Keira Priest
The Iron
I've been waiting for something like this to pop up since joining Chaos, and I after watching everybody else do it I figured I might as well jump on the bandwagon. Critique away!
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Why Not?
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Cryax Bane
Red-eyed Snake
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You know I've always been a fangirl for your writing. Your characters are all very distinctive from one another and your plotting and pacing is spot on. I always feel like you leave me just enough material to work, RP-wise. I don't know why, no matter what our characters are doing to each other, whether torturing or kissing (or both), they always seem to have the most entertaining chemsitry.
When we started writing together, this says it all:
Anyway, I hardly feel qualified to critique anyone, but here goes. Over the past few months I've seen your writing improve alot. Not that it was bad before, but it just gets better and better! My only piece of constructive criticism would be to edit your posts to make sure you're not repeating some the same words or thoughts. My posts are guilty of this, too.
Also more [member="Rhen Ordo"] please :wub:
You know I've always been a fangirl for your writing. Your characters are all very distinctive from one another and your plotting and pacing is spot on. I always feel like you leave me just enough material to work, RP-wise. I don't know why, no matter what our characters are doing to each other, whether torturing or kissing (or both), they always seem to have the most entertaining chemsitry.
When we started writing together, this says it all:
Anyway, I hardly feel qualified to critique anyone, but here goes. Over the past few months I've seen your writing improve alot. Not that it was bad before, but it just gets better and better! My only piece of constructive criticism would be to edit your posts to make sure you're not repeating some the same words or thoughts. My posts are guilty of this, too.
Also more [member="Rhen Ordo"] please :wub:
Keira Priest
The Iron
It's your characters' fault for the chemistry happening in the first place. 
And more Rhen, as requested:
[member="Cryax Bane"]
And more Rhen, as requested:
[member="Cryax Bane"]