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Approved Tech Bryn'adûl | Barricas Oil

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Essentially an oil put on swords that is the Draelvasier equivalent to vibro-sword technology.
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Name: Barricas Oil
  • Manufacturer: The Bryn'adûl
  • Affiliation: The Bryn'adûl
  • Homeworld: N/A

  • Production: Mass-Produced
  • Modularity: N/A
  • Legal Status: Legal within Bryn'adûl borders
  • Ingredients: Mixture of liquids
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: Oil
  • Method of Consumption: N/A Oral - However it is strongly advised you do not do this.
  • Nutritional Value/Allergies/Side Effects/ Purpose: The purpose of the Oil is to coat metal with a superheat resistant oil that essentially allows Blades and weaponry to be effective against sabres and blasters.
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Oil: The Oil provides a benefit of defence against lightsaber and blaster attacks.
Strengths:
  • Saber Defence: The Oil provides defence against lightsaber strikes.
Weaknesses:
  • Degradation: Over time, this oil can be worn away and will eventually give way to Saber strikes.
DESCRIPTION:
​A mass produced oil used to produce an effect of defence against lightsaber wielding opponents for use by larger groupings of military units within the Bryn'adûl. This oil is used by various divisions of the Barricas, such as the Brutes, Zealots & Drones. The oil was produced in Bryn'adûl facilities on Caradim in 857ABY, produced as part of a project detailing a synthesis of organic tissue and equipment. The intention was to create a synthetic property equivalent to the robust heat defence naturally produced by Draelvasier skin, able to be applied to equipment.
 
[member="Tathra Khaeus"],

I like the idea behind this. Something that can be applied to arms so that they can be more resistant.

However, I feel like there isn't really enough description to warrant an approval. There isn't anything in here about how it was made, who made it, was it supposed to be meant for something else and by happen chance it was good for a different purpose? Because right now? All I get from this submission was "An oil made by some handwaved liquids into a concoction that was made by a specific group of people to combat lightsabers." When there are a multitude of other items, other resources, and even Canon items that could easily be used instead of this.

What makes it different from the rest?
 
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