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Veiere Arenais - Works of the Forge.

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The Jedi Path
Ancient Text of the Jedi Order.


OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: (Example: 'A personal weapon for Darth Scabious' or 'an advanced armored personnel carrier for the Republic')
  • Image Source: Click Here
  • Canon Link: The Jedi Path
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Name: The Jedi Path - Manuscript of the Jedi Order.
  • Manufacturer: The Jedi Order
  • Affiliation:
Individual Character Name: [member=Veiere Arenais].
Faction Name(s): The Jedi Order.
  • Modularity: No.
  • Production: Unique.
  • Material: Paper, hardcover binding.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Artifact, Ancient text.
  • Size: Handheld Book.
  • Length: 15.5 Centimeters.
  • Width: 5 centimeters.
  • Height: 29 Centimeters.
  • Weight: Less than 5 kg's (Estimated).
CONTENTS

Part One: Introduction to the Jedi Order.
  • The Jedi Code.
  • The History of the Jedi Order.
  • The Prophecy of the Chosen One (Removed).
Part Two: Jedi Initiate.
  • Joining a Clan.
  • Attire and Comportment.
  • The Three Pillars of the Jedi.
  • The First Pillar: The Force.
  • The Second Pillar: Knowledge.
  • The Third Pillar: Self-Discipline.
  • The Initiate Trials.
Part Three: Padawan.
  • Becoming an Apprentice.
  • Padawan Attire and Conduct.
  • The Reassignment Council.
  • Lightsabers: Their construction and use.
  • Sense Abilities.
  • Field Equipment and Mission Responsibility.
  • Advanced Cultures and Politics within The Republic.
  • Studying aboard Praxeum Ships.
  • The Jedi Trials.
  • The Knighting Ceremony.
Part Four: Jedi Knight.
  • Roles and Duties of a Jedi Knight.
  • Jedi Guardian.
  • Jedi Consular.
  • Jedi Sentinel.
  • Alter Abilities.
  • Advanced Lightsaber Techniques.
  • Enlisting New Members.
  • The History of the Sith.
  • Threats to Jedi Teachings.
  • Taking on a Padawan Learner.
  • Becoming a Master and Grand Master.
  • Transcending Death.
Strengths:
  • An ancient document/manuscript of the Jedi Order from an Era long since forgotten to the present day. This valuable text of the Jedi Order describes histories, ideologies and teachings spanning across generations of Jedi whom have undergone incredible threats and risen above challenges many would think impossible. The source of knowledge and the significance of this artifact to the Order is vital to honoring the Jedi Order's way of old.

Weaknesses:
  • Aged and fragile, this artifact was not transcribed in the form of holocron or any such technology but upon pages, scrolls for which have decayed over a great period of time.
  • This artifact is exactly that, an inanimate book of readings and therefore has no influence or added traits to the one whom carries it. What's offered from this manuscript of the Order is that of the knowledge held within and nothing more.

DESCRIPTION:

Official Description: Sourced from the Book itself.

This ancient training manual, crafted by early Jedi Masters, has educated and enlightened generations of Jedi. It explains the history and hierarchy of the Jedi Order, and what Jedi must know to take their place as defenders of the peace in the galaxy—from mastery of the Force to the nuances of lightsaber combat.

Passed down from Master to Padawan, the pages of this venerable text have been annotated by those who have held it, studied it, and lived its secrets. From Yoda and Luke Skywalker to Count Dooku and Darth Sidious, they have shaped the content of the book by leaving mementos tucked within the pages, tearing out pages, and adding their personal experiences as tangible reminders of the lessons they've learned.

Through wars and rebellion, only a single copy of this manual has survived. It is now passed on to you.
  • The ancient Masters who wrote the text: Fae Coven, Grand Master and head of the Jedi Council; Crix Sunburris, Jedi Ace starfighter pilot; Restelly Quist, Jedi Chief Librarian; Skarch Vaunk, Jedi Battlemaster and lightsaber expert; Bowspritz, Jedi Biologist and expert on the Living Force; Sabla-Mandibu, Jedi Seer and Holocron expert; Morrit Ch'gally, Jedi recruiter; Gal-Stod Slagistrough, Jedi leader of the Agricultural Corps.
  • Jedi who added personal commentary: Yoda, Thame Cerulian, Count Dooku, Qui-Gon Jinn, Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker, Ahsoka Tano, Darth Sidious, and Luke Skywalker.

The Knowledge held within this manuscript goes beyond most anything I've come across before. Not only is it a testament to the trials and impact that the Jedi Order have had upon the galaxy for generations upon others, it goes so far as to elaborate on the teachings of the past since long before I was raised within the Jedi Enclave of Svivren.

​Documented within this are the very ideals that I seek to teach my students today. The etiquette and the attire, the virtue that is expected of them.

From abilities and methods of Force practice to intricate details roaming over the seven practiced forms of lightsaber combat and the theory around them, sokan, the marks of contact and the Three Rings of Defense. Even personal techniques of long since passed Jedi Masters of whom I don't even recognize their names. What wonders they might have learned on their path and the trials they would have overcome.

Grandmaster Luke Skywalker and his father before him, Grandmaster Yoda and Darth Sideous...The history of the Sith and dating far beyond that to the Order in which led to the first documented Force Conflict...Within all of this is the guidance that I require to continue in this path. Where I may doubt, this proves others to have succeeded far beyond my limitations and brought into the present, now so many hundreds of cycles later, the history and legacy that is the Jedi Order today.

What might they see had they lived to witness such a distance between our people...

Long have I wished this indifference to come to an end, to embrace our path as a people serving the light.

Perhaps in time, we may yet prevail, alike those who've came before us...For those who will live on beyond our reach.

~ Veiere Arenais, Jedi Councilor & Scholar of the Force.
 
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a submission for the Jedi Order Enclave of Deneba, founded originally by the Galactic Republic, later attacked and left a ruin by the Black Empire. This location has been returned to by The Jedi Order and since salvaged for their future use.
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  • Canon: No.
  • Links:
Conclave at Deneba
Deneba (Planet)
Mount Meru

Returning to the Cradle (Republic Dominion of Deneba).
Black Empire Rebellion of Deneba (BE vs GR).
TJO Proclamation of Peace

SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: The Deneba Jedi Enclave.
  • Classification: Jedi Enclave.
  • Location: Deneba (Planet)
  • Affiliation: The Jedi Order
  • Accessibility: Located upon the side of Mount Meru, Deneba. The Jedi Enclave is visible to those within sight of the mountain, it's location given away by the few vessels that would come and go from the Jedi Order's facility of practice.
  • Security: Generic Security measures include external Security camera's, internal motion sensors. All other matters of security is otherwise left to the personnel living within the facility.
  • Description:
​The Jedi Enclave of Deneba has been a longstanding place of learning and an example of the Jedi Order from long before the time of the Gulag Plague. Dating as far back as before the Old Republic, the world of Deneba and Mount Meru for which the Enclave was established upon was once the place of Conclave for the Jedi, where members of the Order were called to in order to meet and discuss matters of vital import to their goals and future within the Galaxy. While this conclave has long since passed and with it all those that attended the locale, the Enclave has survived numerous generations and with it, various visits and wars from those of many Force Practices

Here in the present, the Jedi Order has re-established the Enclave following the latest battle between the Galactic Republic and the Black Empire affiliated with the One Sith Empire who was at the time in power across the core worlds and expansive regions. Now restored to it's former glory, the Enclave will continue to serve the interests of the light, providing sanctuary and a place of learning and enlightenment to those whom seek to join the Order and dedicate themselves to learning the ways of the Force as prominent Jedi Knights fighting for a better, safer Future for the Galaxy.

