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Vineech's Stealth Set

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Intent: A stealth-friendly set of armor designed for Vineech Alo'sis.
Development Thread: 'If Necessary'
Quality: 3
Classification: Stealth
Manufacturer: ???
Model: N / A
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Production: Mass Produced
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Material
- Suit: Latex
- Torso: Hardened Black Dyed Braided Leather
- Trench-Coat: Black Leather

Weight:
- Suit: 5 Kg
- Trench Coat: 6 Kg

Special Features
+ Torso: The torso region, having protected leather covering, has resistance to blaster shots. However, repeated shots will penetrate with ease.
+ Holsters: Two pistol holsters, a multi-slot belt for lightsabers.
+ Sheath: A side-strapped and slim sword sheath equipped to her back.
+ Cloaking Field: Equipped to the front of her belt, used to become invisible, more or less a translucent figure of whizzing air.

Description: Vineech's suit is light-weight, form-fitting and designed for her stealth operation. The braided leather padding around her torso provides minor defense should she be shot at or swung at with weapons. Two black holsters remain at the sides of her legs, for blasters and pistol storage. Around her waist is a belt with many slots, for light-sabers or the like. Equipped at the front of the belt is a cloaking field device, triggered by mere button press. The suit is meant to support acrobatic and quick movement, providing immense functionality in and out of combat. The armor's down-side is the lack of protection, being primarily latex composed it can be torn through by bullets, weapons or the alike. In heat, it scratches against her skin in an irritating fashion. As for the trench-coat, it is designed to be water-proof, sleek and primarily for aesthetic design. It waves behind her as she walks, providing decent warmth or protection from the cold should she need it.
 
Hi there. This is a nice submission, but there are a few things to work out.

First, I am gonna call this armor, and thus it needs to use the Armor Template, with every field filled in order please.
Image Source: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)
Intent: (Example: 'A personal weapon for Darth Scabious' or 'an advanced armored personnel carrier for the Republic')
Development Thread: (The main way people work for their toys, though most submissions don't require a development thread. Restricted items require specific development threads. Substantial development threads can help judges approve more powerful submissions. If in doubt, put 'If necessary,' and a judge may or may not ask you for one. Threads cited here must be at least 10 quality posts.)
Manufacturer: (Kuat Drive Yards, BlasTech Industries, [Character Name], etc.)
Model: (Example: E-11 Blaster Rifle. For submissions where a model wouldn't be appropriate, such as a custom walking stick, put 'N/A' for 'Not Applicable'.)
Affiliation: (Example: The E-11 Blaster Rifle was produced for the Galactic Empire and used almost exclusively by Imperial Stormtroopers. Do not put the company unless the product is only for your company's use. Common choices include 'Open market' or the name of a specific faction.)
Modularity: (Can components of this submission be swapped out for other components? Is it especially easy to modify? For most submissions, put 'No'.)
Production: Production: (The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (Only A Handful of Characters), Limited (Only A Select Group Of NPCs/PCs), Minor (Any Character, Only Select Groups Of NPCs), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))
Material: (What is it made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable, to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel, blaster components.')
Classification: (Anti-Blaster, Anti-Ballistic, Multipurpose, Other)
Weight: (Via Metric System. Appropriate weight varies by quality, material, and character species. For example, standard Mandalorian armor is around 10 kg. Armor made of true Mandalorian iron, or a full set of combat gear for a soldier in the field, can be around 25kg. For special items, try to find the weight of a real-world equivalent.)
Quality: (Armor class is a measure of general stopping power. Most light armors would be classified as 1-4, most medium armors would be classified as 5-7, and most heavy armors would be classified as 8-10. However, rare or primitive materials, among other factors, can also affect armor class. For example, stormtrooper armor would be class 5, Mandalore's armor or beskar'kandar would be class 10, and a specially forged suit of personal armor for a high-ranking Force user could be anywhere from class 6-9 or thereabouts, depending on how much effort went into it. Many people choose lower armor classes for their custom armor in a trade off for more powerful equipment or specialized resistances, or simply for more mobility.)
Special Features: (Is it resistant to certain weapons? Does it include special sensors? Even if you've discussed your features at length in the Description line of the Base Template, this is a good place to list them.)
Description: (Include some strengths and weaknesses here. Describe some of the history behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
Primary Source: (Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)



Vineech said:
Production: Production: Mass Produced
This is not going to work with the Stealth Field aspect. See below.



Vineech said:
+ Cloaking Field: Equipped to the front of her belt, used to become invisible, more or less a translucent figure of whizzing air.
Personal Cloaking Device (( Objective : Complete a role-play without your character by only describing the scenery and actions of other characters from NPC perspectives without changing the course of the story directly. Ask for permission from the participants before engaging. ))
Unfortunately, if you want to keep this aspect, you will need to complete a development thread of at least 10 quality posts for Unique Production, 20 for Limited, and 30 for minor. So long as it completes the objective you can do whatever you like with the thread.



Vineech said:
Manufacturer: ???
You can use a number of unclaimed Canon companies. Balmorran Arms, as well as CoMar Combat Systems come to mind or for a Unique Production, using yourself is allowed.
 

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