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Approved NPC 57 Silyepr Temya'a Traatika (Mortar Platoon.)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION





  • Unit Name: 57 Silyepr Temya'a Traatika (Mortar Platoon.)
  • Affiliation: Clan Australis, Torrack Australis https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/torrack-australis.141445/ ,The Enclave https://www.starwarsrp.net/group/the-enclave.155/info
  • Classification: Mortar Platoon
  • Description: Fighting in many battles for Clan Australis, this Mortar Unit prides itself in providing notable support for its allies when needed. A coordinated unit commanded by Torrack Australis, these men share an undying loyalty to there clan and family. A characteristic their commander shares enthusiastically.Usually in high morale, this unit is considered to have a higher then average firing rate then most mortar units.This is due to their commander who expects them to have a rigorous training schedule to continue this efficiency.
COMBAT INFORMATION







  • Combat Function: An infantry Mortar team, this unit’s job is to lay down supporting fire to engaged units by any means possible and to crush enemies from a distance. However should the need arrive, this unit can quickly fight as standard infantry should they be engaged.
Strengths:



  • High Morale: With loyalty and courage, this unit is unlikely to break even if their commander is killed.
  • Mortar Team: Mortar teams are mobile infantry the use mortar technology to blast the enemy to pieces at a distance. This unit is efficient in serving that support role.
  • Fast firing rate: Due to the rigorous training that is conducted by their commanding officer, this veteran unit has a fast firing rate.
Weaknesses:


-Vulnerable to enemy Air Forces: Should any bomber squadrons attempt to attack this unit, they will certainly be at a disadvantage without support.



-Susceptible to snipers: Due to the fact that they are a mortar team, it is hard for them to be Hidden. Therefore without proper fortifications this unit could be picked apart by an opposing sniper unit.




HISTORICAL INFORMATION


Fighting in many battles this unit is considered a group of unsung heros that work as supporting cogs within the military of Clan Australis. However, after the crushing defeat on Mandalore many in the unit have returned to their clan home on Mykr. Preparing for the likelihood of a future crusade to liberate Mandalorian space. These patriots are ready for war.
 
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Zak Dymo

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Torack Australis Torack Australis

My apologies for your wait. This is fine. There are just a few things to clean up before its ready to be stamped.

1. Missing Template Header.
Please add OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION above Intent. That header is part of the template and should be included in the submission.

2. Image Credit.

Please remove the Bing search string and just link the link for the image. This is the link to the image itself. Please list Wookieepedia as the source/credit.

While there is no image embedded in the submission, I'm assuming that the image link is only here for reference purposes?

3. Affiliation.
Affiliation: Clan Australis, Torrack Australis,The Enclave

Please either link or @tag your character here. Please also link The Enclave.

4. Combat Information (Remove Template Instructions).
COMBAT INFORMATION
: The combination of Unit Size and Availability below is the indicator of how numerous your unit is. Stormtroopers for instance would be considered Large/Common, while Rogue Squadron would be a Small/Unique unit. Majority Force User Units are prohibited from being Common or Large. The stronger and more specialized your unit is (FU or NFU), the smaller and less common it should be.

The highlighted text in the above are provided as instructions for filling out the template and should be removed from the final submission.

5. Equipment.
Equipment: 20 Jairdain-II heavy mortars crewed (takes two men to crew them I believe.) https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/jairdain-ii-heavy-mortar.138116/#post-1911670
An assortment of Mandalorian affiliated blaster rifles that are available for the members choosing.

The linked mortar is fine, but the mention of "Mandalorian affiliated blaster rifles" is too vague. If you mean a generic blaster rifle, a link to the Wookieepedia page for blaster rifle is fine. If you mean a specific Factory submission(s), please provide links for those so that it is clear what equipment is available for this unit.

Please let me know if you have any questions. Otherwise, please tag me when you have completed any edits.
 
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