POINTS OF INTEREST
  • Jedi Council Chambers:
Where the Jedi Council delegate in matters of the Jedi Order's leadership and overall guidance. Here they may be joined with the Circle of Masters should the time warrant the invitation of their esteemed peers, the circular room lined with seats for which they sit, all discussions and subjects taken up in this room are kept private for the sake of the Order's interests and security.
  • Ceremonial Hall:
The Grand Hall for which Knighting Ceremonies and meetings of great import will be held. Such meetings can range from delegations sent from other Orders, political meetings or conclaves held for all to come and bare witness to. If there is anything significant to announce to the Jedi, it will be done here in the company of all.
  • Residents Quarters:
Where all Jedi Personnel and Guests to the Enclave will be catered for, here there are rooms private and shared for all members and ranks of the Order. The Guest dorms are held closest to the Hangar bay so not to confuse them with the students and mentors going about their day to day, yet otherwise quarters here are comfortable yet humble, fitting for that of the Jedi Order.
  • Training Facilities:
Where Jedi Students will likely see the majority of their training alongside the Knights and Masters of the Enclave whom will instruct and guide them with the goal of one day seeing them Knighted and take on students of their own. Training facilities range from a number of sparring dojo, an arena for greater exercise and group training.
  • Artisan Facilities:
A place for Jedi to express their interest and skills in those of technological pursuits. The Jedi Masters here are those responsible for the Enclaves maintenance of technology extending to that of the Hangar in the interests of keeping their Star-fighters and otherwise star-ships of their guests maintained and fueled.
  • The Jedi Archives:
The source for all information a Jedi could need. With access to the holo-net and the data comport for which most Archives have been linked to, those of the Order may come here to read up on subjects ranging from history of the Jedi Order, the Sith, the light and dark-side philosophies of the Force and much much more.
  • Holocron Vault:
A place of security for that of Force Artifacts collected by those of the Jedi Order. Only Jedi Masters and the Jedi Council have access to these vaults for the sake of safe keeping.
  • Hangar:
The Hangar is what it is, the hug for all vessels coming and going between the Enclave of the Jedi Order and elsewhere. Though not massive, it has enough space for a number of freighters and yachts to land and reside. Students of the Order are discouraged from roaming this area without a mentor present for their safety.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
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  • Intent: To create a heavy set of Armor fit for the King of Commenor and to put emphasis in the other half of Veiere's life that isn't of the Jedi Order but the stewardship and protection of the Commenor Systems Alliance.
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  • Canon Link: Turadium, Phrik, Force Light
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Heavy Armor
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  • Manufacturer: Commenor Systems Alliance, [member=Veiere Arenais].
  • Model: CSA K-191
  • Affiliation: The High King of Commenor
  • Modularity: Yes (Gauntlets, Boots, Cape/Shroud etc)
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Turadium, Phrik, Armorweave, Plasteel, Anti-Ion mesh Underlay Faraday Cage
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- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Average
- Kinetic: Average
- Lightsabers: High
- Other: Slugthrower: High
- Other: EMP/Ion: High
  • Classification: Heavy Combatant Armor
  • Weight: 14kg
  • Resistances: Lightsaber/Melee Heavy Resistance.
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  • Armorweaver and Anti-Ion Mesh Underlay for added absorption of Kinetic and Energy displacement.
  • Turadium Plating - Providing greater resistance to energy weapons such as lightsabers.
  • Phrik Plating - Boots, Gauntlets, Knees and Elbow Reinforced protection.
  • Faraday Cage - Negates the effects of Energy discharge attacks such as Force Lightning & EMP/ION Weaponsfire.
  • Force Imbued - Empowered with the Lightside of the Force through the workings of the Jedi Consular, Veiere has harnessed the ability of Force Light to temper the outer Turadium Plating. This added protection offers no advantages against Kinetic Damages however can counter the Environmental affects of the Dark-Side, most specifically the mind altering and emotionally destabilizing power that the Sith often use to induce fear and anxiety within their Opponents (Cleanse Mind).
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Far from the makings of the Jedi Order, this armor has been fashioned for open War in which Veiere as High King of the Commenor Systems Alliance expects to inevitably be forced into. With the Galaxy in a state of constant warfare and his position one of prominent power and authority over the CSA, Veiere despite his dedication and adherance to the Jedi Code can also not refuse the good he might achieve with a reach that extends so far as his own; thus since he has taken a step away from the Order now that it has become strong enough to continue to prosper without his every day guidance, he has set into motion the creation of an Armor set fit to combat against other goliaths of war and tempests of the Dark Side of the Force.

This suit of Armor is a heavy attire built for steadfast and head on confrontation; intended in use of Battlefield Command and leading their people into the fight as opposed to giving orders from the side-lines, Veiere wishes to set an example with this armor set in that their King is not only able to but ready to take up the front lines offering himself as the stonewall defense to the people before any others would sacrifice their lives. Hailing from the belief that no good man can rightly send others to their deaths while not readily rising to the threat of his own mettle, this battle ready attire has been finely crafted of some high-grade and highly resistant materials that none of his former attires can compare to.

Starting with the most unnecessary component of this Warriors Attire, the Shroud (Cape) that hangs from the front of the shoulders, etched into the chest plate of his armor, drapes down his back and sides and drags at the back of his feet. Completely for show, this dark and fairly loose and baggy cape has been made of the finest silk encompassing the interior whilst on the outside is a tougher fabric better fit for the outside environments that would dirty and very likely damage it. This piece of cloth though a symbol to his lordship and noble right across the Commenor Systems Alliance, can and will likely be detached during times of war to save himself the bother of immobility.

With regards to the appearance of the Armor's metal plating, nothing on the outside appears out of the ordinary to those not sensitive to the nature of the Force and lacking the ability to pick up on the Aura's of others. Those whom are however capable will feel the flow of the lightside of the Force enveloping Veiere as he wears the battle attire; the forging of metals given a great deal of special attention to as Veiere has worked to shape them himself through the melding of Force Light into the smithing works that make up the Armor's final shape and decor. Each piece of Phrik plating used to reinforce the weaker points around the knee's, elbows, shoulders, boots and gauntlets received hours of meditation, imbuing his own presence into the make for which his most extravagant use of Force Light has been tested to aid him in the defense against the compromising effects of the Darkside of the Force and potent practitioners in said arts.

Strengths:
  • Heavy Resistance to blasters, slugthrowers, and lightsaber strikes and can take significant damages before being downed.
  • Internal Faraday Cage - Used to counteract the offense of EMP's, Ion Charges and Force Lightening etc (Energy Displacement).
  • Force Imbued - Aids in the Concentration and harnessing of the Force enabling the wearer to produce strengthened lightside abilities/attacks without the typically necessary preparation and build up for such practices (Meditation/Channeling of Energies etc).
  • Aids in the ability to cleanse the Mind and defend against Mental Impairing effects of the Dark Side of the Force.
Weaknesses:
  • Heavy Armor demanding greater strength of mobility due to the increased weight of the Attire.
  • Melee Combat Armor - Designed for high impact confrontations, due to the weight and materials used, consistent long range weapons fire can result in extensive damage over time.
  • Explosive or High Ordinance damage - If it can level a building it can kill the wearer. Combined with kinetic force, resistance here is considered moderate at best.
  • Force Abilities are only strengthened in the above stated areas (Cleanse Mind and Concentration) providing the wearer of the Armor is trained in the abilities mentioned.
  • Strengthened Force abilities are susceptible to Force Dead or Impairing Circumstance (Ysalamir etc)
 
TRAINING LIGHTSABER
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  • Intent: To create a variation of Lightsaber most suitable for training purposes and self defense.
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  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Training Lightsaber.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: The Jedi Order
  • Model: Single Lightsaber/Training Variant
  • Affiliation: Closed-Market - The Jedi Order, Commenor Systems Alliance
  • Modularity: Yes; Crystals can be changed to switch out the color and variation of energy blades.
  • Production: Limited (Only A Select Group Of NPCs/PCs)
  • Material: Lightsaber Components, Kyber Crystal.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Training Sword.
  • Size: One-handed
  • Length: 80 Centimeters Estimated.
  • Weight: Approximately 1kg
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Lightsaber Crystal - Gifted or acquired by every Student, this Crystal is applied within the hilt by the Wielder for which will power the energy blade in training.
  • Alternating levels of strength - Low Settings to High.
Strengths:
  • Can Deflect Blaster Fire.
  • Can Block a strike from a Full Energy Lightsaber.
Weaknesses:
  • Cannot be set to Full settings such as standard lightsabers used by Jedi and Sith (Non-Fatal).
  • Low Settings - Stings upon contact with the physical body, resulting in a bruise.
  • High Settings - Burns upon contact with the Physical Body and Clothing.
DESCRIPTION

The Training Variation of Lightsaber is a tool constructed purely for students of the force not yet ready to take on the responsibilities or otherwise maintaining the premise that they need not a weapon capable of killing. Constructed from lightsaber components typically found within the Academies and Enclaves of the Jedi Order, these pieces are not hard to come by nor construct by hand as the Jedi themselves teach their students how to create the real deal nearing the end of their Apprenticeships.

These Lightsabers are typically commissioned and created by those of the Jedi Knight Body of the Order or otherwise those of the role of Jedi Artisan, for the use and introduction to the Saber Arts for younglings and inexperienced newcomers to the Order.

Set with only two levels of frequency or strength of the energy blade itself, these Lightsabers are set by default to low settings that younglings might learn to conduct themselves within controlled environments and settings in order to keep both sides of a sparring match safe from harm. Upon contact, low settings will result in a sting enough so to warrant caution and responsibility around their application whilst not injuring the student in any dire condition.

