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Approved Location Base Genesis [Zoraster]

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Intent: To give Super TD-T47 a Personal Base
​Image Credit: https://evermotion.org/vbulletin/showthread.php?89980-Military-Base
Links: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Zoraster, CIS Mobile Command Center
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Military Base Name: Genesis Base
  • Classification: Weaponized Hideout
  • Location: Zoraster, http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Zoraster
  • Affiliation: Owned and Controlled by Super TD-T47
  • Population: 103 B1 Droids, 32 B2 Droids, 15 Droidekas, 3 WED Treadwell Repair Droids, 12 DUM-series Pit Droid, 7 R-series Astromech Droids, 12 Vulture Droids, 2 Hyena Bombers.
  • Accessibility: Genesis Base is located near the three tip cliffs in clear sight. However the system is so barren and empty, that the base is unknown. Only Super TD-T47 knows the coordinates, not even his crew has information about it. Occasionally he would bring guests or private friends to the base.
  • Description: The base is about a little over 250 meters long and has about 75 meter tall walls. The middle is a command center with 4 buildings and 1 central tower. The base was built upon by the prefabricated CIS mobile Command Centers from the C-9979 Landing Crafts. Many CIS mobile Command Centers were placed and additional upgrades and construction was then added. Outside of the main walls were landing pads, each one capable of fitting one C-9979 Landing Craft and its contents. Inside the walls were the main hangars where shuttles and starfighters landed. The base is a complete square with defense towers.
POINTS OF INTEREST
1 one of the 4 buildings in the middle is a salvaging and repair center for droids. The 2nd building is the main hangar where up to 15 Vulture Droids is stored. The 3rd building was a general store house for supplies and ammunition. The 4th building, in the middle, was the power generators that kept the base running. The Central Tower was the basis of all intelligence and commands for the base.

DEFENSES
12 Quad Turbolasers located on the walls and base floor. 15 Assault Laser Cannons were placed in the outer surface of the walls. 3 Turbolasers are located outside the walls on each side.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
After the Clone Wars, Super TD-T47 set up many prefabricated CIS Mobile Command Center in this location for future hideouts. Eventually the Empire collapsed, and was quickly developed into a base. Over time, credits were spent and the base was further upgraded.
 
[member="Super TD-T47"]

Please directly link to the wiki page of the planet, because right now it's just text. Am I understanding correctly that you basically took 50 canon command centers and meshed them together into a single base?
 
[member="Jairus Starvald"]

I don't understand the first part, the planet "Zoraster" is already linked to a Wiki page. Yes, this base is basically 50 bases into one large one with some upgrade and basic additional buildings.
 
[member="Super TD-T47"]

I briefly discussed the Codex's stance on combining canon bases to the degree that you are trying for here. We aren't comfortable with that. I am okay with the general concept of it, but please remove the '50' number here and leave that ambiguous.

With that- I also need you to cut back on the other numbers of your submission. From both your population and your defenses, because right now you got a lot of stuff going on here.

Tag me when you have made the appropriate edits and I will review it again.
 
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