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Approved NPC Vikras Ansion

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Name: Admiral, Vikras Ansion
Loyalties: Veiere Arenais.
Role: Grand Admiral of the Commenori Naval Forces

Development Threads:
Troubled times ahead - Initial Post, supporting.

Age: 52yrs old.
Species: Human (Commenori).

Appearance:
The Admiral easily distinguishable through the former Imperial uniform, redesigned with the colors of the Commenori military persona; decorated with the striped insignia of his rank pinned to the left breast of the attire; Vikras Ansion looks every bit the part of the Chimaera’s crew while not forgetting where he has come from and all that he’s experienced to get there.

He has one noticeable scar that his attire does not cover, a severe burn to the left side of his neck, scarred and rising up to his jaw line, his ear on the same side is somewhat deformed, lacking a lobe unlike his right.

His hairline is receding, thin and greyed. While mostly clean shaven, he bears a moustache clean cut and well catered to match his hair style, brushed back and kept slick and presentable at all times.

Personality:
Vikras Ansion is steadfast in his professionalism, taking to his job with a zero tolerance to nonsense, his time in the Commenori Government as a military instructor has seen to his serious nature. His moral compass differs from Veiere’s in that he relies on tactical advantage and unless ordered, plays his cards closely; regardless of their differences, his loyalty is without question and beyond all other importance’s, his duty comes first to the Ship.

Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User.

Weapon of Choice: The DL-44 Heavy Blaster Pistol secured to his right hip has been a long trusted side-arm since his entrance into the Commenori Military Regiment. The holster of which comes black to go with the white uniform and offers room for such tools as a comm-device and personal datapad.

Skills: Vikras has become known best for his strategic value to the Commenori government, being reassigned to the Chimaera at Veiere’s request, it was the Jedi’s wish that the Command Ship be handled by a tactician that he could trust. The Admiral’s skills not only delve into Military Tactics but Space and Flight Navigation, Starship Engineering as well as Electrical; programing and Social Sciences (Psychology and some cultural studies).

Wealth: A man of average means with no living relatives to provide for, Vikras Ansion only has himself to care for. He has not amassed a great deal of wealth but rather takes a standard military commission worthy of the rank of Admiral.

Combat Function: Commanding the Commenori Fleet in naval exercises and fleeting operations.

Notable Possessions: N/A

History:

As a child, Vikras lived a privileged life among those of fair wealth. His parents, Cavos and Helena Ansion afforded him a steady upbringing with an upper class and private education. By the end of his teenage years he chose to leave civilian life to pursue enlistment within the Commenori Military; there he struggled for his initial year as he was not accustomed to the new environment after the sheltered childhood he left behind.

After finding himself unsuccessful in his infantry training, Vikras pushed to be reassigned to the Commenori Navy, there they offered a variety of subjects under the merchant fleet where he would spend the next three years learning and living as a Comms-station operator under the government. While the path of the soldier had proven not to be for him, he excelled aboard the bridge of a ship. Quick to understand and further explore the many learnings of space flight and navigation, his formerly lavish education gained him a step above the rest of his fellow peers in training.

With the rise in criminality around Commenor's sector of space, it quickly became apparent that the trade world would see much more illicit enterprise with the disillusion of the Galactic Republic. No longer one of the larger players on the scale of galactic trade and political leadership, the Hutt Cartel moved to lean on the smaller more vulnerable planets. Eventually this would lead to Vikras' decision to transfer from the merchant fleet to the Naval Fleet and undergo a formal maritime commission

Up until Lady Kay’s disappearance from Commenor, Vikras Ansion served as a tactician for the Commenori Navy. His main purpose to train others worthy of the Commenori fleet should the time come that the world comes under attack from invading forces. From his earlier years he has risen up the ranks from a mere cadet however did not receive the commission of Admiral until being enlisted by the Jedi Knight in the hope of finding the Madame President, [member="Lady Kay"] and returning her to her seat of government.

The transition from the world of Commenor to the Chimaera had not been an easy one, being not of the original crew, Vikras had to remain strong in the sight of his men to avoid assumptions of inferiority; the Chimaera itself now serving the Jedi as opposed to its original station under the Lords of the Fringe, left many feeling uneasy about their new alignment in that not only were they now fighting for an old foe.

Never the less, mutinies have thus far been deterred through moral leadership and gradually improving social standing throughout the vessel.

Updated: 4/30/2017


Veiere Arenais and Admiral Vikras Ansion both have since returned to Commenor where they serve their Queen and the government of the trade world. The Chimaera no longer in under their command and having been returned to the hands of Cyril Grayson's son and rightful heir, the two have turned their sights forward unto the prosperity of Commenors future and the political and military pursuits that come with the formerly small world of trade's expansion unto other territories.

Intent: To be commissioned under the effective leadership of the Commenor Government, to work under the Ministers of war and justice, alongside Lady Kay and Veiere Arenais for the benefit of citizens within Commenori Space.
 
Hola, [member="Veiere Arenais"]. Hope you don't mind, but you're stuck with me for purposes of review!

Honestly looks pretty cut-and-dry: the only thing I would note is that the history is very truncated, starting out pretty much in the approximate present, only noting that he was once a cadet. Could probably use expanding a little: where has he served previously? Always aboard ships, or has he had additional postings? Looking for a sense of what got the character where he is: as an NPC, he'll be usable by lots of different RPers, so it would be good for them to have a little more insight into the man.

That noted, this is an excellent submission thus far!
 
Not at all, [member="Tirdarius"], a pleasure as always.

I do not mind working on the history though that does raise a question (One likely better asked in an official capacity), are all NPC's able to be used by other players? The purpose of this NPC was to act as a tool for myself to mediate between fleet actions with the Chimaera while too being situated on the ground IC as Veiere.

Considering that I was given the vessel from a good friend before their choice to step away, I would prefer remain the sole dictator of the vessel's command. In which case, I may have jumped the gun with this submission, due to ignorance of the fact.
 
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The use of the NPC is at the discretion of the person who submitted it: so once you have submitted it and had it approved, it can be used at your discretion. For the purposes of the Codex, however, we do like things to be noted as being used by others as a possibility: were you to leave, and the ship moved on to someone else, they would inherit the NPC from you. Thus, it makes sense to set up the NPC in the way described.
 
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