Approved NPC B2 Battlion

[Tentoa]

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Name:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] B2 Battalion[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Intent: [/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px]The heavies of the Hutt Cartels forces.[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] Mella Industries, Hutt Cartel, Jackals.[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Availability:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] Uncommon[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Type:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] Infantry[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Strength:[/SIZE][SIZE=14.666666666666666px] 50[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Description: [/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]The B2 super battle droid was an upgraded version of the B1 battle droid, with superior armament and armor. in contrast to its precursor, the B2's delicate process unit and signal receptor were buried deep within the body part, giving way more protection from enemy assault. [/SIZE]Mella Industries, has been searching through the CIS records, reproducing their cheap alternative battle droid to field in the Hutt Cartel army, thus their list eventually landed on the B2 battledroid, construction was based on Mella foundries under Mella industries, and that was located on Kalandra, which is located on Drunkenwell.

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]The intention of the B2 battlion, is to ship out and towards the Hutt Cartel, and their sub-faction the Jackals, and to act as guards to Mella [/SIZE]Industries, and associates[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]. This will make up the heavies of the Cartel, strong and brash while allowing to have heavy weapons. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Links[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Source[/SIZE]​

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/B2_super_battle_droid​

Factory Submission​

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/59070-b2-super-battle-droid/​

 

[Boethiah]

Under review.

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Mongo Booshi Mella"]

Could you please add 2-3 full sentences to the description? It must be a paragraph in length. Also, the factory submission wouldn't count as a dev thread. Please don't rename the links field to 'Primary-Source' either. The Template is not to be altered. What you could do is just add "Source" and "Factory Submission" under the "Links" field to reflect them.

 

[Tentoa]

[member="Anja Aj'Rou"], done.

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Mongo Booshi Mella"]

Thanks for your edits!

I will be taking on this submission, as Anja has went on LOA. Expect further judgement within the next twenty-four hours.

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Mongo Booshi Mella"]

Ha, damn. Time flies. I've passed my own deadline! At any rate, this is looking good so it has my approval, but it is pending secondary approval.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Approved.