High Frequency has an increased strength of energy arcing throughout the blade that will result in a burn to the skin and result in the need for bacta application. These burns while nothing in the way of the first degree, will leave a mark if not tended to following such a training session and is only for the Senior Padawan and those given permission to utilize such a frequency by their Mentors (Jedi Knights or Masters).
 
THE KINGSGLAIVE OF COMMENOR

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: [member=Veiere Arenais]
  • Model: Single Handed Sword.
  • Affiliation: Closed-Market.
  • Modularity: No.
  • Production: Semi-Unique.
  • Material: Turadium, Lightsaber Crystal, Embroiled Gold.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Short-Sword.
  • Size: One-handed
  • Length: 60 Centimeters Estimated.
  • Weight: Approximately 4kg
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Force Imbued - Enhanced density of steel and sharpened edge, able to withstand blows against lightsabers and cut through higher grade materials.
  • Force Aura - Carries a portion of Veiere Arenais' personal aura due to his empowering the weapon within the Force.
  • Smaller blade crafted to the Pommel (Back of the Sword) for back-handed striking if necessary.
  • A Black Leather Sheath to house the blade upon Veiere's side, linked to his belt.
Strengths:
  • Highly resistant to Lightsabers.
  • Enhanced edge for a sharper blade strengthened by the Force.
  • Single-Handed for swift and precise Strikes.
  • Empowers/Strengthens the use of Telekinesis, the Sword requiring only one hand to wield.
Weaknesses:
  • Heavier than most Lightsabers and Short Swords.
  • Lacking the momentum of two-handed Swords and heavy weaponry.
  • Shorter in length of blade compared to most standard lightsabers by a significant 20 centimeters.
  • ​Inconvenient to store compared to lightsabers and their retractable blades, this sword forever requires a sheath to carry on his person when not used in combat and is far less discrete in keeping hidden.
  • Can be sensed within the Force with no way of hiding said presence from other practitioners.
DESCRIPTION

Since teaching his students the ways of Imbuing weapons such as swords for training within the power of the Force, Veiere has had it in his mind to one day create such an artifact for himself. Today we see that goal finally coming to life in the form of the Kingsglaive, a Ceremonial weapon of the King of Commenor empowered by the lightside of the Force to amplify specifically the ability that he has used primarily since his studies as an apprentice, Telekinesis and the art of manipulating the environment within his will.

Unlike Lightsabers for which require careful precision in their electronics and maintenance, the sword itself was rather simple to hone, if not tiring working all day before the forge behind his and Kay Arenais' home on Commenor. Using a sheet of Turadium, folding and hammering it over and over with the heat of the furnace and the raw strength of a smithing hammer, Veiere first sought to shape the blade before setting to work on the handle for which required something a bit more unique to the craft.

Within the handle of this single handed weapon, not only has the force been breathed into the workings of the metal but so too as one of his lightsaber crystals been fused within the interior for a strengthened presence in the Force. Attuned to this crystal as Jedi often do during their steps toward crafting a personal lightsaber, this Sword now carries a portion of his very own signature within the Force and can therefore be sensed.
 
Veiere Arenais' Personal Holocron

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To leave behind a repository of knowledge and testament of will should Veiere Arenais inevitably pass away. This device and Force Artifact is to remain behind and in the possession of one Kay Arenais, for whom might help guide others down the way of the Jedi Path.
  • Image Source: Click here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Holocron
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Jedi Holocron
  • Size: Handheld
  • Length: 0.1m
  • Weight: 0.5kg
CONTENTS
Veiere's introduction into the theory surrounding the Force, the individual theories regarding the Dark Side and the Light Side of the Force; going into no immense detail to depict the abilities or philisophies of the Sith to keep those who have accessed his holocron from coming to risk the lure of it's descent.
Commonly referred to as Force Sense, the ability to see much farther than ones eyes can travel; Tactus Otium is the answer to the question: How are Jedi able to react fast enough to evade and counter blaster fire; providing a vivid sense of the situation unfolding around those capable of applying this skill in their chosen field.
A basic component in the use of most Core Force Powers, this is the means to amplify ones focus in the force itself, strengthening what potential you might naturally have in order to delve deeper and produce a superior effect of the desired ability. Those of great skill in Altus Sopor can cloud their presence from other force users completely by melding their presence in among the natural flow of the force itself.
An umbrella title to the force abilities focused on self healing and rejuvenation of the natural body. Stamina and lost strength can be regained by drawing the force into ones center, healing significant injuries and sustaining ones life in the field of combat given enough time to focus.
Relating to the ability to absorb energies both natural and otherwise, this branch of the Force has been known to be applied both offensively and defensively. For an example, the ability to lesson the blow of a blaster shot to the side through great focus in extending the force from within to create a small barrier around ones exterior (some call this force: Protect).
Consisting of more than just communication from one mind to another, Telepathy is the umbrella term for the ability to affect a persons mind on the whole. Whether convincing others to do something they normally wouldn't (mind trick), or otherwise projecting images, memories or words into the consciousness of the target. The effect of Telepathy varies dependent on the mental strength of the foe.
Referred to some as Force Push and Force Pull, telekinesis consists of two branches of the ability. Sustained Telekinesis where an object or person is held in place for a period of time, and then Burst Telekinesis in which something or someone is thrown backwards or pulled in towards the user.
The ability to harness the strength and purity of the lightside of the force in order to combat and eradicate the presence of dark side apparitions and counter the effects of their users. This ability is said to be able to disconnect those of the dark from their affinity in the force, if only to temporarily disable them from further conflict.
All that Veiere has learned in theory, recorded for the guidance of any willing participant or student of the Lightsaber arts of the Jedi Order. Lightsaber forms include: Form Zero, Shii-Cho, Makashi and Soresu. Philosophy on the Lightsaber arts ranges from the Marks of contact, the Three Rings of Defense to the principles of combat such as Sokan.
Veiere's personal expression of the importance surrounding the relic of the Jedi Order's ancient histories, the documented teachings and ideologies of the Jedi Order and why this codex is such a crucial and valuable asset for the Jedi of today.
  • Philosophies of the Jedi Order:
Veiere's personal teachings upon The Unifying Force, The Living Force, The Jedi Code & The Three Pillars of the Jedi Order. Ideologies and Theoretical teachings provided to encourage discipline and awareness within those training to be Jedi, to practice the use of the force in good moral judgement that they might steer clear of the lure of the Darkside of the Force.
  • The Revelation of Balance in the Force:
This final chapter in the knowledge that Veiere Arenais has gained and might now pass on to those who come in contact with his Holocron will find his belief here upon Balance within the Force, an often argued theory in what this means to both the Jedi Order and the Sith Empire's heritage. Here, Veiere's explanation concludes that for balance to be maintained, both sides of the Force are required, that without Darkness there cannot be Light and without the Light there would be no Darkness. For no matter how many centuries the two Orders have fought, Veiere maintains the belief that all peoples regardless of alignment have the right to live and choose to do so free of their own will. While Justice must be maintained in Sentient Society, the Force lives and breathes through all living things, thus the Jedi should never seek to kill or end the presence of the Darkside; only to regulate and protect others from the dangers that can come of its influence, to teach awareness of the Force and to become models of guardianship over all.

DESCRIPTION

Within this Jedi holocron contains the full legacy of Veiere Arenais' learnings and struggles along his path to serving the Will of the Force and the good of the people of the Galaxy. From his entrance into the Jedi Order as a child the age of five years to his Knighthood within the Enclave of Svivren; The attack that took the lives of his friends and family within that Enclave to why he sought to enter into Exile upon the world of Alzoc Three and all further recollections leading up to the establishment of the Jedi Enclave of Deneba and the Commenor Systems Alliance for which he and his wife Lady Kay reside over.

Accessible only to those of Force Sensitivity and the training on the aspect of Control enough so to probe the Holocron with their Presence within the flow of natural energies, the Holocron will open at the top to emit a holographic image of Veiere Arenais, the size and appearance of which will be equal to that of who he was in life at the time of the Holocron's make. The Holographic image will respond to questions only of which it holds the answers too, for all other information not included in the above contents, will need to be sought after elsewhere.

