criticism

I have reached 50 posts on Falentra, previously known as Nouqai Veil. Nouqai was created for the sole purpose of rping in this thread as I wanted in on the action. It was really not my intent to have her become my main charrie, but that happened. I have time skipped her quite a bit from 14-18...

its a small milestone as ive only started rping on here in dec. i haven't had my writing critiqued much. I am open to constructive criticism, comments and feedback on writing, character, plot, lore and whatever more. also this is definitely not a bit of publicity for our storyline cuz why not :3...

Heyo, so I finally made it to 500 posts, in full honesty probably should have reached this milestone much earlier... ...But hey better later than never, amiright? So to all the people who have written with Malum, and even to the people who haven't and either want too or just simply have read...