Approved Planet Akeldama - Dead Planet Contest

[Amelia von Sorenn]

Zak Dymo

Edited

 

[Zak Dymo]

Amelia von Sorenn

Approved. Srina Talon

 

[Srina Talon]

Amelia von Sorenn

Lovely submission! Just curious, though, I might have missed it somewhere. Is this the 4th planet?

Planet(s):

• Malvolia; First Orbit - Molten Rock
• Maura; Second Orbit - Poisonous Atmosphere akin to Venus
• Brone; Third Orbit - Type III Atmosphere
• Delano; Fifth Orbit - Frozen Rock
• Angeni; Sixth Orbit - Gas Giant with 12-16 moons
• Aura; Seventh Orbit - Dwarf Planet

It seems to be missing the 4th. Even if it IS this world it should probably say so, especially, when a "4th orbit" is mentioned below.

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Your image credits check out, but, you'll need to add a note where you got your dividers from. In this case, I believe they were made by Darth Metus and colored by Scherezade deWinter. It can just be: "Dividers Made by X Person and X Person". Nothing fancy.

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Force Nexus: This is way cool, but, I think the template might have gotten a little wonky in the conversion. I'd highly suggest ordering it so that it mostly matches up as it seems that you've missed the Accessibility field.

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Otherwise - You're good to go! Nice job bringing it up to the newest version of Codex. I know that can be hard, especially, with all the broken links after the site move. Tag me when you're ready!

 

[Amelia von Sorenn]

Srina Talon

Edited

 

[Srina Talon]

Amelia von Sorenn

Bravo! Nice job. [Re-Approved]