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Approved Species Asherian Sentinel

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Name: Asharian Sentinels
Designation: Non-Sentient
Homeworld: Ashaea
Language: No language spoke
Average height of adults: 2m
Skin color: white
Hair color: white
Breathes: Type I
Strengths:
  • Armored: The Asharians are encased in a suit of armor and armed with greatsabers. Their duties to act as meatshields and protectors of those they are imprinted to a compulsion to serve and the drugs reinforce them protecting from mental influence by degrading their brains
    Standard (general use sentinels for voices, hands, regents)
    The armor is alusteel shell designed to be sealed and protective to what is inside. The glasteel visor and rebreather system for the Asherian inside to be kept alive. The biogel is inside for dispersion of kinetic impact while an external setup for oxygen tanks is able to be mounted on the back. The rebreather allows for continuous use outside of vacuum and underwater. The boots and gauntlets of the armor have specialized repulsors allowing for limited flight and at close range repellent bursts.

[*]Elite Armor (limited availability) (for the Dark Lord, Eye) (4 for the dark lord, 2 for the Eye)


[*]Human Shield: The Sentinel is a person, unwilling and encased, twisted and poisoned into being an instrument of evil, of purpose. They are innocent in most sense of the words just used to be thrown in front of enemies who might hesitate killing an innocent.
Weaknesses:
  • Addicted: The drugs used to addle the sentinels minds is crafted and created to keep them compliant and addicted. They require and need it to survive while encased in their armor.
  • Reduced Intelligence: The drugs used have made them simple... or at least one track minded, they are imprinted to protect people or a task. Single minded and not caring about the rest.
  • Atrophy: Their bodies are suspended in biogel within a suit of armor they are permanently en-cased in. The frame they are attached to does not need the muscles to be strong as it responds to their thoughts and minor movements but taking them out they will not be able to move after a certain amount of time.
Distinctions: There is not much difference between the Asharians and their brothers and sisters. They have just been experimented upon until their bodies are weaker and encased in preservation suits. Their mind addled so they serve for their stimulants and food the One Sith.
Average Lifespan: 120 Years
Races: Ashara
Estimated Population: 10,000
Diet: Food cubes, IV line of drugs
Communication: None
Culture:
Asherian Culture

They Sentinels are reduced from what they once were, their minds addled with drugs and steroids, their memories taken away and flash training of servitude and combat experience. The armor they are in-cased is in their entire lives with the service to those they are made ordered to protect. They are the silent guardians of the regents, of the voices, the hands and the ones made to walk eternally throughout the halls of the academies. They are compliant towards the ones who are imprinted to them never raising a hand against them while defending them past the point of sanity and survival instinct. They would die for their masters and all who they face will have to eviscerate them to stop them trying.
Technology level: Galactic Standard
General behavior:
The Sentinels in the past were silent watchers dedicated to protecting the ones they were assigned to. These ones are no different but have some more skills. They are unquestionably obedient towards their masters whom they are imprinted to. The process taking several hours to ensure they know the voice, mannerisms and looks of their one master in as many natural ways as they can. The force signature of their master is what they know, other ones other signatures and presences within the force they are blind to.

With their masters they are silent servants there to protect them from hostile intention and threats. Bulky armor with large greatsabers and wrist mounted shield that can be used as a weapon in a fight. Their servitude through imprinting and the drugs making suggestion easier. They will throw themselves on a blade at their masters command and shield the master from any harm at the cost of their own life.

Asherians are indifferent and unresponsive to others who approach them without hostile intent or are not currently targeted by their Masters. They will, however, react quickly to perceived threats and will fight until the threat is neutralized or has fled. Not giving chase unless ordered to by their master. For ones who kill them others in the area will respond to the threat but can be easily called off, masters ordering their sentinels to fight each other will see them fight until there is nothing left and do so without remorse or second thought.
History:
Asherian History

When the One Sith came to Ashera they began taking the space elves prisoner, the lightsiders who fought back if they weren't killed or used in the creation of the Nightmare Child, the lightsiders who were defiant were a problem. They needed to be culled but the ones who sided with he One Sith didn't want genocide against their people that wouldn't look right... So there was a compromise...

Sort of the ones who stood against the One Sith would be kept alive but in a way they would not be able to pose a problem for the planets new masters. Thus the re-emergence of the ancient Sentinel came to be. A man or woman encased in armor and made to serve their sith masters unwillingly. Their bodies twisted and pumped full of drug to weaken their resolve and mental suggestion implanted.

Then they were encased in a suit filled with biogel and attached to machines to continually pump chemicals into their bodies to reduce their minds and body until they would become dependent on the armor. A twisted being in an iron mask unable to live with the pain their bodies feel and wanting the numbness the drug induces. A horrible way to cull the enemies but it makes for better news then just killing them outright.
Development Threads:
Notable Player-Characters: None
Intent: To recreate the Imperial Sentinels for a new generation and provide a powerful bodyguard that can be used by the one sith.
 
General behavior: [Describe general behaviors]
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Armored: The Asharians are encased in a suit of armor and armed with greatsabers. Their duties to act as meatshields and protectors of those they are imprinted to a compulsion to serve and the drugs reinforce them protecting from mental influence by degrading their brains.
Please put more detail in this about the armor itself. If the armor is the strength, then it is the armor that needs to be described. If there is nothing particularly special or unique about the armor (resistant to certain weapons or having exceedingly high-powered uses) then simply writing a few paragraphs to describe the armor will be enough. If there are special qualities about the armor, I'm going to require a submission of the armor itself to the Factory.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"] if you feel otherwise and that the armor should have it's own submission entirely, please let me know.

Tag me when you have made the necessary edits [member="Darth Praelior"]
 
[member="Quietus"] | [member="Darth Praelior"]

The armour will require a tech submission IF it is different or special from canon armour in protection or resistance. Resistance to lightsabres for instance absolutely needs it for instance.
 
The Sentinels in the past were silent waters dedicated to protecting the ones they were assigned to.
Wrong word. Do you mean warriors?

The force signature blind to them but the force presence used to call them silently.
This sentence is confusing as personally I don't see there to be a difference between a Force Signature and a Force Presence. One requires a presence in the force to have a Signature, and if you have a Signature then you have a presence. They are, essentially, one in the same, so how do you distinguish between being blind to one and not the other? Re-write this using only one (Signature or Presence) as the subject of the sentence.

With others who are coming near them, the ones who do not have hostile intent and are not being targeted by their masters will. They are indifferent barely seeing them or acknowledging their presence, if one tries to attack or move them they will respond quickly fighting until the threat is dead or gone.
The first sentence here is incomplete, but I believe you meant for it to be connected to the second sentence. The third blue portion can stand alone as a sentence on its own. I would suggest re-writing it to something like:

"Asherians are indifferent and unresponsive to others who approach them without hostile intent or are not currently targeted by their Masters. They will, however, react quickly to perceived threats and will fight until the threat is neutralized or has fled."

You may use that, or re-write it on your own. This was just an example.
[member="Darth Praelior"]
 
[member="Darth Praelior"]
Talk to me about this armour and the shields.

The armour and shields both contain Phrik to varying amounts and are listed as Limited and Semi-Unique. However, you have your 10,000 warriors equipped with this gear.
That doesn’t sound limited or semi-unique to me at all.

You’re going to have to change their equipment or have multiple types; the Phrik for a small inner circle, regular stuff for the rest.
 
[member="Darth Praelior"]
You'll have to do unit subs when the time comes, but I would like you to specify how 'Limited' this inner circle is. I think your definition of limited and semi-unique may differ from others.

I want numbers for the inner circle as compared to the main Sentinels group.
 
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