding is added to the hock to reduce the effects of the recoil it produces when firing which limits the damage to Isidor’s shoulder when it is in use.

 

[MANIAC]

Isidor Justeene

Oh, very nice weapon!

• Your ratings are bit overpowered (+1), please fix it.
• "Ammunition Capacity: Very High"; This is Very Large, please fix this too.
• "Able to pierce medium grade armour"; here, please try to put it more finely, as the PC will decide if it was successful or not. I suggest you write "it can be effective against medium armour" or "it has large/great firepower".

 

[Isidor Justeene]

MANIAC

Edits:

• Changed Damage output rating
• Reworded the strength to it can be effective against medium armour

 

[MANIAC]

Isidor Justeene

Thank you! One small remark, the second weakness. That is more a strength, because this is a unique weapon with closed market status, so in game technically, no one else can use it, only you. So it just makes it more certain for the character that no one else will use it. I suggest to remove it.

 

[Isidor Justeene]

MANIAC

Edits:

• Weakness removed

 

[MANIAC]

Isidor Justeene

Thank you for your cooperation!

Approved.