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Zuguruk Terafias Corp.

Corporation Name: Zuguruk Terafias corporation

Headquarters: In orbit above Reecee

Locations: In a Krata va-class station in the orbit of Reecee and a Asterok-class station in the Anaxes asteroid belt.

Operations: Bio engineering, Medical and Cybernetics Research and development.


Rationale: Created for the purpose of expanding ZTI into the medical, bio and cybernetic fields. To be able to provide top of the line medical equipment and treatment and affordable cybernetic or cloned limps and organs to those who need them. As well as to provide more experimental options to those that can afford them and are brave enough to undergo them. Such could be lacing ones bones with Alusteel to significantly reduce the change of braking bones and toughening up the body to implanting more string muscles to increase ones speed.

Tier: 2

Description:
In the advent of his growing company Erebos decided to expand it into the fields of bio engineering, Medical and cybernetic limbs and implant research and development. This was intended at first to simply provide more medical procedures for the victims of the ever increasing wars throughout the galaxy by being able to provide affordable cybernetic limps or even graft on cloned limps and organs that someone had lost in the fighting, however seeing the potential in these lines of Research and development Erebos decided to expand these to include bio engineering which could also be used to quickly allow settlers to grow accustomed to the world they've settled. Of course all of the research and development done at ZTC won't be limited to such things and will expand with time.


Parent Corporation: A Subsidiary of Zuguruk Týuk Industries.

Dev thread:
A walk among the products.
 
RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review
 
Darth Erebos said:
Rationale: Created for the purpose of expanding ZTI into the medical, bio and cybernetic fields.
This should be at least a paragraph in reasoning and detail.


Darth Erebos said:
Description: In the advent of his growing company Erebos decided to expand it into the fields of bio engineering, Medical research and development and finally cybernetic limbs and implants.
This, as well, needs to be increased in length and detail.



Darth Erebos said:
Locations: In a Krata va-class station in the orbit of Reecee and a Asterok-class station in the Anaxes asteroid belt.
As neither of these submissions are approved, please simply list them as space stations.



Darth Erebos said:
Subsidiaries: A Subsidiary of Zuguruk Týuk Industries.
This should be N/A, and there is a field which would go below this which is required. I will quote the template below, and highlight the missing field - in that field you can list which company this is a subsidiary of.

Corporation Name:[SIZE=10.5pt] (Straight forward. What's the corporation called?)[/SIZE]


[SIZE=10.5pt]Headquarters:[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt] (Where is the corporation based? CEC is based out of Corellia, KDY is from Kuat.)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Locations:[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt] (If your corporation is large enough, where else have they set up shop? You're not strictly limited to setting up shop in nearby systems, but you shouldn't be hopscotching around the galaxy either.)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Operations[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: (What does your corporation do? What do they make? This can be multiple things, such as vehicle manufacturing, shipbuilding.)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Rationale[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: (How did your character come to own and control the company? Did they make it? Hostile takeover? Clever political scheming?)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Tier[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: (How big is your corporation? [/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]Max:[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt] 2[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt] This is done on a scale of 1-6, with 1 being a very small company, generally producing only a handful of goods at a time, with very little support or influence in the galaxy. Think mom and pop shop. 5 is a big, big name in the galaxy. Each Tier is exponentially larger than the last, so a Tier 3 Corporation could have one or two Tier 2 corporations as subsidies without a problem.)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.5pt]​[/SIZE]
[SIZE=10.5pt]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: (At least a paragraph description of your corporation. The higher the tier of the corporation, the more we expect from the description. If we feel like the description isn't adequate for the requested tier, you may be asked to include more detail or lower the tier. Particularly for player-made corporations, this should detail some of the processes of how the company does business. Does it accept private manufacturing requests? Is it loyal to a particular government or faction? Are they a benevolent corporation, or do they grind planets into dust for money? It's the little details like this that we're looking for.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=10.5pt]Subsidiaries[/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]: (At Tier 3, if you so choose, your corporation can start owning other companies. If your corporation owns a company or multiple companies, this is where to list them. Subsidiaries require their own company submissions. Development threads would need to be done to show the work of the corporation. This is not something that you should expect to change easily, and we will be looking closely. [/SIZE]Every time you add a new subsidiary, you must place a company mod to update it on the parent corporation sub.)

Parent Corporation: ( If this corporation is a subsidiary of another company, please name and link that parent corporation here.)

Primary Source: (Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)
 
[member="Bianca"] ahh sorry made the changes you asked for and the krata va station has been approved and the other is awaiting approval from the last judge . Are the changes I made good or is there something I missed?
 

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