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Tech Review BMC Jedi Assistance Biot

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a line of droids
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  • Image Source: Mission Impossible Rogue Nation
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Assassin droid
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: Fourth Degree
  • Weight: Average
  • Height: Average
  • Movement: Bipedal
  • Armaments: Itself,
Rifles (Blasters): DLT-19 OR DC-15A OR DC-15S

Pistols (Blasters): Mandalorian Blaster Pistol OR Nightsister Energy Bow Pistol

Rifles (Slugthrowers): Epican Semi-Auto Rifle OR House Lagan'Ia Skirmish Rifle

Pistols (Slugthrowers): Epican Semi-Auto Pistol OR Type 11 Pistol

Heavy: Obsolete Grenade Launcher OR Gun-Works Angus-1
  • Misc. Equipment: BMC High Defense X-Wing
  • Resistances
    • Energy: Very Low
    • Kinetic: Extreme
    • Lightsabers: High
    • Other: EMP/Ion/Microwave: Very High
    • Flame: Very Low
    • Cryo: Very Low
    • Acid: Extreme
    • Sonic: None
    • Force: Very High (Telepathy, Ionize, Life Drain, Mechu-Deru only)
    • Vacuum/Pressure: Average
    • Biological (Radiation/Poison/Disease): Very High
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Sentient cluster of cells based off of Qreph Brother Biot Tissue, Ooglith Masquers blended with the genetics of Bio Reactors, plants, and Conduit Worms, able to harden and shape themselves into a Humanoid appearance. Feeds off bio electric energy or wirelessly feeds on nearby energy sources to regenerate via touch. Capable of doing this even if damage has occured over most of its body
  • Special sacks inside body for converting raw plant matter into Biot Nutrient.
  • Capable of emitting a severe, touch based electric shock
  • Extensive organic Melee Database
  • Extensive organic ranged weapon database
  • Extensive organic Starfighter Database
  • Four times faster and more reflexive than a normal human and twice as strong
  • Several times smarter than an average human
  • Programmed to aid the Jedi Order
  • Capable of altering it's appearance with gene resequencing
  • Capable of seeing in Night Vision and Infrared, as well as X-Ray
  • Capable of accepting genetic upgrades
STRENGTHS
  • Hard to kill: The Biot has no traditional central nervous system or organs, due to being partly derived from Ooglith Masquers, Conduit Worms, and Plants, Instead, its muscle tissue doubles as Neural Tissue, due to being spliced with the genetics of Bio Reactors and Conduit Worms to have the power to maintain its shape (Conduit Worms Genetics give it's cells their high efficiency at storing raw power, as well as being able to draw in power via touch), meaning it can take an immense amount of damage and remain functional and alive. Even if severely damaged it can regenerate by feeding off a generator or a person and slowly repair itself over the course of twenty to thirty days from extensive damage (Certain wounds heal more quickly than others. For example, Very minor cuts, burns, or other such damage heal over the course of a day, while minor or larger examples take up to a week and a half on their own through a process that can't be sped up. Examples of extensive damage could require a month long period of immobility after feeding on energy). It is naturally resistant to certain applications of the Force, and it's genetics allow for extreme resilience against Acid and kinetic damage, in the latter case it's tissue is so resilient a direct strike from a heavy blunt object or Vibroweapons will only do possibly very mild damage It's genetics have also been modified against Ion, Electricity (To the point it can emit a possibly severe electric shock on occasion with enough stored energy), Magnetics, Disease, Radiation, and poisons, and it can also resist damage from lightsabers, capable of taking multiple direct blows and extended contact on the skin for about ten seconds before the tissue starts to break down
  • Olympian: four times faster and more reflexive than normal Humans, and twice as strong
  • Know-it-all: Possesses an extensive melee, Starfighter, and ranged weapon database and is several times smarter than an average human when fully functional. They are adept at detecting lies by ear alone. They are very highly resistant to being reprogrammed, whether technological or Force Based. They are also hard coded to not reveal who actually manufactured them and will lie to your face that they were made by Bacta-Works
  • Modularity: Can Accept genetic upgrades (Upgrades that can rapidly alter it's appearance or upgrades that alter it's resistances will require a new sub) Can alter it's appearance to nearly any species by default through hours of gene therapy.
  • Nutrients: It's has special sacks in it's body that release essential Biot Nutrients after raw, ingested plant matter is consumed and slowly converted into the high density substance, which is released into the body every three weeks for regular maintenance. It only needs to eat once a month in other words. (This does not apply if in a state of suspended animation.) A hold over of being based off of old research by two brothers
WEAKNESSES
  • Masquerade Failure: There is absolutely no way it's fooling a medical scanner that it is human
  • Reduced to instincts: The more damage it takes, the less smart it becomes in a fight. If burned all over it basically becomes an airhead until it repairs, it's basically little more than an animal on flight or fight instincts, and thus easily destroyed. It really is something of a Glass Cannon. And if it IS severely damaged to the point it's an animal it is effectively almost unable to pose a threat unless at very close range
  • Feeding weakness: It can only repair itself by feeding off a power source, whether biological or not. Bacta and Biotech kits do nothing. If it gets no power after seven months of constant operation, it shuts down, until it has power fed into it. After two weeks without a power source to feed the cells, after full shutdown, the mass deteriorates. It also cannot heal during combat, or during feeding, it must enter into a nonviolent state to properly process the energy it feeds of for the purposes of regeneration. It's feeding ability is limited to touch alone, and is incapable of killing an organic through feeding due to built in safety mechanisms
  • Cryo: Cryo damage can easily kill whatever part of the tissue it hits.
  • Flame: Flames rapidly burn through it
  • Sonic: Sonic Blasts cause it's flesh to lose the ability to maintain shape for a few minutes, rendering it easily destroyed
  • Asimov Resistant: Beyond it's preprogrammed loyalty to the Jedi and the Bloodscrawls, it's basically totally independent. And when outside the directives of serving the Jedi, or Bacta-Works, they tend to do as they please. Their independence may mark them for destruction by certain factions. They may also have very different ideas of what is tactically sound from a regular Jedi and there may be friction or the Biot may even attempt to restrain them if they perceive a suicidal decision
  • Blasters: Blasters tear through it easily, and the more damage blasters do to its structure,
  • Pure Warrior: These are real front towards enemy types, and despite their intelligence still favor aggressive approaches that may raise eyebrows. If this was a Bond film, they would be the Bond played by Timothy Dalton
  • Anti-Vong: Alpha Red can kill it in minutes without a counter agent. Baffer Pollen scrambles it's databases and renders it an immobile, loose mass of tissue for three hours, rendering it easily destroyed.
  • Nutrients weakness: If severely damaged, it prioritizes growing back any nutrient sacks if they were destroyed before it grows anything else back.
DESCRIPTION

