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Approved Starship Bryn'adûl | Striker Shards

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create an assault transport for Zealots, with a twist
  • Image Source: X & Y
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: The Bryn’adûl
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Atmospheric Dropship
  • Length: 10 meters
  • Width: 4 meters
  • Height: 25 meters
  • Armament: Very Low
  • Defenses: Very Low
  • Squadron Count: Low: 8
  • Maneuverability Rating: Extreme
  • Speed Rating: Extreme
  • Hyperdrive Class: None
STANDARD FEATURES
  • All Standard Features
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • - Photosynthesis: Striker Shards are usually attached to the outer hull of a Phedrak Carrier when attached to the hull of a Carrier, all Striker Shards enter a state of hibernation and are able to refuel themselves by absorbing radiation from a nearby star. This refuels both their weaponry and thruster fuel.
  • Claw Attack: Extreme speed allows for a strong kinetic impact with the blade, thus allowing for chopping.
  • Assault transport: Acts like a dropship/transport in bringing Zealots closer to their targets.
  • Dual Upgraded Plasma Cannons [Higher fire rate]
STRENGTHS
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  • Rawr: Don't let this claw fool you, at the speed that the Striker Shard is flying at, the impact with its claw can break through shields and slice straight through most metals. (This does count as partially crashing, and can reduce current speed)
  • Speedy Gonzales. Did we already mention their speed? It’s pretty fast.
WEAKNESSES
  • Organic: It's still a meatbag under that malabast. Not metal all throughout, only on the outside. If you get through the metal it's an easy-to-kill organism.
  • You can’t miss it: Stands out amongst other fighters and starships, making it an easier target.
DESCRIPTION
(ALL DAMAGE IS UP TO OPPONENT, EVERYTHING HERE IS JUST AN EXAMPLE)​

Fitting 5 Zealots quite comfortably, the Striker Shard is a fast assault transport with a built-in claw. It has the original biomass grafted with malabast to protect it from external damage, and then the blade itself is completely made of malabast. Pilots use this blade to try to chop through anything opposing them, with a very high percentage of these being successful. A Zealot exclusive, the Striker Shard is fast bioconstruct with one purpose: getting a Zealot closer to their target, and maybe chopping through something on the way to show how weak the chopped structure/starfighter/material/etc is.
 
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We have a few problems...but this is my first organic starship review!


Permissions: The Bryn’adûl
Manufacturer: The Bryn’adûl
Affiliation: The Bryn’adûl
These links are broken, please repair!

Weakness:
No hyperdrive: Cannot escape a battle by jumping to hyperspace, so it requires other ships to function.
This is not an applicable weakness, remove it.


Also by ratings calculation...you are under three ratings. Would you like to buff up some ratings? All on you.


Let me know when you made the two changes and if you decide to change up some ratings!
Kyrim Tenebris Kyrim Tenebris
 
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