Approved Tech Bow and Arrow

[Ezra Nelson]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a bow and arrow for Ezra Nelson
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Ezra Nelson
• Affiliation: Ezra Nelson
• Model: EN-1
• Modularity: Yes (String can be reinforced or replaced, bow material can be changed.)
• Production: Unique
• Material: Plastiflex, String.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Bow and Arrow
• Size: Large
• Weight: Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Arrows
• Ammunition Capacity: High | 100
• Effective Range: Battlefield
• Rate of Fire: High
• Stopping Power: None
• Recoil: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Resistant to EMPs

STRENGTHS

• Undetectable to Scanners: Since most scanners are looking for electronic weapons or the like, they would be unable to detect the bow and arrow as it employs no electronics in it whatsoever. This is what makes it immune to being detected by scanners.
• Easy to Shoot

WEAKNESSES

• Slow to Reload: Reloading the Bow and Arrow isn't as easy as a blaster, or similar. You must string the arrows individually.
• Easy to Break: Superstrength, Cybernetics, the Force and the Like would have a very easy time wrecking this bow and arrow. In fact, it wouldn't tale much to destroy the bow and arrow. Shoot the handle, slash the string.
• Acid Vulnerability: The bow and arrow is vulnerable to acid.
• Limited Ammunition: Ammunition depends on how many quivers of arrows the person can manage to carry on their person at any one time.

DESCRIPTION

The bow and arrow was created by Ezra Nelson on the world of Denon after his brother was captured by the security forces of the world, known as Corpos. Using the material known as Plastiflex to create the bow itself. As a result this makes it a bit more durable than a conventional wooden bow and arrow actually would be. In addition to that, one of the unique things about the bow and arrow is the leather on the bow itself, and the "draconic" look the bow and arrow has. These make it a masterpiece of craftsmanship.

It's a bow and arrow that's easy to recreate out of pretty much any material one could get their hands on.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

under review

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Ezra Nelson

Thanks for taking the time to use the factory. I will be running through the review process of this sub with you.

• Production: Unique +4

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Bow and Arrow
• Size: Large +1
• Weight: Heavy +1
• Ammunition Type: Arrows
• Ammunition Capacity: High | 100 +1
• Effective Range: Battlefield -2
• Rate of Fire: High -1
• Stopping Power: High -1
• Recoil: Average +0

You're actually showing up as 1 point underpowered on the ratings balance. Feel free to increase a single rating by one point if you like.

STRENGTHS

• Undetectable to Scanners
• Easy to Shoot

WEAKNESSES

• Slow to Reload: Reloading the Bow and Arrow isn't as easy as a blaster, or similar. You must string the arrows individually.
• Easy to Break

Can you please elaborate on your weaknesses here? They're really broad right now.

DESCRIPTION

After his brother was captured by Corpos Ezra made this bow and arrow. He then picked it up and has taken over as Archer. This is a traditional bow and arrow, something he always keeps on him as the new Archer.

If you would be so kind as to expand on this area here, that would be fantastic. How did this weapon come to be? What makes it unique? Anything special about its function or design? Etc.

Please tag me with any edit/modifications made to this submission

 

[Ezra Nelson]

Jorik Valnora
Lowered the Rate of Fire, Increased the Recoil, Did the edit you wanted, and added more weaknesses.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Ezra Nelson

I was actually suggesting that you make your submission stronger. I.e. upping a rating like rate of fire instead of lowering it further.

STRENGTHS

• Undetectable to Scanners
• Easy to Shoot

For this, can you please elaborate a little on how this weapon is undetectable to scanners? Thanks

Also, if you could add a little bit to your description section, that would be amazing. How did this weapon come to be? What makes it unique? Anything special about its function or design? Etc.

Please remember to tag me with any modifications made.

 

[Ezra Nelson]

Jorik Valnora The bow and arrow is done, I believe. Hopefully what I wrote in would make it functional and acceptable.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Ezra Nelson

Much better overall, however one of the changes you made won't work.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Bow and Arrow
• Size: Large
• Weight: Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Arrows
• Ammunition Capacity: High | 100
• Effective Range: Battlefield
• Rate of Fire: High
• Stopping Power: Varies (Depends on arrows.)
• Recoil: High

For what I highlighted, I'm going to need you to pick one of the actual ratings outlined in the template instead of putting "varies"

 

[Ezra Nelson]

See, I put varies on it because the stopping power depends on the arrows he uses. Jorik Valnora

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Ezra Nelson

If that's the case, you'll need to link the subs to those arrows or break down the stopping power with each type. But we need a little more detail/precision here with the ratings.

 

[Ezra Nelson]

Jorik Valnora Fixed the stopping power of the Bow.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Ezra Nelson

Maybe I have worded this previously in a way that was pushing a thought differently than how I was initially intending. You can certainly have stopping power on the bow, we just need there to be a rating. Although this is passable as is in the ratings department, now....I want to make sure you're getting the sub you want within the confines of the site/factory rules.

 

[Ezra Nelson]

Jorik Valnora It will work just fine as it is, since the bow itself has no stopping power.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Ezra Nelson

One final look through here, I've got 2 final things for you.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a bow and arrow for Ezra Nelson
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

Although Pinterest is great for finding images, it doesn't actually give the needed credit to the content creator that we strive to. I'd suggest using this to serve as your image source instead.

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Ezra Nelson
• Affiliation: Ezra Nelson

I understand this is you, but if you could actually link yourself for the manufacturer/affiliation, that would be greatly appreciated.

 

[Ezra Nelson]

Jorik Valnora It was linked already but I've removed the coloring on it and linked it again. All the edits you've wanted have been done.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Ezra Nelson

Enjoy your bow

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