A Biot created to assist the Jedi... whether they want it's help or not, BMC spared no expense in crafting an extremely deadly combat Android that can keep up with a Jedi on the battlefield, they were hidden away in special underground vaults of the planet Kytrand, awaiting activation. Upon discovery and activation by Nathan they immediately swore loyalty to the last living Bloodscrawl, obeying his directive to insert themselves into the workings of Bacta-Works and pretend to have been manufactured by the company. Jedi may not like their help, because it is the kind of help that tends to be pragmatic and reality focused rather than thinking with idealism, such as shooting someone the Jedi might not want shot in order to eliminate a threat to the life of the Jedi they guard...such extreme disobedience occurs under only the most arduous of circumstances, however. The creepy aspects only highlights the hesitation a Jedi should likely feel encountering such a helpful friend...
 
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Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
Nathan Bloodscrawl Nathan Bloodscrawl

Hello, I will be handling this today.

  • Energy: Very Low
  • Kinetic: Extreme
  • Lightsabers: High
  • Other: EMP/Ion/Microwave: Very High
  • Flame: Very Low
  • Cryo: Very Low
  • Acid: Extreme
  • Sonic: None
  • Magnetics: None
  • Electricity: High
  • Paddle Beams: None
  • Force: Very High (Telepathy, Ionize, Life Drain, Mechu-Deru)
  • Vibro: Very High
  • Vacuum/Pressure: Average
  • Biological (Radiation/Poison/Disease/Anti-Vong): Very High
EMP, paddle beams, Magnetics and Electricity can all be blanketed in the same resistance. dividing bloats the resistance. You have been told this before and asked to not do it previously.

Sentient cluster of cells based off Ooglith Masquers, able to harden and shape themselves into a Humanoid appearance. Feeds off bio electric energy or wirelessly feeds on nearby energy sources to regenerate. Capable of doing this even if damage has reduced it to just an arms worth of its mass, due to its muscle tissue doubling as Neural Tissue
To quote John

can you provide a source that shows that it can be modified in this way? I'm not even sure that the nervous system has enough power to charge the system.

Do you have a source that supports the ability to draw so much energy without flaw or losing anything?

