Feedback Writer & Character Feedback

[Kitter Bitters]

Questions for the Writer:

1. Are my posts easy to understand?
2. Are my posts engaging?
3. Am I easy to collaborate with?
4. Are there any other things you'd like to offer feedback on?

Suggestions/Feedback For The Character:
Note: My main characters are Katarine Ryiah, Kinley Pryse, and Pari Sylune

1. What are some plots or stories you'd like to see with any of my characters?
2. How could any of my characters be improved?
3. Do my characters feel realistic to you?

Thank you

 

[Aether Verd]

I really only have feedback on a writer level for you friend!

For questions 1-3, the answer is a resounding yes. You're a joy to be around and I love reading your posts.

For question 4, the biggest piece of feedback is consistency. You're pretty well known at this point for having great ideas, great characters to go along with those ideas, but very minimal staying power. I'd love for you to find a character, or faction, or general direction that vibes with you for a longer period of time than I see from you typically.

Otherwise, you're a freaking rockstar and I always love seeing you about fam

 

[Kitter Bitters]

I really only have feedback on a writer level for you friend!

For questions 1-3, the answer is a resounding yes. You're a joy to be around and I love reading your posts.

For question 4, the biggest piece of feedback is consistency. You're pretty well known at this point for having great ideas, great characters to go along with those ideas, but very minimal staying power. I'd love for you to find a character, or faction, or general direction that vibes with you for a longer period of time than I see from you typically.

Otherwise, you're a freaking rockstar and I always love seeing you about fam

Aww shucks thank you!! So far Kinley is my longest staying character on this board. She's over a year now.

<3 I appreciate the feedback so much