Strengths:
  • Jedi Codex: A trove of knowledge into the teachings of the Jedi Order, the abilities one might gain through training alongside the information found to be stored here are rather powerful, provided the one in possession of this Holocron put in the same time and dedication into training as Veiere has, a Jedi Master of the Order.
  • Aura of Light: Through his craftsmanship and the embodiment of his lightsid presence within the Force, this Holocron has come to carry a much lighter aura of it's own, familiar to that of Veiere's to those that would know him in life, those of Force Sensitivity would be able to sense this Artifact from a distance and know that it once belonged to a Jedi.
Weaknesses:
  • Unguarded Knowledge: There is no security to this Holocron that would keep those of the Darkside of the Force from being able to access and manipulate the teachings that Veiere Arenais has recorded; Whether Jedi, Sith Lord or Rogue Practitioner, all with an ounce of training will be able to gain power through this artifact.
  • Force dependent: This Holocron has been designed in a way that it should only answer to Force Users with the basic training in the aspect of control, that they might gain access to the knowledge stored. As this is a Jedi Holocron, those with out training will otherwise find this Holocron to be but a strangely shaped artifact that would be more use to them to sell rather than to try to keep hold of.
  • Practice makes Perfect: Abilities learned through the guidance of this Holocron are only so powerful as the person that wields it and the time they have committed to training.
 
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Intent: To create a personal Corvette dubbed "The Shadow of Commenor: Repertoire" for both [member="Caedyn Arenais"] and [member="Loreena Arenais"], Veiere's Children of whom will be chaperoned by an NPC until they come of age and skill to pilot themselves.
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Canon Link: Click here.
Restricted Missions: If Required - To be announced.
Primary Source: Click here.

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Manufacturer: Commenor Systems Alliance.
Model: X-70 Phantom (Custom).
Affiliation: [member="Caedyn Arenais"] & [member="Loreena Arenais"].
Production: Unique.
Materials Used: Stygium crystal cloaking device, Durasteel, Carbon Fibre, Electronics, etc.

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Classification: Heavy Corvette, Personal Transport.
Length: 80 Meters.
Width: 94 Meters.
Height: 18 Meters.
Armament:
  • Heavy laser cannons.
  • Concussion Missiles.
Defenses:
  • Stealth Generator (Stygium Based).
  • Advanced Shielding.
  • Counter-Measures (Thermal Flares).
Hangar: Very Low - 2 RZ-36 Sports Bikes.
Maneuverability Rating: Average.
Speed Rating: 8 (High).
Hyperdrive Class: 1 (Fast).

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  • 4 Escape Pods.
  • Comfortable Accommodations for Travel.
  • Speeder Bay.
  • Bridge.
  • Captains Quarters.
  • Crew Quarters.
  • Main Hold.
  • Cargo Hold.
  • Holo-Terminal.
  • Conference Room.
  • Medical Bay.
  • Turret Access.
  • Airlock.
  • Boarding Ramp.
  • Cargo/Freight Loading Lift.
  • Engine Room.
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  • Stygium crystal cloaking device.
  • High-power sensor array.
  • Long-range holo-transmitter.
Strengths:
  • Speeder bay: While the Repertoire has been neglected of a smaller hangar for the likes of starfighters and other personal vessels of such a size, the children of house Arenais have fortunately been given a place to stow away their RZ-36 Sports Bikes between destinations. Much to their appreciation, this offers them the ease and enjoyment of ground based transport since departing from the Shadow.
  • Cloaking Generator: The Stygium Based Cloaking Field is top of the line and rather expensive, yet it ensures the better protection of Veiere and Kay Arenais' twin children, a priority for which they were eager to include. Given the nature of this vessel being designed for transport over combat, remaining off the radar is particularly easier with this obvious asset to the vessel.
  • Recreational Center: With the matter of piloting in the hands of a professional employed by their father [member=Veiere Arenais], the children have been kitted out with all the facilities they might desire to keep them busy and entertained between flights. Their Quarters are extravagant, having taken what would otherwise be the Captains facilities as well as a number of other rooms such as a personal workshop, a kitchen with all their favorite foods easy to make given their inability to cook without burning the house down and plenty of games to play together.
Weaknesses:
  • No Hangar: Given the size of the Repertoire and the conditions for which have been built within her hull, there has not been a Hangar included within her layout and thus offers no alternative transport or means of escape while in flight, save for the use of Escape Pods and otherwise abandoning the vessel to its destruction or otherwise the likes of pirates and scavengers.
  • Average Offense: Prioritizing maneuverability and speed over firepower, the Repertoire is by the nature of Veiere and Kay's preference, built for transport and comfort as well as the security of their children over the possible encouragement of combat and mischief they're so well known for. Unfortunately for the twins, for the consistent benefit of the vessel itself, it's far more common for her pilot to duck and run rather than remaining in combat.
  • Limited Fuel Supply: Due to the Hyperdrive Class and the Repertoire's average high-speeds, fuel consumption is in high demand and long-term flight without regular stops is incredibly ill-advised.
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The Modified X-70 Phantom Class Corvette is a Custom variation of a far older originally Imperial vessel who's blueprints got into the hands of the Commenor Systems Alliance during their exchanges with the Galactic Empire and [member="Tanomas Graf"]'s generous contribution of information's benefiting the peaceful Government movement within the Expansion Regions neighboring the Core.

Despite the age of the Vessels design, the Systems Alliance for whom Veiere specifically had recreate this former masterpiece for his children's sake, have kitted it out with all the up-to-date technologies that would see them too and from their destinations with ease and security. With such luxurious space, a large quantity of rooms and facilities for the Twins and Adelle Ciryal (Their Pilot) to make use of, those aboard this vessel will most usually want for very little where their needs have otherwise been catered for.

The slender shape of the Vessels hull and the aerodynamics of her make allow for a swift take off and the lax in maneuverability at higher speeds compared to most standard Corvettes, however favoring power and mobility has come at the price of increased fuel consumption and the time between stops is unfortunately disadvantaged. Never the less, the Repertoire was designed in the hope that Veiere and Kay's children could explore the wonders of the Galaxy and avoid confrontation where ever it might find them
 
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  • Intent: The creation of an NPC for which to watch over the children of [member="Lady Kay"] and [member=Veiere Arenais] as the twins grow and learn to explore the Galaxy outside of Commenor's borders.
  • Image Credit: Click Here (Pinterest Link - Could not find anything else)
  • Role: Bodyguard and Personal Chaperone of [member="Caedyn Arenais"] & [member="Loreena Arenais"].
  • Links: N/A.

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  • Age: Thirty Two Standard Human Years.
  • Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User.
  • Species: Human, Commenori.
  • Appearance:
​Adelle Ciryal is of an athletic build, not overly muscular nor petite but rather a fine balance of both and resembling the appearance of someone who has trained excessively and partakes in daily physical activity.

Her facial structure is not of an intimidating build, her eyes are gentle, hair long and brown and cheeks holding warmth to compliment her caring demeanor for the children that she has been employed to protect and watch over.

Her typical attire while on duty is a variation of military and tactical uniform offering maneuverability and protection while too looking every bit the part of a well cared for pilot and representative of the Commenor Systems Alliance for which she hails from.

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  • Name: Adelle Ciryal.
  • Loyalties: House Arenais, [member="Caedyn Arenais"] & [member="Loreena Arenais"].
  • Wealth: Reasonable, employed by the King and Queen of Commenor under private commission, living expenses catered for.
  • Notable Possessions:
​- Defender Class Adaptable Armor.
- HC Mallet Charric Hand Cannon.
- The Shadow of Commenor: "The Repertoire".
  • Skills:
​- Former Starfighter Pilot/Naval Combat Training.
- Close Quarters Hand-To-Hand Combat Training.
- First Aid Responsive Training.
  • Personality:
​Adelle Ciryal is very calm on the outside, self-taught to keep her doubts and insecurities close within, she rarely shows her vulnerability though she isn't void of them in any sense. She's an independent woman with no children nor family of her own and thus over time has become rather attached to the twins Caedyn and Lori; her protective instincts and general nature over them mimics the concerns of the children's parents recognizing the hostility of the galaxy and wishing for their safety and ultimate enjoyment of life. While she doesn't understand the complexities of the Force she does her utmost to help to guide them in whatever their struggles might be.

Towards others, Adelle comes off as confident with a side of sarcasm and dry humor. She's skeptical of those she doesn't know well and outside of the systems alliance she knows not to trust any with sensitive information that might endanger her companions nor her ship the Repertoire.

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  • Weapon of Choice:
​Adelle favors the side-arm for which is comfortably holstered against her right hip. The HC Mallet Charric Hand Cannon packs one hell of a punch with a mighty kick yet against all her recoil the blaster pistol has the power to drop most light armored foes with a single shot to the chest. For heightened range compared to most blaster pistols however, the hand cannon comes with a decreased load-out of ammunition, Adelle having to reload often should her aim fail to land her marks or their armaments best her initial tactics.
  • Combat Function:
​Aboard the 'Shadow of Commenor', Adelle's piloting skills are excellent and her tactics in evasive maneuvers have saved her from many a fatal encounter. She has a rather extensive history of military operations and missions undertaken in the name of the Commenor Systems Alliance since the world's expansion into a major government influence across the Galaxy. Since retiring from the military however and taking on this private commission under the Royal family, the specifications for which her newest vessel was built for favors a quick retreated as opposed to long term exposure to enemy vessels and the like of dog-fighting she used to have a knack for.

