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Approved Tech A'sharad's Segmentata Lorica

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  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent: Create a medium weight armour for Asharad.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Image Source: Alanpaints[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] // [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Canon Link: N/A[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Development Thread: N/A[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Primary Source: N/A[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer: Asharad Graush[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Model: Sith Segmentata[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation: A’sharad Graush[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Modularity: No[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Production: Unique[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Material: Phrik, Duraplast, [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Laser-Reflective Armour[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification: Multipurpose[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Weight: 9.52kg[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Quality: 8[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Holographic Heads-Up Display[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Lightsabre Resistance[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Laser Deflection[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wristpad[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Light-Shield[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Holographic Heads-Up Display: Like any holoprojector or datapad with the ability to utilize holo-technology, the helmet of the Segmentata suit of armour projects a heads up display in place of where an actual transparisteel visor would be. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Lightsabre Resistance: Phrik is lightsabre resistant. It is also lightweight, and thus was reinforced with duraplast, a heavier armour.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Laser Deflection: Lasers hit the armour, and unless they are striking the target full on, they reflect off the pieces of metal.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wristpad: Features a miniature holo-map. Basically a DataPad in wrist form.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Light-Shield: Projects from the left bracer upon his wrist, faintly in the shape of the First Order’s symbol. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Lightweight[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Ease of Movement[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses :[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Slugthrowers[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Unprotected Limbs[/SIZE]


[SIZE=11pt]Asharad Graush had typically only worn heavy armour throughout his tenure as an Officer in the First Order’s military. From sporting armour that he had scavenged from the One Sith Temple on Prakith, to the armour he had only recently fashioned that was in the image of the infamous Dark Lord of the Sith, Darth Vader. Although he could move relatively quickly, the nullification resin that he had put in place on the aforementioned suit dampened his own abilities with his aggressive telekinetics. While he bore the suit, his more advanced applications of the Force were much more difficult.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]So he had opted to fashion himself a lighter armour, though the consequences that the Sith Lord knew would surface would consequently be his unprotected limbs. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Although the armour itself isn’t on par with the heavier armours the Galaxy features these days with the vast amount of helmet add-ons, its strength lies in the maneuverability it allows Asharad, and its light weight nature. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The purpose to the armour was to create a baseline for the First Order's Auxiliary to draw from in way of design and ability, due to the Order's growing number of forces, and A'sharad's own position as Head of the Army, he sought to wear an armour that would tie him much more closely to the more alien forces of the First Order than the de-humanized black suit that he had worn at Barkhesh, Kaeshana, and Endor.[/SIZE]
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This seems completely fine to me, but I think you worded something a bit strangely.

Asharad Graush said:
[SIZE=9pt]Lightsabre Resistance: Phrik is lightsabre resistant. It is also lightweight, and thus was reinforced with duraplast, a much more durable metal.[/SIZE]
I don't think you want this to say that Duraplast is more durable than Phrik?
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