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Approved NPC Bryn'adûl | Dreddikkast Beast

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The Bryn'adûl | Dreddikast Beast
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a traversal war mount for Tathra.
  • ​Image Credit: X
  • Role: War Mount
  • Links: N/A
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 7
  • Force Sensitivity: Force User
  • Species: Valliphicarus/Crellderath Mutant Hybrid
  • Appearance: At a distance, the Dreddikast is a myriad of gargantuan black daggers embedded in flesh. A ebony terror of nearly sixty metres in length, with a wing breadth of one-hundred and thirty metres. The Dreddikast has a total of eighteen limbs, twelve of which are the massive tendril like wings that extend from its torso. Its jagged exoskeletal structure carries four long cylinders at collar, emitting a deep amber light from their exhausts.
​Its centre mass is typically an indiscernible torso of thick flesh, long draconic legs and arms intertwined with the middling wings of its body. Its head is crowned by excessively angular horns embedded into a narrow and featureless face, expressionless and still.

​Its body is dotted by near hundred small spurned eyes, watching all.


SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Dreddikast Beast
  • Loyalties: The Bryn'adûl | Tathra Khaeus
  • Notable Possessions: N/A
  • Personality: The Dreddikast is deathly silent, calm & obedient. Its malevolence sits deep, chambered within its skulking blackness. An evil that never tires nor sleeps, waking eyes observe every inch of its vicinity.
  • Training: The Dreddikast has spent the majority of its seven year life span under strenuous training. The Dreddikast is a sentient beast, and can wield the force and act as a commander of lesser beasts and also serve as a space and ground worthy mount.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Combat Function: The Dreddikast is a sentient force wielder; accomplishing impressive feats of Battle Meditation, and a powerful Force Scream, a cry of hatred that stung the very ears like venom carrying Fear to all within the grasp of its malice. The Dreddikast also serves as a competent War Beast, delivering Tathra from both land and space. The Dreddikast can also easily attack and destroy enemy fighters or beats using its sharp exterior.
Strengths:
  • Force Wielder: The Dreddikast is an intelligent being that wields the force with some great aptitude, and thusly can create issues for force wielders and generate benefits for the Bryn'adûl through passive means.
  • ​Many Limbed: The Dreddikast has many limbs, all of which can function independently, usable for flight of great speed and defence.
  • ​Strong Armed: The outer armour of the many tendril wings is incredibly tough, nigh indestructible.
  • ​Obedience: Tathra, Chieftain of the Bryn'adûl is this beasts sole master. He alone can command it.
Weaknesses:
  • Fprce Light: The Dreddikast, whilst not made inherently from the dark-side; its mastery of the force reigns from the dark and thusly can be damaged by Force Light.
  • ​Stationary: The Dreddikast must become stationary to use Battle Meditation.
  • ​Planet-Side: Must be planet-side to use its other force abilities.
  • ​Weak Spots: The most vulnerable parts of the Dreddikast is its larger eyes along the wings attached to its forearm, and the large centre eye on its lower abdomen. These are essentially large weakspots that can seriously hinder its offensive & flight capability.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
​The Dreddikast was birthed a mutant, twisted from the bowels of both Crell and Valliphicarus. The Dreddikast is a beast, sole member of its kind. It is a remarkable intelligent beast, trained by only the Chieftain himself and the most prestigious beast masters within the Bryn'adûl; its strength fostered from within the malice they held for the Galaxy.

The Dreddikast is Chieftain Tathra's personal Mount and is destined for great servitude in the Conquest to come.
 
Interesting Submission [member="Tathra Khaeus"]



Tathra Khaeus said:
Weaknesses:
Fprce Light: The Dreddikast, whilst not made inherently from the dark-side; its mastery of the force reigns from the dark and thusly can be damaged by Force Light. ​
Stationary: The Dreddikast must become stationary to use Battle Meditation.
​Planet-Side: Must be planet-side to use its other force abilities.

A few suggestions about its Strengths and Weaknesses.

First, you've accidentally misspelled Force. Nothing important, but I'm sure like me you'd look at it one day and wish it were changed.

Second, given the size and strength of this creature, its weaknesses don't really balance out for a creature of this size. I think it could use an exploitable weakness or two for a person on the ground to help balance it.
 
[member="Laira Darkhold"]
You don't know about the mighty Fprce? Some star wars fan..
I'll change that in a second.

What about some sort of weak spot on its belly?

Its not really supposed to be faced on foot, but do you have any suggestions?
 
[member="Tathra Khaeus"]

A weakspot would be something, it does look like there is a central eye that could be exploited for such purposes if you wanted.

Let me know what you decide.
 
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