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Vader-Class Star Destroyer

Darth Vulcanus

Better than other-other space Kaiden
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Vader-Class Star Destroyer
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Out of Character Information

Production Information
  • Manufacturer: Sienar fleet systems
  • Model: Vader-Class Star Destroyer
  • Affiliation: The New Order
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Mass-Produced
  • Materials: Qundranium, Titanium, Transparisteel, Durasteel
Technical Specifications
  • Classification: Balanced
  • Role: Destroyer
  • Height: 225 meters
  • Width: 550
  • Length: 1,650 meters
  • Power Core: Ionization Reactor
  • Primary Hyperdrive: Class 1
  • Backup Hyperdrive: Class 9.5
  • Minimum Crew: 7,500
  • Optimal Crew: 28,000
  • Passenger Capacity: 26,000
  • Cargo Capacity: 35,000 metric tons
  • Consumables: 7 years
  • Sublight speed: 8

Armaments
  • Hypervelocity guns (10) [100 capital guns]
  • Long Range Turbo battery (10) [200 capital guns]
  • Long Range Ion battery (5) [100 capital guns]
  • Deck Gun Batteries (10) [80 capital guns]
  • Heavy turbolaser batteries (10) [80 capital guns]
  • Heavy Ion cannon batteries (5) [40 capital guns]
  • Heavy plasma torpedo launchers (4) [16 warhead launchers]
  • Intruder missile launchers (6) [24 warhead launchers]
  • Assault Concussion missile launchers (4) [16 warhead launchers]
  • Cluster missile launchers (4) [16 warhead launchers]
  • Proton Torpedo launchers (12) [12 warheads]
  • Heavy Laser Flak Batteries (10) [40 defensive guns]
  • Heavy Traditional Flak Guns (15) [30 defensive guns]
  • Heavy Quad Laser guns (10) [20 defensive guns]
  • Point Defense Laser System (10) [10 defensive guns]

Hangar
  • 36 TIE series starfighters or equivalent
  • 36 Galaxy-bombers or equivalent
  • 36 Hades-Class Gunships or equivalent
Non-Combative Attachments

  • Advanced Shield Generator Systems
  • Advanced Targeting Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Detention Cells
  • HoloNet Transceiver
  • Encryption Network
  • Escape Pods
Description

The Vader-Class Star Destroyer is the first Star Destroyer to be created from a fresh design of the New Order's own creation. The name pays homage to the Dark Lord who brought about the destruction of the Jedi Order during the time of the Galactic Empire, the only successful Sith Empire in Vulcanus's mind. The Vader-Class was designed under oversight of ex-Sith Empire scientists and ship builders who moved the project to the Bosph factories. A crude prototype was built and shown to a Sienar Fleet systems representative who agreed to build the ship for the New Order, using Bosph factories for secrecy.

The outcome of the production was a star destroyer that is capable of competing with the newest technologies of rest of the galaxy while not suffering the limitations of production that a command ship would cost. Meant to be perfect for total war situations, the Vader-Class will be one of the main ships used in the New Order fleet. The ship was made to face off against many types of vessels and be a proficient combatant for all situations.
 
Okay, several things need going over real quick. I'd like a bit more description about the ship and how it performs, maybe something about the advanced shields.

  • Deck guns have a base modifier of 2 meaning that your 10 heavy deck gun batteries should count for 160 guns, not 80.
  • Intruder missiles don't have a heavy variant, they are base Heavy missiles like the assault concussion missile.
  • likewise assault missiles do not have a heavy variant.
  • Advanced missiles carry a x2 modifier (I go this with this myself sadly)
  • Laser flack doesn't exist as the gun fires an explosive shell which then scatters shrapnel. Lasers can't do this.
I also don't see a reason why you're carrying other faction's ships in your hanger. The Galaxy bomber maybe, but you certainty don't have access to the Hades Gunship as you're hostile to the Fringe and I certainly haven't sold any to the New Order. Further more installing a gravity well usually comes at the expense of either weapons or hanger space as they are quite large and have a signifigant power draw.