On the ground, Adelle is most effective at short to mid-range; armed with a high powered pistol and the training in hand to hand combat, she is most often on the move and keeping herself low to the ground in order to be a difficult target to pin down or hit. If able to get in close to her opposition, she would sooner revert to close quarters tactics and seek to disarm those who would do her harm. Incapacitation is most likely the outcome of any battle that she can gain control over, she doesn't enjoy the act of killing in the slightest and would prefer to solve most encounters through verbal communication where possible.

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Adelle Ciryal was born on the world of Commenor to parents whom took pride in their duty to the trade world's small naval forces during a time before it's queen [member="Lady Kay"] had been voted into leadership, back then as president of the smaller world still isolated in it's small time priorities and self interests.

Raised to be a patriot of Commenor, her love of her home-world has ensured she never be away from home for too long despite her love for all things fast and flying. At the age of eighteen, Adelle enlisted within the Commenori Naval Forces and spent many of her years as a lower ranking Airman. Her aspirations to rise up the chain of hierarchy took less priority over her complacency to merely serve in the best interests and need of her people and it was this attitude that over time earned her the notice of Vikras Ansion whom soon began to follow her career.

By the time the new monarchy had come into power over Commenor and Lady Kay had turned the tide of authority away from the formerly democratic leadership to a confederate rule, Adelle Ciryal had come to support the growing rumors of Commenor's expansion and intent to offer security to her neighboring worlds and nations. Volunteering to take part in the earlier patrolling runs of formerly foreign sectors, she and her squadron encountered a number of assignments turned hostile thanks to the likes of piracy and criminal movements formerly left undeterred by the lack of a strong military presence. By the time Commenor had grown into the Commenor Systems Alliance, Adelle had earned the promotion to Staff Sergeant and had become the number two pilot of the Starfighter Squadron "Recluse" nicknamed for it's tendency to take on missions within the lesser known regions during the governments attempts to bring in new peoples under their care.

Adelle's leave of the Commenori Navy didn't come until much later around the time of the Twins, Caedyn and Loreena's birth; she taking it upon herself to resign in order to care over her parents who had fallen ill due to age and natural causes. By this time she had earned a comfortable living and been situated within an upper district of Chasin City. Following the loss of her parents, a few years would pass before she would find herself being called upon by none other than Commenor's Grand Admiral Vikras Ansion, requesting her consideration for a private commission under the service of Veiere Arenais.

Thus, the story of today.
 
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To create a Dark-Side Variation to the formerly traditional attire of the Jedi Order for which Veiere Arenais was once a part of. This new set of Dark Tunic, Greaves, Gauntlets, Boots and Robe are to become the typical attire for which he will wear throughout his days as a Dark Jedi and Warrior of the Force.
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- Source Website (Click Here).
- Dark Jedi Robes Front/Back (Click Here).
- Dark Jedi Robes/Tunic (Click Here).
- Dark Jedi Tunic (Click Here).
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- Not Applicable.
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To be announced/completed.
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- Veiere Arenais' Original Jedi Attire.
- Jedi Apparel.

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- House Arenais (Faction).
- [member=Veiere Arenais].
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- Full Body Set, Force Imbued.
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- [member=Veiere Arenais].
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This Attire comes in a variety of individual pieces for which can be removed, replaced or worn above or beneath other armor variants.

- Hooded Robe (Black).
- Tunic (Upper Body).
- Greaves (Leggings).
- Gauntlets (Hands).
- Utility Belt (Misc Tools).
- Boots (Feet).
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- Unique.
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- Armor-weave.
- Fiber-mesh.
- Synth Fibres.
- Leather.

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- Light Weight Clothing.
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- Very Light.
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This Attire is a clothing set only, void of any metals or high grade materials and thus offers zero resistances within combatant situations.

- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): None.
- Kinetic: None.
- Lightsabers: None.
- Temperature: Low Resistance to cold, adaptable to warmer climates.

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- Force Empowered: Telekinesis, Dominate Mind, Force Corruption.

- Reinforced Boots: Steel Capped for environmental safety and personnel mistreatment.
- Gauntlets: Added coverage across the wrist and forearms.
- Utility Belt: Comlink, Datapad, Omni-Tool, Minor Medical Kit, Food Rations (2 Days).
- Satchel: Additional Inventory.
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- Empowered strength in the practices of Telekinesis, Dominate Mind, Force Corruption.
- Maneuverable and Agile due to the light weight, low grade materials used in the Attires creation.
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- Zero Protection against Weaponry, Kinetic, Energy-Based and Force attacks.
- Force Empowerment can be rendered void by Force-Dead/Counter-Force artifacts and creatures such as Ysalamir.

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a submission of Veiere Arenais' Tunic and Robes of Exile.
  • Image Source: Click Here.
  • Canon Link: N/A.
  • Primary Source: Jedi Robes.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: [member=Veiere Arenais].
  • Affiliation: Veiere Arenais.
  • Model: N/A.
  • Modularity: Yes (Can replace individual pieces - Gloves, Tunic, Robes, Boots etc).
  • Production: Unique.
  • Material: Fiber & Fabrics.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multipurpose.
  • Weight: Light.
  • Resistances: None.
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): None.
- Kinetic: None.
- Lightsabers: None.

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Force Imbued: Empowering the Practice of Altus Sopor & Tactus Otium; This tunic has been bathed in the Aura and Force Presence of Veiere Arenais over such a period of time that his experience has bled through into the fabric itself.
DESCRIPTION

Easily described by most common folk to be the beaten or battered attire of a Jedi Knight, these robes are very much the tan and brown tone one might consider to be typical of such a practitioner. For Veiere Arenais however it is the history and the sentimental value that he carries with him as he wears the old Tunic and hooded brown Robe.

Indeed, these were one of the many sets of robes that Veiere wore as a Force Practitioner; not simply having acted as a Jedi in his life time, his pursuits and his mistakes have taken Veiere across many different paths, not all of them good nor beneficial to he and his loved ones. Today, Veiere's old Attire bears the ware and tear of the Exile's place in life.

Strengths:

  • Ease of movement: The lack of metal or hardened alloy and the primary use of fabrics offers complete freedom of movement and almost no weight what-so-ever. Stamina and Strength are hindered none by this Attire.
  • Force Imbued: Strengthening Veiere's Sensory Abilities and Control over the Force, Precognition and the ability to hide his presence within the Force is capitalized upon with this old set of garbs that have seen much experience in the Exile's lifetime.
Weaknesses:
  • High Vulnerability: This Attire offers zero resistances in combat and is not to be considered as a set of Armor. It has been fashioned from the traditional sense of a Jedi's garbs and can be pierced, torn or burned all the same as any other Civilian clothing.
  • Practitioner's Garb: The robes of the Exile carry obvious traits comparable to the style of numerous light and dark sided practitioners and Order's known to the History of the Galaxy. As such, it is easily assumed that the one whom wears the attire is Force Sensitive.
 
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"The CSA Resolute of House Arenais".
The Resistance, of Commenor.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION:

  • Intent: To Submit and give detail to the Victory II Class Stardestroyer under the direct command of Veiere Arenais, to serve as his mobile base of operations during the Sith Empire’s occupation of Commenor and the symbol of the Royal Families continued freedom in the fight to free Commenor from the clutches of tyranny.

  • Image Source: Click Here.

  • Canon Link: N/A.

  • Primary Source: Stardestroyer, Victory II Class.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION:

  • Manufacturer: Commenor, House Arenais.

  • Affiliation: House Arenais, ([member=Veiere Arenais], [member="Lady Kay"] Arenais, [member="Caedyn Arenais"], [member="Loreena Arenais"]).

  • Model: Victory II Class Command Ship (Custom).

  • Production: Unique.

  • Material: Reinforced Quadanium Steel, Titanium, Durasteel Hull, Transparisteel View Ports.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS:

  • Classification: (Destroyer, Command Ship).

  • Length: 1800 meters.

  • Width: 1000 meters.

  • Height: 600 meters

  • Armament: High.
Ion munitions (Immobilizing Fire).
AG-2G quad laser cannons.
Concussion Missile Launchers.
Point Defense Laser Cannons.
Long-Range Turbolasers.
Quad Turbolaser Batteries.

