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Approved Tech Axaler Rotary Slugthrower Cannon

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create a very old gun for future stories, and as a type of droid NPC controlled by a thread’s narrator
  • Image Source: (x)
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Slugthrower, Chaingun

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Corellian Engineering Corporation
  • Affiliation: Only for use by NPCs controlled DM or Narrator
  • Model: Axaler Rotary Slugthrower
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Minor
  • Material: Durasteel, bronzium, slugthrower components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Rotary Slugthrower
  • Size: Very Large
  • Weight: Very Heavy
  • Ammunition Type: Variable slugs (Armour piercing, tracer, incendiary, etc)
  • Ammunition Capacity: Extreme
  • Effective Range: Average
  • Rate of Fire: Extreme
  • Stopping Power: High
  • Recoil: Very High


SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Can take most types of slugs
  • Only usable by droids or with a fixed control system

STRENGTHS
  • Brrrrrrrrrrt: The rate of fire of the Axaler makes is lethal to exposed enemy infantry
  • Flexible: The Axaler can use a variety of slugs, allowing for the flexibility to engage targets anywhere between infantry, light armoured vehicles

WEAKNESSES
  • Heavy Weapon: The Axaler is large and very heavy, and can only be mounted on fixed positions or on large, strong droids
  • Hot hot: Despite the use of multiple air cooled barrels, the weapon will heat up and eventually must stop firing or risk damage or misfires

DESCRIPTION

Normal Feed:

Standard, Standard, Standard, Tracer (Ignites and glows bright red when fired)

The weapon is capable of a very high rate of fire, and doesn’t lack the punch of a slower firing slugthrower thanks to its large caliber. The weapon is electronically driven, and the multiple barrels spinning tends to create almost as much noise as the actual ripping sound it makes when it fires. Though the weapon has only its every fourth round commonly as a visible tracer it almost looks like a rapidly firing blaster than a slugthrower.

OOC Note: This can only be used by opposition NPCs during threads run by a Narrator or “Dungeon Master” this weapon is not for use in player characters or their NPCs
 
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EntityPrime EntityPrime

First off, thanks for taking the time to use the factory. I will be reviewing your submission alongside Ravenfire Ravenfire .

Production: N/A
I understand the purpose behind this weapon, however, I'll still need you to provide and production level here. Thanks

DESCRIPTION

Normal Feed:

Solid, Solid, Solid, Incendiary Tracer

The weapon is capable of a very high rate of fire, and doesn’t lack the punch of a slower firing slugthrower
If you could please expand on the description and properties of the weapon, it would be greatly appreciated.

please tag myself and Ravenfire Ravenfire with any edits made to submission
 
EntityPrime EntityPrime

Thanks for the edits! You're almost there.

  • Classification: Rotary Slugthrower
  • Size: Very Large
  • Weight: Very Heavy
  • Ammunition Type: Variable slugs (Armour piercing, tracer, incendiary, etc)
  • Ammunition Capacity: Very Large
  • Effective Range: Average
  • Rate of Fire: Extreme
  • Stopping Power: Average
  • Recoil: Very High
I can approve this as is, but you are 5 points underpowered right now. Please feel free to put 5 more points into this sub if you would like, but just let myself and Ravenfire Ravenfire know, whichever is your decision.
 
EntityPrime EntityPrime

Almost there. Now you're showing as 3 ratings too high
Production: +1
Size: +1
Weight: 0
Ammunition Capacity: -3
Effective Range: 0
Rate of Fire: -3
Stopping Power: -1
Recoil: +2
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Total: +3 (goal is 0)
I understand the ratings game can get a bit crazy so if you need help understanding it, I'd be more than happy to help
 
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