Capable of hardening it's tissue and cells into knife or axe type weapons
Capable of making itself paper thin to fit through cracks, or reshaping it's mass to fit through even very small pipes
Capable of altering it's appearance
Infiltrator: It is extremely difficult to prevent the Biot from being able to break into a locked down facility, as it is capable of molding it's pliable tissue to be able to squeeze through small pipes or through cracks very easily. This ability to mold its tissue on that level allows it to form weapons out of its hand and legs, such as knives, axes, and hammers
So it is a T-1000? Almost to the point of crossover. Additionally outright saying that no one can stop it from bypassing anything they do it outside the spirit of cooperative roleplay that chaos seeks to foster. Yes we get that you like to win and god mod is important to you. Others might like to be able to shine and look like they are competent. That will need to be changed and the similarities to a T-1000 from alteration of appearance to making weapons changed.

Hard to kill: The Biot has no traditional central nervous system or organs. Instead, its muscle tissue doubles as Neural Tissue, meaning it can take an immense amount of damage and remain functional and alive. Even if reduced in mass to the size of an arm from damage, it can regenerate by feeding of a generator and a person and slowly repair itself over the course of several days from such extensive damage. It is naturally resistant to certain applications of the Force, and it's genetics allow for extreme resilience against Acid and kinetic damage, in the latter case it's tissue is so resilient a direct strike from a heavy blunt object will merely displace tissue to areas around the impact point instead of damaging it. It's genetics have also been modified against Ion, Electricity, Disease, Radiation, and poisons, and it can even tank damage from Alpha Red and Baffer Pollen, easily recovering from the latter two within minutes of exposure, and it can also resist damage from lightsabers, capable of taking multiple direct blows and extended contact on the skin for about ten seconds before the tissue starts to break down
As always god mod effects need to be scaled down. Not only can it not be hurt it can recover within minutes.

All and all this is a mess and just reads as the standard I win submission. As always scale it down heavily, work to make it more in the spirit of cooperation rather then you can just walk over everyone. Make sure all edit requests and questions are taken care of before tagging me.
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
Nathan Bloodscrawl Nathan Bloodscrawl

Material: Vong Biot Tissue
Sentient cluster of cells based off Ooglith Masquers blended with the genetics of Bio Reactors and plants, able to harden and shape themselves into a Humanoid appearance. Feeds off bio electric energy or wirelessly feeds on nearby energy sources to regenerate via touch. Capable of doing this even if damage has reduced it to just an arms worth of its mass, due to its muscle tissue doubling as Neural Tissue and a battery.

As always explained, vong biots were living creatures shaped the tissue doesn't do much without the creature. So please provide the canon source harvested tissue from a creature has all of the benefits of a living vong. This is just like miriskin which didn't work.
Do you have a source that supports the ability to draw so much energy without flaw or losing anything?

These things still need to be addressed. The tissue from a vong biot is just harvested from a creature. Majority of their things were living or byproducts of something living. Taking a piece of it would generally damage it at best. This is not a Tomie situation where any piece is stillits own thing.
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
Material: Vong Biot Tissue
For the third time this will need to be addressed. As always please make all required edits before replying it is done. Please address all edit requests. Altering one thing when there is a handful and making repeated requests for an edit of the same thing or clarification is why these take so long to get through.

Fighters are not misc equipment, this will need to be removed.

Sentient cluster of cells based off of Qreph Brother Biot Tissue, Ooglith Masquers blended with the genetics of Bio Reactors, plants, and Conduit Worms, able to harden and shape themselves into a Humanoid appearance. Feeds off bio electric energy or wirelessly feeds on nearby energy sources to regenerate via touch. Capable of doing this even if damage has occured over most of its body
To quote John

Do you have a source that supports the ability to draw so much energy without flaw or losing anything?

As always god mod effects need to be scaled down. Not only can it not be hurt it can recover within minutes.

All and all this is a mess and just reads as the standard I win submission. As always scale it down heavily, work to make it more in the spirit of cooperation rather then you can just walk over everyone. Make sure all edit requests and questions are taken care of before tagging me.
These things still need to be addressed. The tissue from a vong biot is just harvested from a creature. Majority of their things were living or byproducts of something living. Taking a piece of it would generally damage it at best. This is not a Tomie situation where any piece is stillits own thing.
The qreph brothers biots had metal with flesh over them that was grown. Usually from the DNA of a being that is how they made a Leia hybrid to serve them. Blending qreph, vong and plants into a genetic slurry that is faster, stronger and able to change their looks with no real issue. It won't be mass production, since you practically refuse to ever tone down the power levels a production of unique to semi-unique is the maximum that will pass and that is still with everything else being addressed and edited.
 

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