  • Defenses: Moderate.
Advanced Deflector Shields.
Ray Shields.
Flares - Countermeasures.

  • Hangar: 7 Squadrons.
ETA-4 Interceptors.
TIE/LN Starfighter Squadron.
Troop Dropships.
Personal Upsilon-Class Command Shuttle.

  • Maneuverability Rating: Low.

  • Speed Rating: Average.

  • Hyperdrive Class: 2.
STANDARD FEATURES:
ADVANCED SYSTEMS:

Strengths:

  • Heavy Offensive Capability: "The best Defense is a good Offense"...-Or so they say. This ship prioritizes firepower over it's shielding systems, packing a serious punch in it's array of munitions and ranged targeting.

  • Priority Command: The Flagship of House Arenais, the Resolute is designed to serve as a command vessel operating at the rear of the Fleet in order to oversee the status of other vessels and ensure order across The Resistance of Commenor.
Weaknesses:
  • Wide Berth: Poor Maneuverability due to the size of the StarDestroyer, this Command Vessel will rely heavily upon it's fire-power and other supporting vessels should it find itself engaged at close range by enemy fleets.
  • Head of the Snake: Carrying IFF Transponders affiliated with Commenors former Systems Alliance state, and judging by the shear size and presence of the vessel, the Resolute will be clearly identified as a pivotal craft among the fleet and therefore a likely target for opposing forces.

DESCRIPTION:

Commenor, formerly the Capital World of the Commenor Systems Alliance until the Sith Empire sought to blockade their sector of space for taking in and caring for the refugee's having fled the fall of the Galactic Alliance, have too been besieged and overcome by the Dark Lord of the Sith and his armada of death.

Escaping captivity during the attack of Chasin City however, the Former King and husband to Lady Kay Arenais, High Queen of the Systems Alliance, was able to get clear of the sector before the Sith could recapture and subsequently execute him. Thanks to the help of Baron Morcus and those loyal to him, Veiere Arenais would rendezvous with remnants of the fallen Systems Alliance in order to rally them together that they might one day rebel against their oppressors, rescue his Wife and return Commenor to her former, free and peaceful-loving state.

The Royal Family of Commenor, House Arenais have been declared an enemy of the Sith Empire and are being hunted alongside every former Minister and Heads of State. With the Sith once more having taken everything from Veiere, he has used all of his influence and remaining financial assets to fully fund the new construction of the "CSA Resolute". The flagship of his Families Legacy and a beacon of hope and rebellion of a once great Nation.
 
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: To give depth and description to the Freedom Fighters, Liberators and Resistance of Commenor's Guerrilla Forces.
Image Credit: Click Here.
Role: A combination of Rebel Soldiers and the remains of the Commenor Systems Alliance Military still loyal to the Royal Family and their King and Queen, Veiere and [member="Lady Kay"] Arenais.
Links: Commenor - Faction Assets, The Siege of Commenor.

GENERAL INFORMATION

Unit Name: Freedom Fighters of Commenor.
Affiliation: Commenor, House Arenais.
Classification: Military, Guerrilla Warfare.
Equipment:
Firearms & Melee Armaments:

Explosives:

Weapons Modifications:

Utilities:

Military Attire/Armors:

COMBAT INFORMATION

Availability: Common.
Deployment: Mass.

Strengths:
  • Strength of Conviction when fighting on their home ground (Commenor).
  • Variety of special forces and soldiers with numerous fields of expertise and experience.
  • Well equipped from the former days of the Commenor Systems Alliance.
  • Guerrilla warfare.
Weaknesses:
  • Non-Force Users.
  • Poor Up-keep, lack of consistent finance demanding regular salvage operations and the need to conserve military supplies/ammunition.
  • Reduced numbers of each unit/garrison, following the Siege of Commenor.
Description:

What remains of the Commenor Systems Alliance Military Force's that haven't already been killed or captures by the Sith Empire following the forced surrender of the High Queen, has since been recalled to the Command of Lady Kay's husband, King of Commenor, Veiere Arenais. Aboard The CSA Resolute surrounded by the Resistance Fleet who have either offered their loyalty or previously been loyal to the House Arenais and rightful front of the now enslaved capital world, the Rebel Forces have been preparing to retake their home-world, knowing full-well that against the might of the Dark Lord's Legion Horde, many will ultimately give their lives in the pursuit of justice and freedom.

Commenor, once the lead world of the Systems Alliance, had once stood as a beacon of neutrality offering peace to the war-torn immigrants and refugees fleeing their fallen worlds and seeking sanctuary away from the flames of conflict and political strife. Many have not forgotten where they have come from and what has been taken from them during the blockade and the siege that was forced upon the Systems Alliance, giving their Queen a choice in either sacrificing her leadership or sacrificing good innocent people to the tyranny of House Zambrano and those loyal to Darth Carnifex.

Determined to see his Wife and his people freed of their captors, Veiere Arenais has been forced to keep his distance while too sending word out to any and all whom might consider themselves friends of Commenor, loyal to his Queen whom only sought to do good in a Galaxy drowning in chaos and war. As her right hand, the one often present in the need of a firm, authoritarian approach, Veiere has vowed that he will not stop fighting until Commenor is returned to it's former stature.

Though their future remains uncertain and there is still much fighting to be had, the men and women of the Commenor Resistance Force's look on with their heads held high, believing their cause to be moral and true. These brave soldiers, Militia-Forces and Volunteers each have a part to play before their mission is complete. Seeking allies and anyone willing to join them for the coming battle that will either see Commenor's liberation, or die trying.
 
THE JEDI TEMPLE OF RANNON
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
INTENT:
To edit and re-purpose the former Dark Jedi Temple of Rannon into a purified place of learning and training under the guidance of the Jedi of the Galaxy. This reformed Jedi Temple is to be a place of pilgrimage for any Jedi regardless of age or position in the Order, to be able to come to and seek a quiet corner of the galaxy to train and stay for as long as they so choose.

IMAGE SOURCES:
Original Source (Website).
The Jedi Temple of Rannon.

CANON LINKS:
Not Applicable.

RELEVANT LINKS:
Dark Jedi (Canon Link).
The Dark Jedi Temple - Original Submission.

SETTINGS INFORMATION
STRUCTURE NAME:
The Jedi Temple Of Rannon.

CLASSIFICATION:
Jedi Academy.

LOCATION:
Rannon (Canon Planet).
Rannon System (Outer Rim Territories).

AFFILIATION:

ACCESSIBILITY:
Embedded within the side of great mountainous terrain, the only possible entrance into this facility is via Personal Starship. The Hangar is monitored by a small trafficking Crew delegating all inbound and out-going transports to and from the Jedi Academy.

SECURITY:

DESCRIPTION:


The Rannon Temple was built during the time of the Commenor's financial peak, House Arenais wanting for nothing in the way of credits, thus Veiere Arenais was able to have the Temple built, sparing no expense. A Marvel of interior decor, the Temple is deceivingly large as the inner workings were dug into the side of the Mountain itself, allowing for multiple facilities and the tools to teach and train in every likely subject a prospective Jedi Knight may require today.

Since the previous occupants left the Temple to be something of a derelict, Veiere Arenais second trip back to the World would see several vessels journey alongside his own, crewman and volunteers from his Home-world come to help revive and refresh the Facilities in preparation for use under the name of the Jedi Academy Network, a social network for all Jedi across the Galaxy regardless of their background or world views.

Today, the Temple of Rannon looks every bit the establishment that you would expect from the Jedi Order. After numerous weeks, the residual flow of the Dark Side of the Force has been cleansed, the air fresher and lighter on the lungs, leaving no evidence of the Temples past to burden any new minds seeking to follow the Will of the Force, guided by the Light.

POINTS OF INTEREST

ARRIVAL AND DEPARTURE FACILITIES:

RESIDENTIAL QUARTERS:
  • Jedi Knights Private Quarters.
  • Jedi Masters Private Quarters.
  • Faculty Lounge & Recreational Area.
  • Student Shared Quarters.
  • Student Archives and Study Hall.

EDUCATION FACILITIES:

TRAINING FACILITIES:

MEDICAL & EMERGENCY FACILITIES:

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

While Veiere Arenais has spent most of his life dedicating himself to the Jedi Order and to the Force, the last five years have been a time of great darkness, where he has made choices that not only shamed his families name, but saw to the death of numerous Jedi, ending his distinguished career as a member of the Jedi Order.

