Katarine Ryiah
Never Hide Your Heart
Character # 1
Character: Katarine Ryiah
Link to Bio: Here
The Story So Far
Katarine grew up in a darkside cult, which she escaped, and later joined the Jedi. She trained several padawans and was married. When her husband left, she spiraled into grief, relying on being near the darkside to cloud her emotions. These actions caused the death of her padawan. As penance, she locked herself in an underwater prison, and centuries later, she was released. She has since served the New Jedi Order and now serves the Jedi Order as an investigator. Recently, her husband found her again, and this has caused her to lash out with the darkness once more.
Some questions/feedback for the Character:
1. What kind of arc would you like to see Kat have next?
2. If you've written or read Kat, what is a moment you've enjoyed the most? the least?
3. Do you enjoy this character? Why or why not?
Character # 2
Character: Kinley Pryse
Link to Bio: Here
The Story So Far:
Kinley was forced to join Black Sun to pay off her fathers gambling debts. She is now under the total rule of a crime lord known as Flint. During her time she has quickly become one of the most infamous criminal in the galaxy and has been working hard to figure out a way to get out from under Flint's shadow.
Some questions/feedback for the Character:
1. Do Kinley's choices/narrative feel consistent across threads?
2. Does she leave room for other characters to act and respond?
3. Does she feel too powerful, too passive, or well balanced?
4. When you have read Kinnley, does she come across as predictable or surprising?
5. What kind of arc would you like to see Kinley have next?
6. If you've written or read Kinley, what is a moment you've enjoyed the most? the least?
Character # 3
Character: Pari Sylune
Link to Bio: Here
The Story So Far:
Pari was left on the doorsteps of the Chalactan Adepts when she was a baby. She grew into a very spirital young lady and joined the Jedi Order to work on her healing abilities.
Some questions/feedback for the Character:
1. Do Pari's choices/narrative feel consistent across threads?
2. Does she leave room for other characters to act and respond?
3. Does she feel too powerful, too passive, or well balanced?
4. When you have read Pari, does she come across as predictable or surprising?
5. What kind of arc would you like to see Pari have next?
6. If you've written or read Pari, what is a moment you've enjoyed the most? the least?
The Writer
Kitter Bitters
The Story So Far
Kitters recently celebrated her ninteenth year roleplaying and will soon celebrate her thirteenth year on Chaos. She's been trying hard to grow as a writer and work on some of the issues she's had over the years.
Questions for the writer:
1. Do my posts flow smoothly, or do they feel choppy or dense?
2. Is my dialogue natural and distinct, or do I need to try and better distinguish different voices?
3. Do I rely on certain words, phrases, or sentence structures too often?
4. Does my writing convey subtext effectively, or feel too on the nose?
5. Am I easy to collaborate with?
6. Which character of mine do you think is the best? Why?
