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Approved Tech Wintergreen Suit

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Bloodknight

The Artist
Character
Intent: To help keep Andreas alive during combat by providing a light, breathable yet durable suit of armor
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Mandalorian Metalsmiths
Model: Model 1
Affiliation: Andreas Wintergreen
Modularity: Customizable
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel Plates, Plexalloy, Protective Liquid Coating, Thermal Gel, Armorweave, Insulation
Description:
Using his knowledge of smithing and shaping, he created a lightsaber and blaster resistant suit of armor complete with a helmet to shield him from blows he might not be able to dodge in future conflicts. The plates are positioned perfectly to allow free and flexible movement of the body without leaving too much open to attack. Pads of thermal gel placed under the knee and elbow plates as well as the helmet protect those oh so important areas from blunt attacks. Inside, there also lay audio enhancement and sonic dampening devices. Red tinted plexalloy lenses run down the front of the helmet placed to give an intimidating look, enable infrared and ultraviolet vision and allow Andreas to see without exposing his eye and come with a HUD that allows him 360 degree vision and the ability to pick up the subtlest of details via sight enhancements. There are small clips around the shoulder if Andreas wishes to wear a cloak or cape and has little compartments on it to hold small things. Thinly coating the entire suit is a vial of protective liquid coating that increases it's damage resistance and gives it a sightly sheen. The plates are insulated on the inside to counter electicity conduction . A bodyglove of armorweave is worn beneath it. Because of it's sheen, it shines bright like a diamond in the sun, making stealth impossible. The added weight, although miniscule, requires extra energy to move
Classification: Anti-Blaster, Anti-Ballistic, Anti-Lightsaber, Anti-conductive
Weight: 81kg
Quality: Class 7
Other Feature(s): Allows free, flexible movement. Has a grapple on either gauntlet that shoots a spiked hook connected to a phrik alloyel cable, an air filtration system to filter out any non-oxyge in the air being breathedn and small rockets in the boots that will allow Andreas to fly short distances. Lastly, it comes with a small tank of oxygen built in and magnetic soles just in case he should find himself in the vacuum of space without a ship.
 

Darron Wraith

Honor | Duty | Courage
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@[member="Andreas Wintergreen"]

Class 10 armor is on par with what the Mandalore himself would have. I"m going to ask you to make the following edits please.

  • Lower it to around an eight.
  • Why not just use the Echani MK2 personal shield versus the oval shield that would be pretty complicated to make IC?
  • Convert your weight to metric please. You also need to bring the weight up if this is true "heavy armor"
  • The description needs a lot more to it, I'd like to see some weaknesses added on because this armor has no flaws whatsoever.
  • Finally, I'm going to request a development thread. This is a unique armor with no manufacturer that is made of song steel plates and has a jetpack and other advanced technology, and your character assembled it somehow. Please see the rules on development threads.
I'm marking this pending and putting it in the pending forum and everything I have listed needs to be done to the sub for it to be approved.
 

Bloodknight

The Artist
Character
Jacen Cavill said:
@[member="Andreas Wintergreen"]

Class 10 armor is on par with what the Mandalore himself would have. I"m going to ask you to make the following edits please.

  • Lower it to around an eight.
  • Why not just use the Echani MK2 personal shield versus the oval shield that would be pretty complicated to make IC?
  • Convert your weight to metric please. You also need to bring the weight up if this is true "heavy armor"
  • The description needs a lot more to it, I'd like to see some weaknesses added on because this armor has no flaws whatsoever.
  • Finally, I'm going to request a development thread. This is a unique armor with no manufacturer that is made of song steel plates and has a jetpack and other advanced technology, and your character assembled it somehow. Please see the rules on development threads.
I'm marking this pending and putting it in the pending forum and everything I have listed needs to be done to the sub for it to be approved.
@[member=Jacen Cavill]
I gave the armor a manufacturer , fixed the armor rating to put it at medium, converted the units to metric. I hope that counters the need of a Dev Thread as things are going a bit slow for me.
 

Bloodknight

The Artist
Character
Jacen Cavill said:
@[member="Andreas Wintergreen"]

Change the songsteel to durasteel, and use this as the basis for an improved armor later on in another submission and I'll approve this. :)
@[member="Jacen Cavill]
I'm not sure what you're asking me to do; are you asking me to make another armor submission and put this in there? If so, do you mind me asking why? I'm just puzzled.
 

Darron Wraith

Honor | Duty | Courage
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@[member="Andreas Wintergreen"] No, I'm asking you to edit the songsteel in this submission to durasteel in your materials. Then after rping for a while you can use this sub as the basis for making an armor out of songsteel at a later date.
 
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