Having temporarily lost his faith in the Jedi, Veiere unintentionally allowed the Dark Side of the Force to cloud his mind, burdened by his failure to keep true to the Jedi Path and his decision to resign from the Jedi Enclave of Deneba, his answer was to turn his frustrations upon the rest of the Galaxy in a bid to secure peace through any means necessary. His first step, to found the Dark Jedi Order and build this very Temple on the isolated world of Rannon in the far south east of the known Galactic Map.

The Dark Jedi were equipped with a fleet of Starfighters and Assault Cruisers, personally financed by "Traitor King of Commenor", Veiere Arenais. Many of these Vessels still in tact and soon to be re-purposed along with the Temple itself.

From their hidden Temple on Rannon, Veiere led the Dark Jedi in their first assault against the Enclave that he had founded on Deneba. By this point, his regret had turned to anger and in his disillusioned mind, ridding Deneba of the Enclave meant wiping the slate clean for himself to start over with the new Order; however, while the assault was successful, many Jedi were slain and the chaos that he had wrought upon people that were once his own, proved to weigh far greater upon his conscience than he could bare.

Deneba, a World under the territory of the Commenor Systems Alliance itself, earned Veiere a large price on his head and calls for him to be brought to justice. Ridden with guilt once again, knowing just how vile an act he had committed, he abandoned the world of Rannon and went into Exile...It wasn't until the Sith Empire attacked Commenor and dismantled everything that his family had built, that Veiere resurfaced and spent the next year leading an uprising against them to free Commenor of their occupation.

As part of his attempt to atone for his past, to try to make amends with himself and the Force, Veiere would finally return during a period of relative peace over his home-world; Seeing what the Temple could be for the Jedi that he failed, he decided that such a facility was better placed in the hands of the Jedi of the Galaxy, those who would hopefully avoid making the same damning mistakes that he had, and continue to serve the light, and the people of the Galaxy, faithfully.
 
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: ​To re-purpose the former fleet of the failed Dark Jedi Order, for the benefit and use of the Jedi Academy Network and all Jedi Personnel within the Galaxy, in association with The Rannon Jedi Temple.
Image Source: Raider Class Corvette (Deviant Art Link).
Canon Link: Click here.
Restricted Missions: Not Applicable.
Primary Source: Original Submission - Dark Jedi Order Raider Class Assault Cruiser.

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: House Arenais.
Model: Heavy Assault Cruiser.
Affiliation:​
Production: Limited.
Material:

TECHNICAL INFORMATION

Classification: Heavy Assault Cruiser.
Length: 900 Meters.
Width: 400 Meters.
Height: 270 Meters.
Armament: High.
Defenses: Average.
Hangar: Average: 3.
Maneuverability Rating: Low.
Speed Rating: Average.
Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2.

STANDARD FEATURES

Minimum Crew: 4,500.
Optimal Crew: 8,000.
Passengers: 2,000.
Cargo Capacity: 10,000 tonnes.
Consumables: 2 years.
Dedicated Holo-communications suite.
Long Range fleet detection sensors.
Long Range Weapon Targeting Systems.
Navigational Charts and Reconnaissance Systems.
Military Grade Barracks.
​Observation Deck.
Captains Quarters.
Officers Quarters.
Passengers Quarters.
Emergency Hazard Control Systems.
Primary Officer Work Stations.
Escape Pods.
Tractor Beams.

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Not Applicable.

Strengths:
  • Heavy Assault Cruiser - Prioritizing the offensive armament of this class of vessel, the Raiders offensive capabilities outclass all other systems specifications and capabilities.
  • Small Craft Hangar - Housing two assault squadrons and one lambda class troop transport squadron, the Raiders Hangar is ideal for a vessel of her size and armament.
Weaknesses:
  • Slow Maneuverability - A large vessel with adequate speed yet awkward in it's mass costs the Raider Class Assault Cruiser in it's maneuverability.
  • Power Distribution - Priorities are important and bad choices can get you killed, here the captain will need to choose between fire power or speed and defense as the power coursing through this vessel cannot provide maximum output to all three core systems simultaneously, (High speed = Low Fire Power & Vice Versa).

DESCRIPTION

Having cleansed and re-established the Temple of Rannon under the Jedi Academy Network, Veiere Arenais has turned his attention to the former fleet that he had originally commissioned for the use of the Dark Jedi Order, a former dream that was fueled by Veiere's turn to the Dark-Side.

Having been pulled back to reality through the attack of the Sith Empire against Commenor, Veiere's returning faith in the Light and of his former Jedi views were strengthened during some of the hardest months of his life, disconnected from his home-world and his Family, bringing about a rebellion to liberate and fight back against the Dark Lord of the Sith.

Today, with Commenor secure, the former Jedi Master has found need to try to make amends from his previous mistakes and failure to adhere to the Jedi Code. As a means of trying to give back to the Order, he taking all that he created for the Dark Jedi Order, he's now made it his focus to refine and contribute to the rest of the Galaxies Keepers of the peace and Wardens of the Lightside of the Force.

The Raider Class Assault Cruiser has been inspired by it's predecessor of the Galactic Empire's Raider Class Corvette designed and manufactured out of the Kuat Drive Yards. Gyndine Shipyards, thanks to their amicable trade and political standing with the Empire, have since been commissioned to begin work upon a new line of vessels secured under private contract by Veiere Arenais.

The Crew Compliment of the Assault Cruiser ranges from four and a half to eight thousand personnel per any single vessel; a skeleton crew or in other words the least amount of personnel required to operate the vessel can do so though leave her disadvantaged during combatant scenario's and is otherwise ill-advised.

Passengers or personnel not of the vessels direct crew can count up to the maximum number of two thousand. These personnel are often of militaristic nature making use of and being restricted to the Barracks. It's through the troop drop-ships that all personnel are carted aboard, the smaller craft themselves made fit for the fire that often comes with the entrance into hostile territories.

The Raiders Cargo capacity stops at a grand ten thousand metric tonnes and can facilitate the full number of personnel aboard for a full two years, pushing it to two and a half with a skeleton crew and minimal passenger compliment.
 
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Intent: To resubmit the ETA-4 Interceptor, formally of the Dark Jedi Order, now refurbished and in the possession of the Jedi Academy Network as part of the Temple of Rannon's restoration and contribution to the Jedi of the Galaxy.
Image Source: Eta-4 Interceptor.
Canon Link: Not Applicable.
Restricted Missions: Not Applicable.
Primary Source: Starfighter.

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Manufacturer: House Arenais.
Model: ETA-4 Interceptor.
Affiliation:
Production: Limited.
Material: Transparisteel, Titanium, Quadanium reinforced frame.

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Classification: Interceptor.
Length: Moderate 12 meters.
Width: Average 3.5 meters.
Height: Average 7 meters.
Armament: Low.
Defenses: Moderate.
Squadron Count: Moderate.
Maneuverability Rating: High.
Speed Rating: Moderate.
Hyperdrive Class: Low.

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Crew Compliment:
Consumables: One Month.

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Not Applicable.

Strengths:
  • Moderate Defense thanks to High grade Shield deflectors, and thermal countermeasures. The Starfighter has been built to prioritize the defense of the small and typically vulnerable class of craft where it's firepower is considered fairly standard by default.
  • Dogfighters, the best kind of enemy is the ETA-4's own kind. Well capable of putting up a good fight against smaller craft such as interceptors, Starfighters and light transports, these vessels are built for fast and light combat both in space and in the air.
Weaknesses:
  • Low Grade Armaments having prioritized the vessels defense over fire-power, the blaster cannon's and proton torpedo's are nothing unlike what's seen on most other typical Starfighters of the Galaxy.
  • Small and Fragile, like every Starfighter out there, these vessels often come with an extremely limited life expectancy and with good reason. Compared to larger craft, the overall defense even while being prioritized is still capable of being blown out of the sky by corvettes or larger vessels.

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With The Rannon Jedi Temple and the Raider Class Jedi Assault Cruiser now in the hands of the Jedi Academy Network, enabling all Jedi across the Galaxy to travel to and make use of the Temple's facilities and Fleet, the last asset on Veiere's list of tasks was to have the ETA-4 Jedi Interceptors cleaned up and repaired, primed and ready for active field duty once more, this time under the stewardship of the Keepers of the Peace.

The ETA-4 Interceptor is the first class of Starfighters built for the former Dark Jedi Order's personal fleet, with the intention of filling the hangars within the Raider Class Heavy Cruiser for priority defense and taking the war to other smaller vessels.

Given Gyndine's part in the manufacturing of the Raider Class, with every new cruiser produced, the ETA-4 series are stored within their Hangar bays for maintenance and easy transport to the planet of Rannon where they will remain until the need arises that they be used in warfare.
 
