Approved Starship X24-Bringer Light Freighter

[Daalin Garnive]

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Out of Character​

Intent: To create a ship for Daalin.
Image: http://www.igorstshirts.com/blog/conceptships/2010/richard_smitheman
Canon: N/A
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Production Information​

Manufacture: Kuat Ship Yard (Prototype)
Affiliation: T.I.C.S (Allowed Daalin to take control of the ship)
Company: Kuat Drive Yard
Model: N/A
Production: Unique
Material: Duraplast
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Technical Specification​

Classification: Light Freighter
Length: 25.4 meters
Width: 19.8 meters
Height: 6 meters
Armament: Low (2 MS-2B twin laser cannon, outside on the cockpit in each side)
Defense: High (Duraplast)
Squadron Count: None
Maneuverability Rating: low
Speed Raiting: Moderate
Hyperdrive class: Average 1.8
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Standard Features​

• Standard Communications Array
• Standard Deflector Shield Generator
• Standard Hyperdrive
• Standard Ion Engines
• Standard Life Support Systems
• Standard Navigational Systems
• Standard Repulsorlift Engines
• Standard Sensor Array
• Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons
• Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

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Advance Features​

• A.I
• Datacore
• Bacta Tank
• Galaxy map room

Strength:

All of the ship's system is run by T.I.C.S (in one of T.I.C.S. Skills, "Be able to pilot the ship but only out of combat")

Weakness:

Less weapons, not good at maneuvers, If T.I.C.S Datacore is destroyed, the systems will have to be Manually instead of automatic.
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Description​

• Crew: 1 pilot
• Passengers: 5
• Cargo Capacity: 18 metric ton
• Consumables: 4 months

 

[John Locke]

[member="Daalin Garnive"]

Ships such as your freighter are meant to be subbed to the factory not the codex. As such I've moved the wip submission to the pre-factory.

 

[Daalin Garnive]

Sry. Didn't pay attention.

 

[John Locke]

[member="Daalin Garnive"]

That's fine. That's what I'm here for.

Please tag me when you're ready for this submission to be moved to live judgement.

 

[Daalin Garnive]

After Thinking about my ship I'm done

Hit it, [member="John Locke"]

 

[John Locke]

[member="Daalin Garnive"]

I notice you don't have a description field in this submission. Are you sure you want me to go ahead and move it to live judgement? Or would you prefer to add the field?

 

[Daalin Garnive]

Happy?

 

[John Locke]

[member="Daalin Garnive"]

Moving to the factory for judgement now.

 

[Ettiene Kharne]

under review

 

[Ettiene Kharne]

[member="Daalin Garnive"], im going to be the one working with you through the review and approval of your submission. I have just a few things to talk about and once we get those things handle, we can go ahead and slap an approval stamp on this...

Image: http://www.igorstshi...mitheman_04.jpg

If you would be so kind as to provide a link for the source that links to where the image is actually found as to give credit to the owner of the image, that would be greatly appreciated.

Affliction: T.I.C.S (Allowed Daalin to take control of the ship)Affliction: T.I.C.S (Allowed Daalin to take control of the ship)

Two things in this bit. Nitpick, sure, but I just want to give you the opportunity to make a quick spelling correction here. I think you meant "Affiliation," not "Affliction. Also, if you can provide a link to the affiliated organization/individual, it would be greatly appreciated.

Squadron Count: Very High 25

Just a quick note here, but even though you're labeling the Squadron count/size as "Very High" here, since you have the production of this set to "Unique" that means there will only ever be 1 of these in existence. So effectively, there would be no squadron count for this craft.

All of the ship's system is run by T.I.C.S

Could this also be a weakness as this means the ship has a single point of failure?

Please remember to tag me with any edits or clarifications made to this submission.

 

[Daalin Garnive]

[member="Alden Akaran"]



Sorry about the long wait (or a long break), but I've done some of the editing.

 

[Ettiene Kharne]

[member="Daalin Garnive"] Thanks! And it really wasn't much of a wait. Just got one thing to point out that didn't seem to take. Once we correct that, we can go ahead and clap an approval on this

Image: http://www.igorstshi...chard_smitheman

This link seems to be broken. Is there another one you can provide by chance?

 

[Ettiene Kharne]

[member="Daalin Garnive"], nevermind that. Was error on my end

Enjoy your new ship

 

[Ettiene Kharne]

Approved.