You will also have to find another company to manufacture this ship, a tier two company simply doesn't have the resources to mass-produce a star destroyer.

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Darth Vulcanus

Better than other-other space Kaiden
[member="Domino"]

I've fixed most the issues, all that is left is the description. Also, it seems that the "laser flak" page that used to be on the wookiee has since been deleted. Laser flak was, at one time, listed as a unstable plasma projectile that broke out of its containment field during flight and exploded into small shards of laser shrapnel.
 
Your advanced cluster missiles carry a x8 modifier, if you'd like to use laser flack for whatever reason you're free to make a tech sub for it. The hanger issues still need fixing as well. And why does this have a 9.5 backup hyperdrive?
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Darth Vulcanus

Better than other-other space Kaiden
[member="Domino"]

The hanger ships used to be of Fel design and not originally Fringe (I know this because I created them). During Kaine's assassination of my alt, Ronin Fel, he stole the designs from Ronin's secure computer and gave them to the New Order.


As for the backup drive here is a excerpt from the ship building guidelines


Hyperdrive
The lower the number, the faster the hyperdrive. Standard civilian hyperdrives are Class 2.0 or Class 3.0, while military technology typically employs Class 1.0. Backup Hyperdrives are permitted on ships exceeding thirty (30) meters.

I put it as 9.5 because I figured it wouldn't be as fast as the normal drive.
 
The higher the number the slower it is.
And II'll want the thread where you stole the plans, if it's a long one please link the exact post.
Furthermore there's that situation with the Order's shipyard dev thread but hopefully that'll be sorted by the time we're done here.
Still waiting on a tech sub for laser flack and I think you may be over on your missile launcher count, might want to check that again.
Has the owner if SFS agreed to make this hip for the sith? [member="Jared Ovmar"]
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Darth Vulcanus

Better than other-other space Kaiden
[member="Domino"]

The Dev thread at the top of the sub is actually the shipyard dev that was requested from Ayden.

Here is the thread where we stole the data.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/26379-the-end-of-a-dynasty-ronin-fel/

Opening post is where he did it, I believe.

One of my members took the liberty of subing the laser flak for me, so that should be approved shortly. And unless he changed his mind, yes we have Jared's permission :)
 
Still waiting on the word that your shipyard thread is acceptable, apparently edits or a new one was requested due to the many one/two line posts rendering it unacceptable for a development thread.

As for when you stole the blue prints, the first post had Vronskr land, infiltrate, and begin stealing that data, his second one had him auto-complete the process before anyone could possibly stop him. This is called powergaming and is heavenly discouraged here. While this alone would be enough to disqualify it, the thread is incomplete, Vronskr auto-kills another PC without it being acknowledged, and he is for the One Sith, not The New Order according to his tags. As such I'm ruling that your faction does not have access to Fel/Fringe technology and information.
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Please recheck my previous posts for other questions still needing answers as well as disseminated information requiring edits in the submission.
 

Darth Vulcanus

Better than other-other space Kaiden
[member="Domino"]

As i play Ronin Fel and gave him permission for both things and simply have not had the rp time to reply to that thread, i request that you reconsider that judgment. Also, this shipyard thread provided is not the same one that I was told to do over. That IS the redo.
 
After re-reading every post of your dev thread I still don't like it but it's something for the RPJ's not just myself to accept. As for your use of the Hades, as I said, Vronskr is in a seprate sith faction from this one meaning you still do not have access to it. Moving on to the ship itself.

  • Set back up hyperdrive to ten or higher.
  • You are 4 over on your launcher count.
  • You are 40 over on your defensive guns due to not using the x2 multiplier on your heavy flack lasers.
  • I'd highly recommend you reduce your passenger capacity by 16,000+ as you lack any means of off loading them such as drop ships or the like. An IDS-II only carried 9,700 passengers and I can't see why you'd have more than double that with a longer cruising time and no planetary invasion support stuff on the ship.
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