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Request A short but interesting tale

Hey,

So this character has not really maintained the story or muse that I felt they could have had. I have taken ideas from him to other characters and has far better success with my other Sith. So wanting to focus more there than I have here.

However, unlike other characters that just simply faded into obscurity or just disappeared. I wanted to give Wallgof a final send off. A death that could be a lot of fun and develop another character's story or become a turning point in their story.

Which is my offer, if you are interested in developing a story over 2 or 3 duels that will lead to the death of this Sith Lord, then drop some interest. I want this to be narratively interesting and something that could have rippling effects in a person's story, not a mere notch on the belt as well.

So, if you can also give some ideas on how this could be a narratively interesting direction for your character as well, that will really help me decide on who is best to lay this character to rest.

Thanks!
 
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Darth Wallgof Darth Wallgof Hey! I'm interested, but I wanted to ask a few story questions first so I can see whether my character would actually fit the kind of ending you want for Wallgof.

  • What kind of death are you imagining for Wallgof?
    Is it bitter, defiant, remorseful, sacrificial, humiliating, peaceful, or horrifying?
  • Do you want Wallgof to feel like the villain of the story, or more like a doomed person reaching the end of his path?
  • What parts of Wallgof do you want honored in his final threads?
    His pride, his philosophy, his cruelty, his regrets, his failures, his legacy?
  • What should the other character walk away carrying?
    Guilt, fear, clarity, trauma, a lesson, a scar, a temptation, a secret, a new enemy?
  • Are you looking for someone to defeat him physically, emotionally, ideologically, or all of those together?
  • What should the first two duels build toward?
    Rivalry, obsession, mercy refused, manipulation, mutual respect, revenge, or a slow unraveling?
  • Are there any hard limits for the death scene?
    No capture, no redemption, no humiliation, no maiming, etc.
  • Do you want his death to create consequences after the thread?
    Relics, enemies, Sith politics, rumors, a curse, a holocron, someone inheriting his burden?
  • Why would Wallgof choose this opponent, or allow this confrontation to happen?

I'm also curious whether you want the two or three duels to be tightly plotted toward a specific ending, or more organic with a few agreed emotional beats. I'd rather make sure it feels like a real story for both characters, not just someone collecting a Sith Lord death on their record.

For Braze, I'd be most interested if this became less about 'winning' and more about whether he can face someone monstrous without letting that person shape him into something colder. So I'd want to know whether Wallgof is meant to test mercy, restraint, anger, fear, or the cost of ending someone who refuses any offered way out.
 

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