Tyranus, feedback

[Tyranus]

So, do you hate Tyranus or do you like him. if so why do you like him or hate him, do you have a specific reason or do you just like him for heck's sake. Also what could I improve on him and do you like his back story?

Feedback and critique is appreciated.

 

[RC 212]

[member="Tyranus Collik"]

I Personally like your back story and would like to see more of that come to the fore. Also I would like to see you develop a specialization in a force power or category.

Jack of all trades is aright, but specializing is fun and adds depth to a character.

You are a loyal RPer and I honestly enjoy your posts, just add more depth. Remember show don’t tell. Five senses, touch, taste, smell, sight, hearing.

Add two or more to each post to add depth.

 

[Tyranus]

[member="Vassara Raxis"]
Thanks and got it, thanks for the feedback

 

[Werdla Dardalab]

[member="Tyranus Collik"]

Aaaaaaye! Fist bump, my mando bro!

I see you updated your profile which was good, because the suddenly Mandalorian threw me for a loop when it wasn't in your profile, I was like, Fett, what? But I like the story possibilities it opened up!

I really like in your posts that you take damage in fights. So many people don't, makes for so much better RPing!

 

[Tyranus]

[member="Werdla Dardalab"]
Thanks and hopefully we can rp together again

Mano Fist bump

 

[Ombo]

first: your title should be there, not their. That kinda bothers me whenever I see it
second: the fett descendant thing doesn't work for me. Just as if someone said they were descended from luke, han, or even Admiral Akbar. linking to a canon family is not really the best idea imo.

Also try to keep your character in one piece. You must be 70% robot by now

 

[Tyranus]

[member="Ombo"]
Will at least I wasn't a descendant from Anakin, but I see what you mean I did it because I'm most familiar with it. Nope not yet, only his left arm and recently his left foot so roughly 38.6% robot but that will change soon.