Approved Location Brakand Valley

[Vale Vynar]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To Create a training course for Vale Vynar and Eenia Vahn to use.
• Image Credit: N/A
• Canon: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Links: Rhigar

SETTING INFORMATION

• Landmark Name: Brakand Valley
• Classification: Canyon
• Location: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rhigar
• Affiliation: N/A
• Size: Massive
• Population: Uninhabited
• Demographics: N/A
• Accessibility: It is isolated away from any center of civilization.
• Description: It is an impressively large canyon filled with horrible things that no one would want to enter willingly.

POINTS OF INTEREST
The Dead Towers – Mark the entrance to the Brakand Valley with two large stone structures covered in ancient writings of a long forgotten language.

The Razor Way – Makes up the majority of the Brakand Valley. Razor sharp rocks that jut out at extreme angles and hide pitfalls and caves that house Groltan dens.

The Hollows – An intricate network of caves that intersect throughout the Valley at various points.



HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Brakand Valley has been used for millenia as a training ground for Dark Force users given it's unforgiving terrain and inhospitable weather. It is not expected for those who enter the Valley to emerge on the other side, and the ones that do usually never come out the same from the harsh experience.

Besides being filled with razor sharp rocks and fragile sheets of ice that could give way and send someone plummeting to the cold depths of Rhigar, the Valley is filled with all maner of inhospitable creatures, most notably the Groltan packs that call its deadly cave networks home.

 

[Kalic Daws]

Hello Vale Vynar . This looks awesome, but there are a few issues.

Firstly, you shouldn't delete potions of the template that you don't need, and should simply put "N/A" As it stands, the Out of Character section should look like this:

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: [ State why you are making this submission and what purpose it will fulfill in RP. ]
• Image Credit: [ Provide credit to the original artist of the images in your submission. Link to the web page where it can be found and state the name of the original artist if possible. Each image used must be credited. Use TinyEye, Google Image Search, or the Image Credit FAQ to help.]
• Canon: [ Is this a canon location? If yes, link to the original wiki article here, if no simply put N/A. ]
• Permissions: [Please link any Marketplace purchase or similar approvals to use other Writers’ content as part of this submission.]
• Links: [ Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, etc here. Canon or otherwise. Especially obscure references, or events important to the submission.]

Second, and a bigger issue is that you include two picture, but do not link where they come from. You need to put credit in for where these came from.

 

[Vale Vynar]

Kalic Daws I removed the picture links because I couldn't find the original sources and I fixed the OOC section.

 

[Kalic Daws]

Vale Vynar Ok. Looks good now. Approved.