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Codex Denied Zweihander Naval Armada

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Tristan Evore

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To flesh out the Zweihander Unions Navy
  • Image Credit: N/A
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: [x]
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Organization Name: Zweihander Union Naval Armada
  • Classification: Naval Organization
  • Affiliation: The Zweihander Union
  • Organization Symbol: The Zweihander Naval Armada's official emblem is that of the Zweihander Union's adorned with the words "Protect", "Serve', and "Unite" in Galactic Basic. In addition, a picture of a Star Destroyer dominates the background.
  • Description: The Zweihander Naval Armada is the largest division of the Zweihander "Ulterior". Consisting of dozens of Star Destroyers and many more war vessels, the Zweihander Naval Armada is one of the most professional naval organizations in the galaxy concerning itself in protection and action if necessary.
GEOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: Schesa
  • Domain: N/A
  • Notable Assets: Various Starships, Academies and Bases
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Hierarchy:
    • The Supreme War Council - The Supreme War Council of the Zweihander Union acts as the Supreme Commander of the Union Armed Forces and as such the Naval Armada falls under the council's command. The Supreme War Council consists of the following...
      • Joint Chief(s) of the Navy - The Joint Chief(s) of the Navy are tasked with the organization, leadership, and status quo of the Zweihander Naval Armada. By definition, the Joint Chief(s) of the Navy are the representatives of the best of the Naval Armada. The Joint Chief(s) hold the rank of Fleet Admiral
      • Joint Chief of the Army - The Joint Chief of the Army is tasked with the command, organization, training, and status quo of the Zweihander Army. The Joint Chief of the Army holds the rank of High General.
    • Admiral - An Admiral of the Zweihander Armada is tasked with command of a fleet of starships. Admirals are considered to be great tacticians and inspiring leaders.
    • Vice Admiral - A Vice Admiral is charged with command of a Battlegroup, multiple of which make up fleets and in turn are made up of multiple Task Forces. Vice Admiral's can also serve as Executive Officer's for Admiral's.
    • Rear Admiral - A Rear Admiral is in command of a Task Force. Rear Admiral's are considered a great asset for the Armada due to the fact Task Forces are extremely mobile which allows for quick operations.
    • Commodore - A Commodore, also known as Rear Admiral Lower Half, is in command of a Task Group which are almost always assigned to Task Forces. Commodores regularly serve as Executive Officers to high ranking members of the Armada.
    • Captain - A Captain serves as the commander of a line or a element.
    • Commander - A Commander serves as the commander of a single vessel. A Commander is charged with the direct well being of his crew and is to uphold of the standards of the Navy at all times.
    • Lieutenant Commander - A Lt. Commander is the senior officer of a vessel. A Lt. Commander is the right hand of a Commander and as such follows the exact same principle
    • Lieutenant - Serves as a Senior Officer aboard a vessel usually in charge of a section of the vessel including Engineering, Security, etc.
    • Lieutenant Junior Grade - Serves as a officer aboard a single vessel.
    • Ensign - Serves a aboard a vessel.
    • Non-Enlisted Personnel - Serves aboard a vessel
  • Membership: The Zweihander Naval Armada maintains a series of acadmies across Schesa and various others spread across space. As the Zweihander Union prepares
  • Climate: Military
  • Reputation:
  • Curios: Commanding Officers receive Command Sabers while other officers receive medals and commendations as they continue to climb the chain of command.
  • Rules: The Zweihander Naval Armada follows the standard rules of a Naval organization. These rules include elements from the Galactic Imperial Navy.
  • Goals: The primary goal of the Zweihander Naval Armada is to protect the interests of the Zweihander Union. In addition, the Zweihander Armada is the hand of the Union's expansion
MEMBERS
  • Tristan Evore - Joint Chief of the Navy (Fleet Admiral)
  • Ben Craig Ben Craig - Joint Chief of the Navy (Fleet Admiral)
  • Wir'azani'lice Joint Chief of the Navy (Fleet Admiral)
 

Zak Dymo

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Tristan Evore Tristan Evore

I'll be doing this review for you. I just have a few comments before this should be ready to be stamped.

1. Permissions
Permissions: [x]
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Is there a link that's missing here? Or is this meant to be N/A?

2. Domain
Domain: N/A
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Referring to the template: Does your organization lay claim to any particular area? Link the planet(s), Cities, or other types of areas your organization has influence over, if any. Do they keep to themselves, or are they an active part of the community? How is their relationship with the local populace? This is the place to flesh out how your organization interacts with the community around it.

Looking at what the field is asking, this would be a very ineffective naval organization if it didn't have an area of influence. That influence is the whole point behind political-military relations that states engage in. At a minimum, I would assume that this organization has a presence in the Zweihander Union itself, if not surrounding space and territories.

3. Membership
Membership: The Zweihander Naval Armada maintains a series of acadmies across Schesa and various others spread across space. As the Zweihander Union prepares
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Your sentence just abruptly ends there. I'd ask you to please go in and complete that thought.

4. Missing Template Field (Historical Information)
You're missing the Historical Information portion of the template. As per the Codex rules, the entire template must be used in the submission. Referring to the template, Include a description of the organization's history. Who started it, how and why it was formed, modus operandi, any events tied into its creation and existence, etc.
 
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