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Approved Starship Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser

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BUURENAAR

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create a Carrier Cruiser for Rishi Grand Fleet and The Mandalorian Enclave
  • Image Source: Link
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communication & Sensor Systems
  • Standard Emergency Systems
  • Standard Gravitational Systems
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Internal Management
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Power Generation
  • Standard Power Management
  • Standard Propulsion System
  • Standard Life-Support Systems
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Siege Camp: Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser is a very durable Carrier Cruiser that is able to withstand enemies' offeneses, especially effective in its role in sustaining planetary blockade.
  • Wrath of Rishi: Equipped with a hangar that can hold up to nine gunship and dropship squadrons, Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser main role is as the spearhead to Rishi Grand Fleet planetary blockade and aerial invasion. The sightings of multiple Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruisers over the orbit spells doomsday over anyone on the receiving side of the wrath of Rishi Enclave.
WEAKNESSES
  • Chonky Boi: Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser is a large Carrier Cruiser that has a chunkier build compared to other Carrier Cruisers with similar length. As a result, it has a low maneuverability and speed, as well as an easy target for enemy's fleets.
  • Gaping Hangar Bay: Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser's operational hangar, which could fit up to nine gunship and dropship squadrons, also poses as a vulnerable spot of the ship. Located at the front of the Carrier Cruiser, the huge hangar bay is prone to direct fire from the front. A perfectly timed shot on the open hangar would cause a vital damage to Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser.
  • Low Firepower: Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser was not designed to be an offensive cruiser. It has low offensive capabilities and firepower compared to other cruisers of the same size.
DESCRIPTION

Buurenaar-class Carrier Cruiser was created by Rishi Enclave Foundry on behalf of Rishi Grand Fleet, Gar Shale's project on moving Rishi Enclave out of its decades long isolation. As the name suggest, Buurenaar is a Carrier Cruiser that was designed for planetary blockade and aerial invasion purpose. Its defensive armaments allow the Carrier Cruiser to withstand enemies' barrages while maintaining siege position. The large build of the cruiser does limit its maneuverability and provides a bigger target for enemy's fleet, which is a weakness of the cruiser, and requires the full support of Rishi Grand Fleet to overcome.

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Gar Shale Gar Shale

Hello there, I'll be reviewing this sub today. Mostly everything looks good; all your links appear to be in order, but I do have one small adjustment to request.

Armament: Low

The total count of armaments is a bit high for a rating of Low. For it's size, I'd say this would equal an Average rating at minimum. Please either adjust the total amount of batteries it possesses or increase the Armaments rating and adjust accordingly.

Please let me know when edits are complete, thank you!
 
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