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: To make some edits of Commenor's Guerrilla Forces, in order to put them to use in other locations across the Galactic Map, now that Commenor has been restored to it's former Glory. Only edits to the background information are being changed, keeping the equipment/assets as they were in the original submission.
Image Credit: Click Here.
Role: An intervention fighting force to be brought in on People/World's under attack and in need of support.
Links: Commenor - Faction Assets, The Siege of Commenor, Freedom Fighters of Commenor.

GENERAL INFORMATION

Unit Name: Systems Alliance, Peace Keepers.
Affiliation: Commenor, House Arenais.
Classification: Military, Guerrilla Warfare.
Equipment:
Firearms & Melee Armaments:

Explosives:

Weapons Modifications:

Utilities:

Military Attire/Armors:

COMBAT INFORMATION

Availability: Rare.
Deployment: Minor.

Strengths:
  • Strength of Conviction when fighting on their home ground (Commenor).
  • Variety of special forces and soldiers with numerous fields of expertise and experience.
  • Well equipped from the former days of the Commenor Systems Alliance.
  • Guerrilla warfare.
Weaknesses:
  • Non-Force Users.
  • Peace Keeping Assets are sent out from the World of Commenor on request, and may take time to reach their destination depending on it's location upon the Galactic Map.
  • An Intervention Force who's role is to bring peace to conflict zones and ensure civilian life is kept from harm as best as possible. This is a responsive group, not meant for the attacking of other nations or peoples.
Description:

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HOUSE ARENAIS JEDI APPAREL

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a set of Jedi Apparel for the Members of House Arenais, the Royal Family of Commenor, to commemorate the joining of their home-world and the Silver Jedi Order.
  • Image Source: Not Applicable.
  • Canon Link: Not Applicable.
  • Primary Source: Jedi Apparel.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: House Arenais, [member=Veiere Arenais].
  • Affiliation: House Arenais.
  • Model: Not Applicable.
  • Modularity: Yes, there are various pieces which can be swapped, replaced or repaired such as gloves, boots, robes, leggings and tunic.

  • Production: Semi-Unique.
  • Material: Fiber, Plasteel plating, Faraday Cage Underlay.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Apparel.
  • Weight: Light.
  • Resistances: Average.
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): Average.
- Kinetic: Average.
- Lightsabers: None.
- Slugthrowers: Low.
- EMP/ION/Energy Displacement: High.

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Faraday Cage Underlay: Beneath the tunic, the wearer dons a body-tight set of leggings and coveralls for the torso and arms. This fiber covers the makings of a Faraday Cage which is designed in order to nullify any electrical or energy discharge. This has been added to the over-all apparel with the likelihood of coming across the ability known as "Force Lightning".
  • Plasteel Guards: Special Plating has been fitted for the legs (from ankles to the knees), Torso (chest and back), and shoulders. While Plasteel is not resistant to the blows of Lightsabers it does offer some protection against Kinetic Force, as well as Blaster-fire.
  • Utility Belt: For the safe-keeping of Lightsabers via magna-locks, as well as leather satchels/bags which can be secured to the belt for extra carrying capacity.
  • Bandolier: Similar to the Utility belt though fit to be slung across the chest from shoulder to side, the Bandolier has been designed with smaller square shaped satchels to carry items such as Ammunition, Medical Stims and other such smaller equipment one might need out in the field.
  • Ear-Comlink: An earpiece meant for the easier communication across numerous channels, this little handy device has all the same functions as your typical Comlink, yet is hands-free!
  • Reconnaissance Gauntlet (Left hand): A handy little tool and easy to carry. The Alpha-One Gauntlet is perfect for one's exploring needs, whether tactical or simply taking a stroll. This device is programmed for medical and physical self-diagnostics, territory mapping and motion detection as well as advanced holo-communications support.
  • Symbols of Hope: Upon the shoulders are the crests of the Silver Jedi Order and of Commenor, representing the union of the two peoples.
STRENGTHS:
  • This Attire carries an Average Resistance towards Blaster-fire and Kinetic damages thanks to the addition of the Plasteel Guards covering the persons legs, shoulders and protecting their vital organs (Torso - front & back).
  • Thanks to the application of the Faraday Cage, attacks such as Force Lightning, ION blasts and most other energy displacement damages are nullified.
  • Being a lightweight attire, this apparel allows for swift and ease of movement on the battlefield. It also appears casual enough to not stand out within a crowded room of fellow Jedi.
WEAKNESSES:
  • Lightweight and Vulnerable compared to most larger or dense materials used on other armors. This apparel carries no resistance to explosive damages and low resistance to Slugthrowers.
  • There are obvious points of vulnerability where there is no plasteel plating (Thighs and forearms). This apparel also does not include headgear and protection of the neck is slim to none.
  • The Reconnaissance Gauntlet and the Ear-Comlink aren't protected via the Faraday Cage underlay and is thus susceptible to Ion based attacks that could hinder the wearers ability to map out the terrain or call for reinforcements.
DESCRIPTION

Though not every member of the family are necessarily members of the Silver Jedi Order, Veiere Arenais has seen fit to create a series of Jedi Apparel for them all, in commemoration with the World of Commenor's joining the Order of the Silver Jedi. One half Jedi, the other half befitting of tactical apparel, those that would be wearing the outfit would be distinguishable from other Jedi, though not alarmingly so as to be considered outside of the Order's typical nature.

Like many a Solder or headstrong Rebel, the shoulders on this outfit display the symbols of both the Silver Jedi and of Commenor, rather than House Arenais itself. These logo's aren't made of anything special, though the sentimentality behind them is that they stand for hope in a future of cooperation, unity and peace for their people; as well as the will to fight for peace for those outside of their territories who are still being oppressed by the Darker Force's of the Galaxy.

The Tunic's come in either white or tan colors, the leggings to match. The belt and Bandolier's are a dark brown leather similar to the boots and gloves. The Plasteel Guards are all white to give the plating a bit more shine and stand out from the rest of the outfit, and finally the Hooded Robe's come in a choice of three colors, black, dark brown or white to give a good contrast to the rest of the apparel.

Thanks to the connections and financial status of House Arenais, the materials used are all of superior quality, however the attire has been kitted out for ease of movement and hasn't used any overly excessive of significantly costly materials compared to the likes of Phrik or other such examples. This is as much for formal representation as it is for use in the field and offers a fine blend of both worlds, carrying a statement in what it stands for, wherever one goes.
 
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create new set of Jedi Apparel for Veiere Arenais.
  • Image Source: Click Here.
  • Canon Link: Not Applicable.
  • Primary Source: Jedi Apparel.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: House Arenais, Veiere Arenais.
  • Affiliation: [member=Veiere Arenais].
  • Model: Not Applicable.
  • Modularity: Yes, there are various pieces which can be swapped, replaced or repaired such as gloves, boots, robes, leggings and tunic.

  • Production: Unique.
  • Material: Fiber, Faraday Cage Underlay.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Apparel.
  • Weight: Light.
  • Resistances: Low.
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): None.
- Kinetic: None.
- Lightsabers: None.
- Slugthrowers: None.
- EMP/ION/Energy Displacement: High.

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Faraday Cage: Technology that's designed to negate the discharge of energies and protect the wearer from being immobilized or coming to harm.
STRENGTHS:
  • Force Imbued Apparel: Strengthens the wearers affinity to the Light-side of the Force, further empowering their ability to counter the Dark-side of the Force.
  • Lightweight: Capitalizes on maneuverability, making it easier to scale the environment or strike harder and faster than one would in medium to heavy battle attires.
WEAKNESSES:
  • Minimal Defense: As the attire is mostly made up of fabrics, the robes can easily be pierced by melee or ranged weapons, inflicting serious or fatal injury.
  • Not so Subtle: Given the color tones of this attire, there is little chance for the wearer to avoid being seen whilst hiding from their pursuers, thanks to how much the clothing stands out in a crowd.
DESCRIPTION

Feeling proud to be able to rejoin the ranks of the Jedi (The Silver Jedi Order), Veiere has created yet another set of Jedi Apparel in order to replace his previous set that he wore within his time in exile. Now, while working towards his redemption, the pale toned Jedi Robes carry great sentimental value and in his mind, signify the turning point of his life, as well as over-coming some of the worst years in his recent life.

Produced of mostly fabrics, the only exceptions are the leather boots and gloves, as well as the Faraday Cage Underlay which has been included to avoid being immobilized from a stun blast. The cloak is only slightly darker than the tunic and leggings, but is far larger and drapes around his figure. Beneath the cloak however are custom fitted robes meant for the freedom of movement out in the field.

Created in the early days of his joining the Silver Jedi Order, Veiere Arenais will be often seen wearing this attire both within and outside of the Silver Rest.
 

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