Approved Location Volik Military Command

[Varloc]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a base to command the ZU forces on Volik
• Image Credit: ThibautBillerot
• Canon: none
• Permissions: none
• Links: Volik

SETTING INFORMATION

• Military Base Name: Volik Military command Center
• Classification: Command Center
• Location: Zeth City Volik (Sub of Zeth City)
• Affiliation: Zweihander Union and Varloc
• Population: Heavy. officers and troopers makes up the population.
• Demographics:

Humans- 90%
Other- 10%

• Accessibility: This base is in the ZU sector of Zeth City, it can be found easily. But it is a restricted area, civilians are not allowed.
• Description: This base is simple, it contains barracks, communication systems, command room, defenses and more. This building also has a recruitment office where Volik citizens may join the ZU military. This base also has a repair hanger where they do repairs on broken or damaged viechles.

POINTS OF INTEREST
Command Room- This is the primary room where Volik forces are commanded. This is also the communication center.
Military data library- Here you can access many ZU low clearance military files. It is well protected.

SECURITY
High. Is protected by Troopers, Anti-ship Cannons, Anti-personnel Cannons, and Security surveillance and other systems.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
This base is ment to command all forces on volik. The base is also equipped with state of the art communication systems to contact other planets.
This was one of the first buildings to be built in the ZU District of Zeth and was originally at the location of an old military camp for unkown troops.

 

[Srina Talon]

Varloc

Greetings - I'll be helping you out here today. Nice start, but, there are a few things that need adjusting.

1.) Population:

Population: [ Choose from: Uninhabited, Insignificant, Sparse, Moderate, Heavy, Crowded. How large is this Military Base? How many armed units? If your military base is generic, you may separate this population into Army Personnel, Navy Personnel, etc. ]

Population: Heavy, officers and troopers

Be sure to follow the template. We need to know which designation [ Uninhabited, Insignificant, Sparse, Moderate, Heavy, Crowded ] as well as the type of forces that can be found there. How many armed units? What do you mean by heavy officers and troopers? Can you link any examples?

2.) Demographics: What you listed here is a demographic based on a career. This is information that you could likely include above in Population, but, the template is referring to species here.

Demographics: [ Please describe the general assortment of inhabitants. Specific species percentages are welcome but not required. Any uncommon species or custom species should be linked. If no population exists put N/A. ]

Demographics: ZU Officers and staff- 27% - ZU Troopers- 73%

3.) Accessibility: You describe how easy it is to find it, but, there's no note about how difficult or simple it might be to access it. Please answer the questions on the template or provide more detail.

Accessibility: [ Describe logistical information on how easy it is to find/access this location. Is it hidden? Is it isolated from society or is it in the middle of civilization? Is it guarded? Open to the public or private access only? ]

Accessibility: This base is in the ZU sector of Zeth City, it can be found easily.

4.) History: You state that they have "the best weaponry in the Zweihander Union" but none of that seems to be listed here. I suggest you provide links or more information if applicable. This is important to potential PVP scenarios so other writers will understand what they're facing.

This is a good start but overall I would suggest adding a little more detail. Especially, to the History or the Points of Interest.

Tag when you're ready for me to take another look.

 

[Varloc]

I do believe I have made the necessary changes.
Srina Talon

 

[Srina Talon]

Varloc

I would still suggest elaborating on details more in future submissions but this will suffice for now. Thank you. [Approved]