Approved NPC Volik Defense Unit

[Varloc]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To protect and keep peace and order on Volik
• Image Credit: none
• Role: this unit is made to defend Volik
• Permissions: none
• Links: Volik

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Unit Name: Volik Defense Unit
• Affiliation: Zweihander Union
• Classification: Defense Unit
• Description: This unit is used to defend and keep order on Volik. This unit has basic Combat training and is specially trained to fight in Voliks forests.

COMBAT INFORMATION:

• Unit Size: Large
• Unit Availability: Common
• Unit Experience: Trained
• Equipment:

Blasters-
E-11 Blaster Rifles
T-21 Light Repeating Rifle

Armour-
ZU Trooper Armour
Scout Armour

Viechles-
74-Z Speeder Bike
Mark-1 battle tank

• Combat Function: This unit is mainly for enforcement of laws and occasional defense uses. This unit works well with other units. This unit in battle protects highly populated areas and goverment building. This unit tries to ward off the attacks as quickly as possible.

Strengths:

• Consists of well trained soilders
• Specialized in the environment of the planet that are assigned to.

Weaknesses:

• Unit lacks heavy weaponry.
• Unit lacks training in environments that are not similar to Volik

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
This unit was created by Planetary Lord of Volik Varloc to keep order and defend Volik. This unit was trained for months on fighting and survival in Voliks forest environment. The unit was equipped with tanks only for emergencies, like a planetary attack or unrest. This unit is allied with voliks defense fleet to support the protection of Volik. This unit is made up of people who come form Volik or from planets near it, so troops in this unit will not let their home be attacked.

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Varloc Hey there! Nice foundations you've put down, we just need to polish it up a wee bit

• In Out of Character Information, in Image Credit, the image you've used in this submission doesn't appear on the page. The image credit needs to link to a page on which we can see the image.
• In General Information, for Description, I'd really recommend getting more wordy.
• In Combat Information, for Equipment:
  • NZ-BG-400 Tactical Rifle - it's blaster, not a rifle, but it's also Closed-Market, so I need to see permissions in the sub that let you use this.
  • For Combat Function, you're not really describing their function. What do these guys actually do during battle?

Please tag me back once the edits are done

 

[Varloc]

Fixed
Scherezade deWinter

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Varloc Thank you very much for the edits Approved!